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Others None [Translation Request] [TyranoBuilder] How Yuzuki Made Me Submit [Doskoinpo (Atelier Maso)]
- Thread starter lollers6969
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I've made an edited machine translation for this little vn.
I used Sugoi levi for the base translation then went over the whole thing to make it make sense.
What to expect
- Subject verb agreement. No references to "him grabbing her penis"
- Readable text written by someone who speaks english
- Text should display properly. Lines shouldn't get cut off or throw up errors
- More save slots. The base game had 5 save slots, which is fewer than the number of scenes. Given the gallery is cgs only, I added a bunch of slots so that you could have a save before each scene for viewing purposes.
What not to expect
- Quality sound effect translations. There are a lot of lines of onomatopoeia and unvoiced screeches from the man. I considered those pretty uninteresting and annoying to translate, so most of those lines are untouched from the original machine translation.
- High quality prose. I wasn't working with Shakespeare to begin with, and I don't know any japanese, so there are definitely places where trying to match what the author wrote meant that the text is a bit stiff.
- The names of the speaker to be translated. Translator++ couldn't find them, so untranslated they remain.
- This Vn to pass a rule 7 check. You can try it, but even ignoring the fact that Doskoinpo's imp game failed the check, Yuzuki is explicitly referred to as a middle schooler multiple times, and there's a random shota scene in there as well.
If anyone sees any major issues with the translation or bugs, I can put out an update and if anyone wants to spend time on the onomatopoeia I can provide the translator++ project as well.
*Delete your saves before applying the translation. The game will throw up an error on start if you don't*
I used Sugoi levi for the base translation then went over the whole thing to make it make sense.
What to expect
- Subject verb agreement. No references to "him grabbing her penis"
- Readable text written by someone who speaks english
- Text should display properly. Lines shouldn't get cut off or throw up errors
- More save slots. The base game had 5 save slots, which is fewer than the number of scenes. Given the gallery is cgs only, I added a bunch of slots so that you could have a save before each scene for viewing purposes.
What not to expect
- Quality sound effect translations. There are a lot of lines of onomatopoeia and unvoiced screeches from the man. I considered those pretty uninteresting and annoying to translate, so most of those lines are untouched from the original machine translation.
- High quality prose. I wasn't working with Shakespeare to begin with, and I don't know any japanese, so there are definitely places where trying to match what the author wrote meant that the text is a bit stiff.
- The names of the speaker to be translated. Translator++ couldn't find them, so untranslated they remain.
- This Vn to pass a rule 7 check. You can try it, but even ignoring the fact that Doskoinpo's imp game failed the check, Yuzuki is explicitly referred to as a middle schooler multiple times, and there's a random shota scene in there as well.
If anyone sees any major issues with the translation or bugs, I can put out an update and if anyone wants to spend time on the onomatopoeia I can provide the translator++ project as well.
*Delete your saves before applying the translation. The game will throw up an error on start if you don't*
- Feb 11, 2019
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thehungryLurker, thank you for the translation!
Can't wait to try it, but where do we put the data folder, and does anything need to be overwritten?
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Ah, I completely forgot that the game isn't extracted by default.
Rather than making everyone deal with the extraction process, here's a copy of the patched game.
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I'll take a bit of time to get all the names translated and see about some of the onomatopoeia. Thanks for doing the hard parts.
Also, from what I remember, this game was more broken than the imp game, so I'll see about fixing that but I could be wrong.
Edit: yeah there's some stuff I need to fix, if anybody finds something feel free to post the issue in the thread and I'll get around to it at some point
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Okay so I've been trying to fix the menu issues (returning to menu from cg mode keeps the buttons on the screen and they're functional, probably more too that I haven't found) and it's a mess. I'm trying to interpret what stuff means by reading a txt file. I give up. I've been defeated. But hey, the names are translated now so here's that.
There's other issues with the text in the actual scenes, but I don't have time right now to go through all of them and find the problems. Maybe some other time. Again, thanks to thehungryLurker for translating everything so I didn't have to.
Here it is:
There's other issues with the text in the actual scenes, but I don't have time right now to go through all of them and find the problems. Maybe some other time. Again, thanks to thehungryLurker for translating everything so I didn't have to.
Here it is:
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Thanks, this looks pretty solid. Really like the domination in this game
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Really sorry if this is a dumb question, but can someone help me open this link? The site name is a bunch of asterisks for me, and I've tried replacing them with the usual upload sites I can think of, but none of them work. Sorry again.
I can just send you the file later if you want, I'm busy right now.
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