Others - Abandoned - Treat Me Like The Slut I Am [v0.2dBeta2] [Hentai&Hentai] [UPDATED+Fixed]

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.2dBeta2...

Originally Reviewed on 12/12/2017

This visual novel/game is extremely disturbing... It is very much a heavy set woman fetish porn story, with very little of an actual plot other than a horny heavy set mom who is constantly thinking sex...

The visuals were ok, but not great... Some of the muscled men looked very artificial, and some looked somewhat natural... The backdrops are on the same level as the characters, being average in quality... If you are into very heavy set women, then the visuals of this novel are right up your alley... I personally don't care for it...

The script is absolutely chopped full of all sorts of profanity and name calling... The plot is very basic; a heavy set mom who flaunts her body regardless who it is, she thinks about sex at all times, and absolutely every male character she runs into thinks she's hotter than toasted bread... There is even a scene where she practically dares a muscle bound man to rape her because she wants to have sex, and in her mind rape means she isn't cheating on her husband... All while her son watches from a short distance away, which she apparently gets even more turned on over it... The story is absolutely ridiculous and far fetched... With so much profanity being flung, it just makes you want to skip the dialogue even that much more... I found myself space baring through it after a while, because it seemed to never end... Not sure if the authors were trying to be funny with the script, or if it's just a fetish thing they thought would be creative and different...

I personally was a bit disgusted by this visual novel, and wish I could erase it from my memory... The story and dialogue was so unbelievably horrid, that I just had to stop going through it... I don't mind that some people will find this sorta of fetish story entertaining, but the dialogue went way overboard on the profanity and name calling, and the characters were not believable at all... Almost felt like the author/s were purposefully trying to offend the readers... I don't recommend this one to anyone, not even people with the fetish this VN is intended to entertain...

review:

art 8/10: the art looks "simple" but it really well made and if you look closer it remind me a little bit of dreaming of dana. the posing is good but sometimes it looks a little "stiff" like clothes dummy. BBW main character is a bold move that i hope it will pay off. As a little note, It would be a lot better with animations

Story 7/10: The story is interesting enough to make me read the whole thing. kinda feels like a "big sausage pizza movie" but it's porn and it doesn't have to make sense, must be entertaining and fappable and it does it. The story is all there tho: a wife as weird dreams about fixing the city to some high moral ground, but she has a twisted mind ,morals and conduct and, for our joy, everything will turn into a fuck fest thanks to a "magical girl".
Some writing errors here and there that makes you cringe (a apple, an bike, an dick) but i'm not a native speaking so they don't bother me as much.

overall 8/10: i have to admit that this Visual Novel ( it's not a game & you can't choose nothing for now, just click to advance and save) it's really up my alley (cheating, "corruption", "ntr", voyeur, blackmail) so maybe I've exaggerated with the vote but who cares? I Love it and had a nice fap. I will definitely follow it.

I don't know what I should be more upset about:
The fact that the most important tags, BBW and NTR, aren't mentioned, the misleading title picture or the fact that this is a slideshow with way too much unnecessary dialogue and not a single choice.

Long story short: This tale is about a tubby housewife that fucks everybody in town because of reasons.
Even if you're into that this game will likely do a poor job in satisfying you.
There's barely any pacing or build-up, nothing that makes the player curious, It's all there without you doing anything but hitting the space bar.
I almost want to suggest an adult erotica site where you post stories, but the dialogues in this "game" are cringe-worthy and the story of the uptight housewife that suddenly turns slut makes no sense.