VN Tribulation [Development Thread]

Arctos

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Hey!

Been lurking these forums for about three years now and got myself completely hooked on visual novels and such.
Some of my favorite games are Milfy City, Big Brother, Being a DIK and Acting Lessons.

For a long time I've had a lot of ideas for a game, the setting, characters, plot and everything but it all seemed too complicated for me to do.
But now I've finally decided to give it a shot and develop my own game.

This thread is meant for you to give me feedback and pointers on how the project is going and for me to kinda keep a journal of my journey through game development.

I've decided to go with TyranoBuilder (at least for now) and the renders will be done with VAM.


Key points of my game:

Grammar:
I'm not a native English speaker but I'm still kind of grammar nazi when it comes to written text.
So one of my goals is to give the player an understandable, desirably better than average narrative and story telling.

Identification:
I aim for the game to have at least some kind of realism when it comes to sex and other lewd stuff. And to include those tiny details and actions some of us might do in real life.
So the goal is for all the scenes to be plausible.

Plot:
The story revolves around a drooping marriage and is portrayed from the husbands point of view.
Sexually the marriage has gone downhill for a long time. There is still mutual love but career-life has drained every last drop of romance from the relationship.
One day a girl named Anna enters their lives and everything starts to change.
Anna awakens deep desires in the husband and reminds the wife what it was like when she was young and vigorous.

Sexual content:
The game will cater for various fetishes, hopefully some that are common IRL but less portrayed in games or other media.
There will be story build-up before actual sex. Some fetishes deliver lewd scenes before actual sex.

Game style:
Kinetic novel. Choices won't have huge consequences on the story.
Slower than average progression towards actual sex scenes.

Characters:
Husband
Wife
Anna
Secretary (planned)
Courier (planned)
Step-daughter (planned)

Development:
I did a short demo with TyranoBuilder just to see whats it like. The demo turned out to be just fine but there's still a lot to learn.
All the renders for the first scene of the actual game are ready, the script is almost done.
No different paths yet. (Planned)

Scene 1 and 2 are "ready".
Meaning they can be played through but there's no choices or different paths added yet.

Scene 3 renders are ready.



Request:
I'm open for feedback.
What do you think of the characters?
How about the plot and setting?
What do you think about the slower progression towards sex? Or do you prefer "Hey waiter, thanks for the coffee. Now lets go to the restroom and fuck" as long as there is renders for that?


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