VN - Ren'Py - Twin Maniax! [v0.07] [Lemon Mint Soft]

Sadly this never got finished and there is simply not enough here of substance...the models and story aren't bad so to speak, there just is not enough of it along with content. Better to place your hope in something else.

2/5 is all I can give for [0.07], cause the visuals are actually well done and show some clear talent, and making your own soundtrack shows a belief in their project that I hope has them improve upon it.
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Now, the elephant in the room: NTR. This centers around the character Rin, who's essentially the secondary love interest as the sister of the MC's girlfriend. Now, there's no point in the story where her being a slut isn't obvious. Most of her dialogue is talking about sex. But, the story is clearly trying to say that there's more underneath that focus on sex.

Unfortunately, they immediately undercut it for the player by having an unskippable and unavoidable sex scene with her and some random ass dude in the middle of the courtyard for no reason. There is quite literally zero build up to this, it's so random and unneccessary that I am truly shocked at the stupidity of it's inclusion. The dev then has you find one of your classmates be found just before she gives the school president a blowjob, and THEN you see your girlfriend's MOTHER giving a blowjob to the vice principal! That's literally the order of what you see in terms of lewd content. The reason for the negative reviews also has to do with the fact - for some absolutely stupid reason - it's not TAGGED as having NTR, which just blows my mind. I'm not sure I can even blame the F95 uploader, because even the dev's subscribestar doesn't mention it AT ALL, which is insane because they literally have a list of kinks they PLAN to put in the game, but refuse to mention NTR at all? The first actual sex scene that isn't just a dream was with a LI and someone else, how that isn't the literal definition of NTR is mind-blowing.
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While the dev tries to talk about how the writing is a focus, I think they just mean writing words is the focus. There is so much redundant dialogue for no fucking reason. The amount of boring and totally meaningless conversations in this AVN is truly mind-boggling. The worst part is that because of the wide number of potential LIs, they pump even MORE worthless dialogue in.

Their attempts at humour do nothing to alleviate this either. For a dev that has a character that's a caricature of overboard anime fans, the replication of some of the worst fucking aspects of slice-of-life anime stories is insane to me. So much unfunny and mind-numbing attempts at humour that you end up skipping most of it just to see if the story is even going anywhere.

It certainly doesn't help that the MC, Jun (who we cannot change the name of), is boring as shit too. He's just a chaste, whiny, snivelling loser. Why any of these characters would be interested in the worst anime protag charicature is beyond me. He has the charisma of a dry sponge. So not only do you have to deal with awful dialogue AND awful humour, you also get his totally worthless INNER monologue. Wow, you think she's a skank? Crazy, not like you haven't said it two dozen times prior.
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Ultimately, the dev team absolutely fails in their desired goal of a well-written slow-burn with good humour. It's just not there. There are better uses of your time than this trite and dull experience. To fix it would require gutting at least 40% of the writing, removing or altering the NTR (if it was based on the MC being cordial or not, that would be a big plus), totally overhauling the MC, making the characters more than one-line cliches, and cutting down on and refining the humour.

Nonavoidable NTR without being tagged as ntr.

One of the 2 main loveinterests gets fucked right in front of you in the public and there is no option, choice or any other way to avoid this. Even more annoying, your charakter does like it for no particular reason, which is...again...unavoidable.

I have no problem with games focusing on ntr and i have no problem with people enjoying this kind of content. The developer and/or publisher should at least be honest about it.

Welp, the only good thing is the graphics other than that it's another slut simulator with bs storyline that is all over the place and annoying characters. When your characters are shits and bunch of sluts, then the game automatically become boring and weird. If I can't get attached to the characters, what's even the point to continue playing. Not to mention, the Netorare and cuckold settings. Feels like gonna get cucked in the future or will happen off screen. Wasted precious 30 mins of my life (good thing skipped most shits)

I mean its not a bad game, theres good/decent animations, but i dont like the MC is just terrible (like a brick).
When I read the description of the game I was thinking of a different type of Protagonist more like charismatic but I was too wrong, everyone else is what I expected the protagonist to be, the game has "jokes and humor" but too poor and for the scenes u have to skip because theres no story is just chats with your friends with nothing important.
I understand that they wanted to do something different from what is customary and that is fine but it was not the way, I definitely see some potential but they need to do something with the story or the protagonist.

This game is pretty boring. There is plenty of unimportant stuff which totally ruins the story. The graphics and renders are old but not that problematic. What is a plus point are animations. There is no ending. The amount of the good stuff is pretty low.

