VN Ren'Py (Trap in the Cartoon World) WIP of Character, need comment

[Schifty]

Hi guy,

i'm starting my very first project on Renpy, its very very early, i've done my first character ''Lois Griffin''. The story line isnt choosen yet, but i will mix lot of comics girls. (btw, if you can tell me some idea, lets go ).

I will plan lots of animation too with the game, wont be simply static 2d images.

Lois will be the only with full nude preview, but i want your feedback about the render of her naked body. What you think i should do or correct. The only thing i will keep, its the real physic, i mean i wont put huge boob to a character when on the real show, she had a small pair.

So here the image



More feedback, more i will improve on the way you will like it

 

[Xanado]

She has 2 left feet.

 

[Schifty]

ahah yeah right will correct that on my break down of each part of the body for the animation

 

[Schifty]

Here Meg... dont worry if she had no hand or feet, this one body part are split and hand and feet design aren't done

 

[Schifty]

Hayley Smith

 

[IdontHaveTimeForThis]

doesn't need to be huge boobs but maybe slightly bigger? Anyway looks good and I hope you're still working, about time someone decided to make a game with these characters

 

[dqbach1606`]

any update ?