Great job on the translation!
Frostia is among my all-time fave H-Game and I was always bummed that this didn't get an official EN release like Lyristea did (likely because the design of the main heroine feelt more "risky") so I had to make do with shoddy live machine-translation. It did get the job done and told me what what happening, but your translation actually carries the meaning and emotion across way better!
So, thanks a lot!