I mean i get that not all games are supposed to be good ones, but this one was straight up shit, too frivolous to actually have any gravitation and not to mention how shit the writing is, what is the point of making a whole bunch of dope graphics if yo stories and characters are all just shitty cartoon pricks with no value whatsoever.

is there no way to give this 0 stars, is their no way to actually give it a million shits instead?

Well that was a waste of my 65 minutes.
To sum it up, google Disgusted pepe emoji and look for the 4 picture. Thats how I felt after finishing reading it. You heard me right. Reading not playing. Kinetic novel as it gets but the tag is missing.
Only 3 options and they lead to the same outcome for real. Reminds me of Whos the Father. If you played it you will get it.
During game you use the Phone and its bugged as hell too.

There is no story. If you find it tell me it in details since its just Main Cast having his boring slice of life random scenes where the weird shit just gets coming. Creator must been on LSD when he thought the flying Dick scene was funny.
Then there is no consistency here. First you think Main Cast will be draged into a love triangle but nope, then you may get forced into a club of something to do with whores but this gets forgotten on the next day to having a rom com relationship with your GF to corrupting yourher into a slut too. Because ? You ask me lol ? If you play hit me up I couldnt get it either. So much random shit for real it mixes the whole little story there is.

Its not even funny like so, so much random jokes and shit I thought this is a joke game which wants to sell me some bullshit for wasting my time. Well it did and thats your old anime school main character being a pussy ass bitch. Like this meme with American Dad looking at the thermometer and the arrow is slighty reaches from the beta ass main protag to the the cuck fetish protag. Thats like 5/6 of the whole game. And during the 1/6 of the game its either dreams or blowjobs from the two twin sluts. But he behaves like a fresh born deer no cap.

I mean fine by me, give the lower class what they want but the game mentioned MC is a handsome and a intelligent guy... Oh bro, the MC. This one is weird and Im not sure what he is supposed to be since he changes his perso pretty often. I thought he might be just afraid of everything lewd but in some part of the game he is totaly fine and next day he piss his pants...
But yup, you cant even have him handle his own desciscions because this would be then a game, and not a kinetic novel lol.

Also so many characters which sounds awesome first, but then you realise they are all hungry nymphos wanting to jump the next dick they come across and so they do. Pretty many males too and I didnt get it only then when I read some of the comments. Bruh... this will be a orgy fuckfest I bet my slippers. Oh yeah, I thought people were joking with me but the creator really wants to make a Harem out of this shipwreck.

Nothing you can avoid since its kinetic novel. The only stuff I liked was some meme sounds and the GUI. Not that many good models so I can live with this game being a dumpster fire but credit where credit its due, some characters feel like they had some real character put behind them and not being a cheap vessel of a dumb joke or fetish. Sadly its not Main Character, not the slut LI and its not the second slut LI, but a fucking side chick.
Everything else hard pass.

People arnt harsh here. Sure there are even worse games out but lets put the copium to the side for a bit. This game really, really has so many bad traits and im not only talking about the cuck stuff.

I will agree with these bois critics. I will however not lie that the last last 20 minutes of the game felt good. Probably since it was the focus of the MC for a while and not the other girls whoring arround lol but also that the group meeting with chubby chick felt nice and even interesting of her yandere trait... I know right ? The best part and its a side chick with no build up or anything. So much wrong with this game...

So 2 stars it is. Perhaps this could be bearable but the dumb beginning just kinda crashed my expectation for it and the setting with the random characters is lackluster of the whole game experience.

No cap not a game for everyone, 1000% not for harem bros.
But for people who enjoy random shit and random fuckery for people who dont give a rats ass what the MC is or feel or who fucks the girls.
Oh and this game is in making of 2 years now ? Jeez...

So first I wanna start off saying I don't get the hate for this game. I was a big fan of his last game and was stoked that Rin would return in this one.
I found in this game the characters were fun and well written, at least enough for a porn game.
A side note: I have play some really badly written adult games. And none have gotten dragged as bad as this game.
Next the character designed I really enjoyed it and I found all of the girls attractive.
The plot I think so far is kinda sexy and has a lot of potential. Rin's sister being corrupted can be super hot and fun idea if it all stays the coarse.
Not sure what everyone was expecting, but there is plenty of adult games on this site that have harems where sharing is an option that are popular and have high ratings.
I would ask anyone reading this to just give this game a chance.

This game is really bad!!!
Pros: -Decent looking renders
-Decent character design

Cons: -The dev is lying about the content in the game. He says there won't be any ntr but ntr is the main focus of the game(cuckold or netorase). Harem is also a lie cause there will be sharing and swinging with other males.
- Mc is the ultimate beta and loser
-All the the girls are sluts except Rika but I wouldn't be surprised if she turned into one.

