FULL DISCLOSURE*
I played this for about 20-30 minutes before deleting it, so some of my critiques may not be fair or based on the entire picture.
I'm genuinely surprised by the amount of people complimenting the writing. It is NOT good. By writing, I mean character/story logic and dialogue, NOT translation. (The translation was mediocre. It was annoying to read, however, there was never a point I flat out didn't understand what the characters meant.)
On day one I walked past a girl walking the opposite direction whom I stared at and somehow she ended up at school with me. This isn't a big thing for me individually, but there are lot of weird minor things like this that don't make much sense unless you try to convince yourself of what could have happened.Another example of a minor, but confusing instance would be a couple in-game days later when I was skipping the boring and totally inorganic dialogue and some girl Ana is living with you. One day you walk in on her fucking herself with a "huge black dildo" when the dildo is clearly white.
Every morning you go through the same BORING routine of clicking the shower, clicking breakfast, clicking school and all the while you're having more awful internal monologue thrown in your face.
The characters are boring. Nothing stands out about them. I want to remind everyone, I DID NOT play for longer than 30 minutes. It's possible they are fleshed out and have very interesting personalities, but if you're counting on them catching your eye within the first couple of days, go ahead and forget that.
The most confusing part for me had to have been getting hit in the face on day one in my new school for no reason. Some guy you've never seen before calls you an asshole, so you turn around and then he elbows you in the eye.
If that sounds like I've left something out, I haven't, that's just how nonsensical it. I have two theories. 1) either I missed something that is explained in game later down the road. or 2) the writer said to themselves "hm, these stories need an antagonist right? well, I've got no creativity whatsoever, so I'll just insert a psychopathic lunatic in this school that by some miracle is able to function in his day to day life punching strangers"
That's what I thought of the game after about half an hour so I deleted it. Please don't assume this is an accurate representation of the full game, I just wanted people to know that if you want your stories to hook you in the beginning, this is not for you.