This is possibly one of the finest HTML, text based games i've seen.
I will give a brief list of pros and cons regarding it.
Pros:
-Nice sketchy artwork
-really immersive, top tier writing and plot
-Updating at a normal monthly pace
Cons:
-Progress is really confusing on the 1st chapter and the dialogues could get very repetitive, along with everything, which if you dont figure out how to progress, will keep you doing the same thing forever.
-In chapter 2 you could easily get lost in a circle of trying to balance out stats and it will basically make you restart or quit the chapter pretty quick.
-Artwork appears rarely, but judging by the HTML platform games ive seen, it has more art than most of these games
-The game is not pretty complex overall but it could really be much simpler and easier to flow.
My, meager suggestions, in case anyone bothers to read:
1: Increase presence of artwork throughout the game, and also improve quality of sketches a bit, i knew a guy when i was 12, who could draw all the art of this game in 1 days worth of skipping class
and its been over a decade..
2: Rewrite the 1st chapter from scratch or, somehow find a way to decrease the grind and repetitiveness in it, in order for it to be less confusing.
3. This game could really go big if there are more drawn sex scenes and a more cohesive plot with a little bit smaller dialogues, and getting to the point a bit faster when there's events of little importance, such as nightmares and etc..
4. Domination and transformation themes take the game many steps ahead, so focusing further on those could also make it more intriguing to the players.
5. Increasing the variety of body modification and transformation is key, but also decorating the game further, adding more backgrounds everywhere in all the scenes will level this game up an provide a better,mature image on it.
So that's it, keep up the nice work, hope to see you go way further