VN - Ren'Py - Tune in to the Show [Ep. 8 BUGFIX] [RobertDeadth]

Fun plot, with a subtle hint that there is more to it than what it lets on. Exciting to see where it goes. The girls are lovely. Each with a unique personality and interests and goals. And each look very attractive. Very promising start. No animations but thats not a negative at all. Sounds are limited to background music, nothing to advanced or detailed wit SFX or anything. MC kind of looks generic but at least hes not grotesque looking.

This is the VN to go to if your looking for an enjoyable story with ROMANCE a possible-plenty..
Set in a 'BIG BROTHER' (the reality tv show NOT the annoyingly repeated and sequeled VN series) type setting, The mc is both likeable and a nice guy for once.. While it may not be everyones taste to have such a thing, for those looking to read and get engrossed in a story that has some elements of mystery as well as a welcomed love story harem game then this is for you..
If your looking for something with ntr or anything along those lines then this isn't for you.. If you like games like Sunshine Love.. then you might take a liking to this..
Story is currently at Day2 as of this review so i'm looking forward to seeing what comes in the future.. set over a 30 day gameshow/reality tv show setting, there is still plenty of days in the game schedule to fill with more of the laughs, romance and fun that has already been on show.. pun intended..

Review as of v0.25 (Episode 2 Part 2)

I like it, looking forward to more. The first part was quite linear with very few choices of consequence. Episode 2 seemed to have more choices so I'd chalk it up to the first part being more of an intro. It's very rare I am interested in the world/story of an adult game but I'm intrigued by the premise here. I hope there is some more mystery to it as is hinted.

The girls are all good although I wouldn't necessarily say great at this point. We haven't really got to know them that well yet. I would also say they are just a little on the "samey" side. They aren't super distinctive from one another in my opinion (especially visually). Not to the point of needing to be fixed, just could have been a touch better. But I'm definitely looking forward to spending more time with all of them so overall a definite positive.

The dialog could be a bit snappier. There were a few spots where I found myself thinking "you've made this point already". Overall the pace in Episode 2 was much improved in my opinion so I don't want to be too harsh.


The sex scenes seem to be getting better with each one. Honestly the first one I had forgotten about until writing the review. It's sort of out of the blue and right near the beginning, not with any of the main love interests (at least not one of the ones in the house). The second is sort of short but very sweet and the third is quite good.

In conclusion, I'd recommend this for someone looking for an interesting story and likable girls to romance (not so much if you're looking for super kinky/dirty/explicit sex scenes, just my 2 cents). I would also consider it early in development as of this review (v0.25) so not tons of content; not many answers about the story and not a ton of interaction with most of the girls yet but there is a lot to look forward to.

Never thought I would get to play the adult game version of the reality dating shows I used to watch which were my guilty pleasure lol. But seriously talking this game is nothing like those as it's just the setup and the concept that's the same. It needs way more drama and crazy contestants for that lol. Well what can I say, the story is really good so far(kind of a slow burner) and character models are incredibly beautiful. There is only one sex scene rn as it doesn't have that much content but it sure has some great potential.

Version played: Ep 2, Part 1

Firstly, beautiful and crystal clear render (just how I like them) and the story is realistically different. I have played many other games but so far this 1 is the only 1 with a different premise .

Secondly, the girls are very pretty and since I am from SEA region, I want to thank the dev for including the Korean and japan female characters. Although Evelyn is my favorite for now since my taste is the mature woman type.

Thirdly, the reason I give only 4 stars for now is because I hope the sex scenes can be more polished in the future. The scenes available rite now kinda mundane - like just a few different renders and a few sentences and its over. Perhaps the dev can include like a gif-ish motion for the renders and some screen effects or sfx when a character climax?

Overall I think the dev did a great job for the start and I am likely to check this out again in the future.

Man have I fallen in love with this game. The storyline is very unique and not that unrealistic actually. While playing, you don't notice that a show is being made which is quite odd, but it doesn't really affect the story at all.

The ladies in the game are very nice and are very well made. The MC is just a good fellow trying to make new contacts after having little contact for the past 2 years. Considering Covid, maybe many can relate to this.

The graphics in general are just very good and the conversations are really fun. I didn't want to skip anything and have read everything, which is quite unusual for me. Maya is also very nicely made, she is a bit naive but not overly so. She still comes across as mature, some games fail very hard in finding the balance between naive and mature.

All in all what a game, I have not even finished playing but I had to give this one five stars before I forget. So go play it quickly, because this game deserves way more attention.

Great game fr.

I love it, rendering is outstanding and HD. Model is also great, Evelyn is my fav. Story? It's amazing, could use more genre if possible. I'll add this game to one of my favorite and waiting for another update. Great job to the developer

quite intriguing story, great renders and of course a variety of awesome females ... each one of them unique in they own way. With the harem tag it´s already in my top games to be watched.
I enjoyed very much to play this game and I looking forward for the next update.

9.5/10 from my side

Good start. Good renders and model. Story plot seems interesting. Liked all the models they are gorgeous. Dev you did a good work creating Evelyn she seems aged and elegant at the same time. There is a lot to read. Well if you are for a quick fap. You will feel disappointed. This version is basically a intro. Introducing all the characters and gave little information about their back ground. There is some lewd scene in the game. Writing is good too.

Overall I enjoyed the game. Keep up the good work dev. Looking forward to next updates

2.5 points for the renders and the characters that look above good, and 0.5 roundup for the writing that gives enough info but being concise. (still not perfect but I encountered outrageus things as of late)

As for the rest of aspects in this Ep1:
The complimentary lewd scene at the begining is decent, but it could be better if you are picky, I sure am.
The chosen partner for the first day is the redhead but the sex partner (out of nowhere) the dev asigned for this update is with the old lady, which in my opinion is the one that looks worst of all the girls. I rejected her.
Update ends there, the game is way too short.
The characters are imposible to rate, there are 3 so far and not much to say about them apart from their looks (clothed looks).