I do not recommend this game. The game has unavoidable ntr and people who don't like it, play this game because they don't see the tag. People who like ntr(not me) won't play this game because the tag is missing. The dev has the talent to make a good game but this one is lost.

Good Points
+ Main menu design looks cool... And thats only good point about our game...

Bad Points
- MC's girlfriend is not attaractive enough to be main girl for our game and literaly every girl looks pretty ugly aswell. Only good looking girl/woman was the woman Tetsuya show us in his phone and she is just a pornstar... Maybe Midori and Principal can be count as attaractive aswell. But well... She is slut, gives BJ to fatty vice principal and thats kind of turn off.
- Render and animation quality needs improve and animations needs better physics.
- Nearly all sex scenes involves MC dreaming or watching girls instead of taking action... Yeah... Great... Our only scene MC takes action is handjob + BJ given by Rin, and handjob + half assed BJ given by Rika (our so called girlfriend) and thats all... I'm not joking this is game with two year of development time and all you have is two handjob and BJ... Seriously?
- Choices doesn't matter, you dont have power to change things at all.
- Characters are not well writed and a lot of them pretty annoying vibe.
- Our story and plot feels pretty empty and poorly writed... Espacily couple of scenes dont makes any sense at all and they have a lot of hypocrite details.
- Art style of girls, place designs and a lot of details literaly coppied from certain game everybody knows. So maybe we should call this game ''Twin Waifu'' or ''Waifu Maniax!'' LOL
- All girls have sluty vibes and there is literaly one one you can have actualy love interest except your girlfriend and like i told she doesn't deserve that role at all.
- MC's is not loveable guy, his characters is kind of poorly writed and playing as a him is not that enjoyable.

For The End
I cant believe im saying this but... I wasn't waiting game this much terrible... This is one of worst games i have ever played in my life. Heck im not even sure this game deserves 1 star... If there was 0 star i would use for this game for sure... It was terrible...

Review for v0.05
CONS -
Good for nothing story .
Boring characters with no personality and most of them act stupid .
Lack of choices - None of them have any impact on game or dialogues .
Intelligent yet Main character who acts like an idiot
Sex scenes - Most of them are MC dream scenes or voyeur scenes which is pretty disappointing .
PROS -
Decent renders and some good looking girls
In the end terrible game except for some decent renders and good looking characters , others don't add up to this game and not worth playing overall .

Honestly, I don't think this game is worth playing right now. All choices seems meaningless, there's no branching and you have no control of the story at all.
Why do you even bother putting choices if it isn't going to alter any aspect to the game?. At this point I would prefer removing all of that and just add "Kinetic Novel" tag.

I thought this game was abondened but after new update I decided to try it, despite the "NTR" in it. This was also the reason why I ignored it in the first place. So I was surprised it had today a new update. So I digged in.
I would give it a higher score if the wanted contend I desire is there, which isnt, and what is already in the game makes me give this game a low score.

First of all, the game has NTR. One Main Love Interest (Rin) and a potential one, the Principal "Ryouko".

Rin - Fucks a Random Guy who probably never comes back into the story, at least for now. His name is literally"Guy". She gaves him a BJ and let him fuck her Doggy style. MC see it, she notice MC and wings at him. MC likes it, gets a hard one. They continue to bang. Classic Cuck move.

Ryouko - Giving the Vice Principal a Blowjob. "ohoo, Your still as skilled as always, Ryouko-chan" says the fat Vice Principal, she thanks him for this compliment in your typical slutty behaviour. MC caught them off guard, they noticed him but both of them dont gave a fuck. Like it something normal to having a afair and keep fucking while a student comes in. She is married by the way but not with him.
"I was just saying hi to an old friend I havent seen in a while-fufufu" she continued. MC rushes into Bathroom to beat his meat becaues of it



With that my assumption was right to ignore it in the first place.
If your not into that then thats two LIs already ruined. And if you play the game you will notice that the game has focus on the slutty type of girls.

Like everyone, expect the Rins twin sister is a slut or a ultra slut. So dont get supprised if out of nowhere the other LIs also fucks some random guys like that. Its THAT type of game you know...

