HTML - Truecalling-rework [v0.69] [Luna Production]

Really like the concept of this game, and a lot of the fetishes that it covers, but it falls down in the execution, which is a shame. Really want this game to be good, but for now I can only rate three stars. Hopefully it improves, as it's still early days for this one.

Pros:
-Choice between character personalities is good for different playthroughs
-Feminine character is not automatically condemned to NTR. I cannot thank the dev enough for this choice, too many games force that on you if you choose "submissive" or "feminine" options. Very nice to see a game where the feminine character can still have healthy relationships and not instantly be abused and degraded.
-AI images aren't bad. They aren't amazing or anything, but the characters look consistent through them

Cons:
-The UI is bad, especially for navigation to different areas. The options need to be separated from each other, it's too easy to misclick. The house is especially annoying to navigate. Also, some of the clicks just feel unnecessary. When you go to class and talk to Cecilly, you click that option, then have a brief talk, then it takes you to a different screen to click on a new option to start the class. Huh? Just have it automatically transition to the class after the talk, that's the only option anyways.
-Sometimes the writing is... not great. Most of the writing is fine, but every now and then something just feels incredibly rushed.
-I know this won't be changed since the poll on the first page was pretty decisive, but the mixture of gifs and images is pretty bad. I'd be fine with no animations, I just want the images to remain consistent.

TLDR:
Interesting idea for a game with lots of room to grow and improve but is lacking on some of the execution right now. Hopefully this game continues to get better, looking forward to further updated.

(v. 0.2 Alpha) It's good RPG style game/VN which I Iike, there are plenty of decisions to influence your character and influence the relationships to the other characters - not totally but enough to warrant more than one playthrough. I hope the Developer continues since it has a good mechanical foundation with a good 'quest guide' so you know when you have hit the end of the version.

Nice pics so far. I am waiting for more!! The AI pics are great and the gifs are good too. I prefer more AI pics than gifs since they seem more original but both are great. Keep it up! Nice pics so far. I am waiting for more!! The AI pics are great and the gifs are good too. I prefer more AI pics than gifs since they seem more original but both are great. Keep it up!

v0.1

From the start, the game makes a direct link between masculinity and domination, and femininity and submission. It's the usual misconception in many games; that masculine characters cannot be submissive.

It also seems to mix up submission with sissification and cuckolding, so there's no way to check the submissive content without getting sissy/NTR stuff.

The text could use some spacing - paragraphs run on and on, making the experience less enjoyable, and the pages a bit of an eyesore. Spacing is also needed between text, pictures, and the "next" button/link. There's also spacing issues after colons on the notebook.

Quotation marks or italics could also help to differentiate the character's thoughts from the rest of the text.

Spacing aside, the writing is good: varied vocabulary, descriptive enough without getting tedious, and a few spelling mistakes: "libary", "feminem". My main qualm is the inclusion of stats and gameplay elements - I don't need to be told that having breakfast with someone increased my charisma; just increase it and describe the breakfast scene instead.

The AI art is good, although it could use some post-editing to polish the rougher edges: there's a picture of a castle and there's a floating island or something on the background, which is never mentioned on the story, so I assume it's just a fuckup by the AI. Similar things can be found in other pictures: a girl missing one leg, another girl with the mouth on the side of her face, or the eyes of the redhead changing colors between scenes.

Unfortunately, there's non-AI pictures (or animations, rather) mixed in, which detract from the otherwise enjoyable art of the game.
That Patreon logo being the only picture on the side menu is also a bad choice - a portrait of the character would look much better.

There's a notebook that gives you hints on how to proceed on different storylines, which is appreciated. I'd recommend adding it as a side menu item/option, so we don't need to return home anytime we want a clue.

Right now there's little content, multiple dead ends, and some broken passages, but that's perfectly fine for a 0.1

I'm giving it 4 stars for now because I can see that the dev is putting effort into this. I'll update the review later on depending on what this evolves into.

Great intro and images! love the elf characters and looks. And the corruption progression is good. The writing is good even if it looks sometimes the corruption is too fast. I'm looking forward to see more slow corruption <3.

Great for a .1 release. Sexy animations, great writing, and a fun interesting plot. Hot and sexy from the beginning, whichever path you choose. 5/5 for a v.1, great potential! About 20 min of content for each route at this point.