VN - Ren'Py - Twin Maniax! [v0.07] [Lemon Mint Soft]

Review based on v0.02

well to start i am a fan "every choice matters" and there is prety decent amount of content to put a few choices but there are only 3 choices in 3 days of content even those three choices don't matter only miner dialogue change but nothing else so its prety much a kinetic novel.

MC is prety unlikable dauchebag some times he is a moral ,ethical gentleman and all of a he just acts like a 12 year old perverted virgin.

as of now theres no ntr content in it but theres a scene at the end that some people will consider ntr(but its not ntr) so one should consider knowing what that scene is in the comments before playing this VN(maybe you are one of those who consider that scene "ntr"). but from its plot its prety much clear there will be ntr if not than there will atleast be gangbangs/sharing cause mostly girls in this VN are more or less sluts so if you like a linear story where every other girl fucks every other guy and/or MC without any build up than this VN is for you.

for me its hard pass cuz choices don't matter here so i just have to enjoy the but story itself is not that great.

Review as of 0.2

Pro
- Story: the story is very well written, its not breaking any new ground but it is presentation is top notch and is engaging
- Characters: there is a good diversity among the roster with each distinctive personalities and lots of potential for further development
- Renders: The images are top quality. Lots of detail, unique and the work that has gone into making both the world and character has paid off.
- Extras- game has a gallery and extras feature which is always good to see

Cons
- Lack of choice- There isn't a great variety or amount of choices to impact the story. This is either a negative or positive whether one views this as a VN or a game so to each their own.
- Relatively short: well duh its only a 0.2 so once again hard to penalise the dev for this

Overall, this is a very well written game with hot characters, engaging story and the potential to be up there with some of the other HS games.

Kudos Lemon Mint, +1 Patron from me

Twin Maniax! [v0.02] [Lemon Mint Soft

Not a bad start, but not good too, not a lot of choices.

Story - The history is kind of nice, the mc has great ambitions.
Renders - The renders are good, there are a good variety of models.
Sound - Yes, we have music, and some sound effects.
Amount of content - Well, here come the good and the bad, the is a good amunt of content, but there is no way that you (at the moment) can influency somenting, Rin will ntr you (yes, is ntr because the mc has fellings for her) and you cannot do anything, is look like the will be everyone fucking and the mc is only looking, not doing anything.

In the end, not a bad history, but i wish we could get more options, you have plenty of time to stop rin from fucking that guy, but the mc just keep watching, If ntr is your thing go, if not, a hard pass.

Twin Maniax!
Review, as of v0.02:

• Care and thought has been put into the presentation. Twin Maniax! makes good use of musical cues, screen effects, and image transitions. It even has clickable annotations to give definitions and context to all the weeb stuff.
• Leans gleefully into multiple high school anime cliches for humorous effect and surprisingly comes out the other side with a likable main character that isn’t simply one note. He’s got a nice characterization that falls somewhere between wet blanket, pure-hearted, and plain ol’ horny.
• Surprisingly smooth use of renpy’s ATL.
• Gyarus! Slutty, slutty gyarus!
• The dialogue is pretty good for what it is, it flows well and it’s cogent.

• Starting a game like this in the midst of a romantic relationship is a nice change of pace.
• A bulk of the game’s day-to-day moments is sprite based, which I actually find quaint as someone whose adult gaming interest started with Japanese VNs, but other people may not find appealing.

• Graphically, it’s a vanilla looking HoneySelect game, but it does have some ingenuity to it, like how the x-ray shot in the first sex scene is crafted.

Overall, I came out of v.0.02 liking this game quite a bit. Humor, as always, is a subjective beast - especially in porn games where it tends to fall flat. While nothing is laugh out loud funny, I still found the writing decently humorous. The jokes that don’t land at least manages to not crash and burn in a offensively bad way. The only huge detraction is the game’s image quality, but the overall presentation is so polished that I found myself easily looking past it. Plus, gyarus. Slutty, slutty gyarus.

Looking forward to seeing how this project unfolds!

[Version 0.01] Pretty decent in amount of content for a first build, primarily story and introduction to characters. Can't say much yet, but I hope in the future there'll be more choices to make, especially considering this is going to be a Corruption game.

Additon for v0.4

Still enjoying the game, I like the direction te story is headed.

I understand the game isn't for everyone but the 1-star reviews are complete BS. Renders and music are way above average, so anything under 3-stars is just overreactions to not liking the story and type of content.
Addition for v0.2

Good continuation, more silly sexyness!
More music tracks!
Story seems to open up a lot more by introducing more characters.

Lemon Mint Soft has a nice style in writing, visuals and music that sets the game apart from other games on the site. I really like it, keep up the good work!

I'm now a patreon sub!

review for 0.1:
Nice introduction. Looking forward to seeing it continue.
Lot's of fun moments and awkward sexyness.
I enjoyed Lemon Mint Soft's previous game as well, this one seems to be a bigger game with similar themes.
I usually play VN's with sound off, but this one has cool music tracks, so it's worth turning up the sound!