Ren'Py True DeDICKtive [v0.2] [Bao Cat Studio]

[sexypeanut]

Played the update.

I liked how May changed from just being his 'quasi-mom' to be his fuck friend while keeping some mommy feelings. The dialogue showed the transition well. May in a swimsuit (and out of it) is sexy af! She reminds me a bit of Nancy from Eternum (in both looks and demeanor). The music was nice, too.
However... how is April not aware of what's going on? It's not like May is holding back her moans

What I didn't like was the "wait for more clues" journal tip and nothing I did help with that. I went to the library girl; she asks for May's autograph, but that dialogue option never shows up with May. No other character advances May's line or has some link to her until later in the update (both April and Emma). Clicking on her newest painting didn't do anything of the sort as well.
If all I had to do was to sleep and talk to May at some time of the day, please be clearer about that in the journal - like "wait for a few days and talk to May" or something like that.

 

[SirLANsalot]

Game has good potential, good x-ray views!
Pregnancy planned? At least it seems like that could be an option down the road, childhood friends included.
Will keep an eye on this one.

 

[somebodynobody]

Talking to girl in Library

ScriptError: could not find label 'sophiarandomtalk1'.

A few conversations being a choice you make but is the other person asking is weird.

Having the book have all the characters shown before you meet them is an odd decision.

The meeting with pam and looking for pen is odd the MC doesn't mention the coffee mug of writing utensils.

"Please have a sit" maybe "a seat" or "Please sit down"

Gazeebo area at dark has MC talk about people on the dock he can't see.

Places that you can go should have an outline to stand out from the background

The go back symbol in the backpack should be more highlighted.

I would say places should be blocked off until you need or have been to a place, like the library you can go before Misty mentions it.

The job choice on sophia doesn't go away after you mention it.

May is both sleeping on the couch and in her art room

It is weird that when the school opens up the MC doesn't ask about Aline. I think the scene for the school and trying to get in should auto play then the conversations.

Game needs a once over with spelling and grammar.

Wolf door opening should be creak

"I'm sorry sorry I saw you naked"

having the silhouette of the girl outside the school should probably be hidden when MC is going in and out at night.

When MC took the photos from Steven's desk it should really have a place for player to look at them.

finishing talking to chad at the field auto kicks you to the school

People probably would appreciate continuation between scenes, like where MC cums still having it if they get interrupted etc. Like cumming on her face from Boobjob and then seeing Ethans.

I would suggest two things a turn off of x-ray if people don't want to see it, and secondly a dealing with the cum, like panties to hold it in, wiping off etc.

Game needs a gallery or scene replayer.

Needs in the book a note on all may content is scene and an end of content screen for Aline. Probably also a sex scene counter just so players know they saw everything.

 

[BaoCat]

Talking to girl in Library

ScriptError: could not find label 'sophiarandomtalk1'.

A few conversations being a choice you make but is the other person asking is weird.

Having the book have all the characters shown before you meet them is an odd decision.

The meeting with pam and looking for pen is odd the MC doesn't mention the coffee mug of writing utensils.

"Please have a sit" maybe "a seat" or "Please sit down"

Gazeebo area at dark has MC talk about people on the dock he can't see.

Places that you can go should have an outline to stand out from the background

The go back symbol in the backpack should be more highlighted.

I would say places should be blocked off until you need or have been to a place, like the library you can go before Misty mentions it.

The job choice on sophia doesn't go away after you mention it.

May is both sleeping on the couch and in her art room

It is weird that when the school opens up the MC doesn't ask about Aline. I think the scene for the school and trying to get in should auto play then the conversations.

Game needs a once over with spelling and grammar.

Wolf door opening should be creak

"I'm sorry sorry I saw you naked"

having the silhouette of the girl outside the school should probably be hidden when MC is going in and out at night.

When MC took the photos from Steven's desk it should really have a place for player to look at them.

finishing talking to chad at the field auto kicks you to the school

People probably would appreciate continuation between scenes, like where MC cums still having it if they get interrupted etc. Like cumming on her face from Boobjob and then seeing Ethans.

I would suggest two things a turn off of x-ray if people don't want to see it, and secondly a dealing with the cum, like panties to hold it in, wiping off etc.

Game needs a gallery or scene replayer.

Needs in the book a note on all may content is scene and an end of content screen for Aline. Probably also a sex scene counter just so players know they saw everything.

Well, well, well. Looks like you're the detective we needed all along!
But seriously, thank you so much for these. I'll have most of them fix by the next patch!

 

[jvdw92]

Walkthrough please or video I'm stuck in waiting for the lady who "killed her husband " it's wait for a few days I did and it keeps saying that