VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Trip to Parpellos [v0.9] [MrPinkCookie]

I did'nt like it vey much, the animations are good and so are the 3D models, but...
I didn't enjoy reading it, I have played tons of VN but the dialogues here hurt my brain... There's no better way to describe it, and they are not ... bad, it's just... too badly written to belive a person could talk liek that too well written to make me think, huh, the dev din't care about it, i'm just going to ignore the dialogues. In the end i just watched the animated scenes, if you are on pc, you don't need to doenload anything justo go to the game folder and look for them.

This deserves 3 stars but that is maximum. The graphics is quite good and the renders also. The characters look overall attractive. The story is bellow average. The amount of content is pretty small. This game would need much more content and better story.

This game is weird but i still think it deserves 3 starts for trying.

The story, overall, is even quite plausible. There is a guy who takes a long weekend at the beach in low season. And since he is the only human being with a penis around who is not some girl's retard sibling, he menaged to bang all the horny girls who are still on the beach as well.

Yet... everything feels so weird.

MC is every woman's dream man. He's short, scrawny, weeny and he looks like 12 old at best. Good for him he has the standard issue huge penis of every MC.

The dialogs are... i don't even know... who speaks like that?

The sex is so out of the blue. For some character it would also work, but for others, like the girl who say 'no' to everyone because she wants the price charming, well... she gets MC prick in her mouth in 0 time.

There is a bona fide psycho on the beach. Good thing she becomes everyone's best friend when MC get cought fucking behind the back or every single girl of the story, but hey! It's ok! Because he says he loves them all.

And the Oscar the the best original story goes too...

It's a quick little porn game. The choices are pretty straight forward and it's not that difficult to get all the endings. Girls are hot, the animations are good. The story is not super complex but you're not playing this game for it's story. This isn't Our Red String or Being a Dik but its a nice little porn romp as long as you don't think too much into it

Review for Trip to Parpellos v0.9 [Completed]

Summary: Don't bother.

Story: 2/5 - A porn game doesn't need a good story, but this story is all over the place and makes little sense. It's like the author had a few ideas he wanted to use but just couldn't figure out a good way fit them together into the same story.

Writing: 2/5 - Spelling, grammar, punctuation, you name it, it's often wrong. It's not as distracting as a lot of games, though. The dialogues are often cringy, too.

Renders: 3/5 - I'd like to rate this higher as the models are beautiful in some scenes. Unfortunately, they are frequentlly distorted and it's distracting.

Animations: 3/5 - Not terrible, but not natural, either.

Lewd Scenes: 2/5 - This is where the game should excel but instead falls flat on its face. The scenes are just not very erotic. The game just throws the player into a scene and then allows them to choose the next action. The very first scene I encounter, the MC kissed the girl and the next screen the choices where blowjob, sex, or cum, so players could just pick cum and get it over with, and honestly, they could've saved time by doing so.

Gameplay: 2/5 - The game is short, but it seems to be designed for replayability. Unfortunately, most of the choices have no effect or feedback right after the player makes the choice, but those choices seem to have far-reaching consequences later in the game. That just means it's all guesswork. That type of gameplay is really boring to me.

This was...rough. Very very rough. Not sure if the author is native speaker of the English language or what.

It seemed interesting at first, just devolved down into YOU DO THIS, YOU DO THAT, RUN AWAY...etc..

Felt like a someone around age range of 13-15 wrote this, that's fine. Kudos on you for putting in effort, but perhaps get some folks to help you out or something.

Cuz this was very very rough.

Checked it out because it was available to all Patrons.

Story is a little all over the place since English is a second language for Developer, I think.

Animations are nice and there are a decent amount of them.

I think 3.5 would be fair but I will round up to 4 because of the price and
the dialog if you accuse Caroline in the end is hilarious, although wrong.