Game is a kinetic Novel. If the game should have the NTR tag is up for debate but not the kinetic Novel. You have 3 "options" in the "game" which change nothing. Its a one way street.
The Main Character (Which you cant change the name by the way) Is a pushover, but not a complete loser. If I needed to point a specific characteristic about him is not only that he likes people watching bang, but also thinking about it after it happen. So its also not your ideal type of Main Character either.
From start to the current update (0.05) I dont saw any progress in his behaviour.
From the setting I dont even think this will happen. He also seems to have some contradictory behaviour. I dont know if this was done for the "comedic" part but all I can see is that the Main Character has some weird swings.

This Game has surprisingly many side characters. Males and Females. I didnt count them but Im pretty sure there are so many guys in the game as females. And since most of them are sluts and the males are horny teens you know where this will be heading.

Some of them are decent ( a handful) while all other ones are very cliche and annoying. Game dont even tries to hide that.
I cant say for sure if they will play a bigger role, be it "story" wise or for sex scenes, or are just there for having a more "believing" and natural setting.

There are some funny jokes, some of them brought a chuckle out of me, but nothing more. Probably because of these two NTR scenes which contiunes to fly around in my head. So take it with a grand of salt. But the game really pushes it. Its like the game use every moment aviable to choke some jokes into you when there is no real need for it.
Game said its a " erotic comedy " but thats not really it.

It has your typical HS1/HS2 models. Many of them I recognize from other games or I even have them as a Card.
The game put some good effort into the music and sound effects. The overall is pretty neet, but sadly since its a porn game in the end and the game already starts this way and continues to be that way, its sadly only a 1/5 from my part.

Great graphics but game could have been much better without the nonsensical fluff characters that makes up about 80% of the game, that aren't relevant to the story at all.

DEV tries way to hard to be funny when he could have instead made the MC have more then just imaginary sexual encounters. I would skip this one if you're looking for any resemblance of a linear storyline.

I have no idea what the MC's actually personality is as he is spending most of his time imagining improbable scenario's and watching other people have sex. I was honestly getting annoyed by how much time was being spent on nonsensical pointless side characters and slice of life school jokes. I had no idea what was going on half the time tbh. Hard pass.

This game looks generic but I can see the developer worked really hard on this story is actually interesting although I would say that this game is not for everyone since Mc is not the only one who is doing the deed here which puts off some people that's just a preference of fetish rating this game 1* because of that would be stupid IMO.
PROS
+ Great renders and animation
+ Nice models lots of variety is huge plus
+ Interesting story
+ No grinding
+ Funny and interesting characters
CONS
Some people might get confused as to why I didn't put lack of choices as a con but personally, I don't really mind it, it good to have choices that can lead to a different outcome which adds to replayability but most of the peeps hardly reply the whole game just because of few scenes.
None as of now
Really looking forward to furture updates

Story is pretty primitive. The concept of having two completely polar opposite female protagonists sounds cool and executed poorly. Barely have any control in terms of choices MC does. When options are provided the outcome will always be the same which makes it harder to relate to the MC in any shape or form. Story has lots of potential and could do some polishing in terms of plot progression. (Understand that it's an early version of the game so no hate or wtv)

Beta and creepy voyeur mc with multiple personality.
Linear story, choices doesn't matter other than minor things.
Decent renders .
If you don't like characters that are just sluts and watching your future li's getting railled by others than this game isn't for you, if you like sloppy very used seconds than this game is for you.
Could have potential but it was wasted hard.

Hello fappers95,
this is my first review so it will be bad but i have to write something because i think the low rating for this game is undeserved. I played almost all games above 2,5-3 stars on this site at some point- so i got kinda a feeling if a game is well made. the dev throwed alot of love at the game, in the first hour you already know its unique.

i can recommend this game to you if you like well made scenes/characters and teasing. the writing is nice and i also have never seen before such nice borders and font.

please show this game some love and dont just rate low because of ntr. this game is nowhere near other games rated 3,5/5.. come on boys.

Decent game but there is so many con in this game

Pro:
-Render looking good.Girls are cute.Some look weird
-MC does have an ambition.He look normal at first
-Nice sex scene

Cons:
-Rushed and linear storyline.Your choices doesnt matter at all
-Most of the girls are Sluts.They fucking around while MC is there found out and just staring shocked.If you are into Sluts,this is a game for you.MC also into cuck shit.He turn on seeing a whore fucking some guy and he just there staring and aroused.He also into whore,I guess.
-MC personality is inconsistent.He sometimes Cool and smart,he does have a charisma tbh.But when he see girls fucking others or seducing him,he suddenly act like a 12 yrs old virgin boy.

Honestly this game isnt for me.I play it but I just not into the story and characters tbh.If you into sluts,this is a game for you.