PRO:
- Very nice game and studied in graphics, few choices to make that still lead to the scenes

CONS:
- too many dialogues, too long and too short scenes (between one sex scene and another almost 1800 texts pass and then the scene lasts yes and no 100 texts with 10-12 different images between them too few sex images and too many the images of the dialogues)
- few pictures of the details of the sex scene

Having said that, I hope that he will continue modifying these aspects that would otherwise make him lose points

What a great game. I really like it.
Great models and a story that is neither rushed nor boring.

No implausible manufactured drama and conflict that so often ruins a good tale.

Congratulations Dev, a game to be proud of. Please don't be tempted to change anything about it.

Really Enjoyed this game. I really hope some fun things happen with Maya as she is so cute.

I really enjoyed how the story flows. I do wonder what is going to happen with all the woman

Can't wait for an update

A very professional product. Beautiful renders and well written dialogue. Music is soft and unimposing and especially when kept at low volume it so far accentuates the light and playful atmosphere.

Note: This game is for readers. So, relax and take your time.

Tune in to the Show is the second work from RobertDeadth following his short proof of concept game A Date with Emily.

This latest game looks to have a much larger context with many characters. The girls at play are beautifully rendered and have well defined pleasingly individual personalities. The writing is near perfect English. It flows well and has numerous witty moments.

The reading experience is novelesque. There is a lot of granularity and detail in the narrative. Also in the renders. A single tip of the head may be given a separate render. That's a lot of rendering. The dialogue is fullsome and natural. Unlike the often shorthand form dialogue in many games which is kept as brief as possible in order to move to a new scene. In this game the narrative flow(both external dialogue and thoughts) is not rushed, yet not overly slow either.

If the player plays the game with a relaxed mindset, reading the game like a novel without haste then the experience will be maximized.

Try it out. May not suit all your kinks, but it's pretty sexy and I found it an enjoyable journey. Good luck to the dev.

Ep.1 (about 1 hour)
The premise is, that MC joins a Big Brother type TV show with 1 other male and 6 females. He is encouraged to bed all the ladies. Right off the bat, the premise suffers from gigantic loopholes because the writer immediately clarifies that the other male isn't capable of interfering sexually in multiple (somewhat laughably disarming) ways. However, somehow the show runner can sexually test MC and would be able to replace him quickly, but somehow the same wasn't true for the other male, nullifying the logic of the start of the premise immediately.

There aren't really any choices in the game, it is pretty much a kinetic novel. There is a small round of guessing someone's lie during introductions and an opportunity to forego the sex scene, but no real "choices". Speaking of sex scenes, there are currently 2 scenes in the game, unanimated vanilla (1 bj, 1 sex).

Light stock lounge background music is present. The models look nice in my opinion.

MC is very bland, with no flaws. Too much Gary Stu for my taste. Every girl immediately fancies him, he is a good-looking, young stud, but also financially independent and acts mostly like a white knight in shining armor. Was rolling my eyes a bit reading through his dialogue and thought's. Not only very unrealistic, but also just... dull?

This brings me to my biggest gripe with the game: the writing style. It is painfully boring and repetitive. The writer of this game has an absolute OBSESSION with constantly mentioning that someone is smiling. Basically, every conversation ends up being a variation of something like this:

MC: "How are you doing, character?"
She smiles at me.
Girl: "Oh you came.. bla"
I chuckle
MC: "Indeed"
She nods and laughs
Girl: "So about that X.."
I shrug and smile at her.
We both chuckle at each other.
[repeat]

The writer mentions that someone is laughing/smiling/chuckling over 340 times in just 1 episode. Reads absolutely obsessive. To the dev: You don't need to constantly describe that someone is smiling. You can simply SHOW it by having the model smile. There is a reason why "Show, don't tell" is an established core rule of writing. It just felt like the writer didn't know what to write about and just kept repeating the same sentence over and over again in different variations.

For now, I will give this an average rating, but the writing style in particular stood out in such a negative light that I can barely even justify that, considering it's a rather kinetic novel.

+ Models
Ø plot, music
- no relevant choices (yet?)
-- MC and writing style

Holding out hope for this game to do well.
Excellent quality renders.
Although there's little to play as of right now, all of the characters seem diverse enough in appearance and personality to make you like them all.

Aight, jumping straight in, amazing renders and an engaging story.
Figured I'd be playing most of it one handedly but wow the story had me hooked.
No NTR.
Harem routes.( only 2 lewd scenes in Ep1, but the setup is there)
Would definitely recommend.

Well,normaly i don't do reviews especialy not for a 0.1 release.
But this game is really promising.
All girls are interesting,beautiful and also kinda cute.
All their backstories seem plausible and their personalyties aren't like
bland sexdolls.
Renders are really good.

My favourite girls are :
1: Da-eun she has the most beautiful face (i just wish her boobs were smaller(MY personal taste))
2: Maya she's just adorable and cute
3: Ayaka (what can i say,i just love asian girls)

I'm looking forward to how this VN will evolve.
If you love VN's with an interesting story and cute girls on top,
give it a try!

Overall a solid 4-4.5 stars for a first release.

In simple words i enjoyed it. It's literally a perfect ending for my day also.
Writing is quite good , renders are best nothing much to complain .
I liked it and it's now on my fav games list , sure waiting for next release. Thanks for such good story games.

The renders and storyline of game looks mind blowing. The character models are also looking beautiful and I hope the game will be improved as the time goes on.
I would love following features to be added into this game:
1. Pregnancy
2. Open Roam
3. More in world expansion and interactions.
Will update once I complete.