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A minor mistake on my part. I fixed it and it will be visible in the next patch. Thank you for letting me know.
I have some feedback on a few grammar issues in the intro.
When you first speak to Sun she says: " You are not ordinary. So am I. ", this should be "You are not ordinary. Neither am I". Just after that she says: " You know that succubuses are satisfied with human lust for a long time. But I don't. ". The second sentence should be "But I'm not". The first sentence has two verbs, a doing verb (you know) and a being verb (they are satisfied). Using "I don't" in the second sentence refers back to the doing verb in the first sentence (you know, but I don't know), while using "I'm not" in the second sentence refers back to the being verb in the first sentence (they are satisfied, but I'm not satisfied). I'm not entirely sure what the first sentence is trying to say, specifically its unclear whether "for a long time" refers to how long Maya has known that sccubuses are satisfied with human lust, or how long succubuses have been satisfied with human lust. I think it should either be "You've known for a long time that succubuses are satisfied with human lust", or it should be "You know that for a long time succubuses have been satisfied with human lust".
When you first speak to Sun she says: " You are not ordinary. So am I. ", this should be "You are not ordinary. Neither am I". Just after that she says: " You know that succubuses are satisfied with human lust for a long time. But I don't. ". The second sentence should be "But I'm not". The first sentence has two verbs, a doing verb (you know) and a being verb (they are satisfied). Using "I don't" in the second sentence refers back to the doing verb in the first sentence (you know, but I don't know), while using "I'm not" in the second sentence refers back to the being verb in the first sentence (they are satisfied, but I'm not satisfied). I'm not entirely sure what the first sentence is trying to say, specifically its unclear whether "for a long time" refers to how long Maya has known that sccubuses are satisfied with human lust, or how long succubuses have been satisfied with human lust. I think it should either be "You've known for a long time that succubuses are satisfied with human lust", or it should be "You know that for a long time succubuses have been satisfied with human lust".
Hello, I just discovered this game and I'm giving it a try. Seems interesting so far, I'm considering subscribing. Just for clarification, I've caught mention of patreon exclusive content and I'd like to know if these will always be exclusive or if they become available to everyone after a while. Thank you and keep up the good work!
Hi, I'm glad you found the game interesting, and I noticed that you subscribed, so thank you for your support! Yes, according to my current plans, Patreon-only scenes will remain exclusive. Once this game is complete, I might offer the full game at a lower tier, but that's still quite a while away. Thank you for my good wishes! I hope you enjoy it!
I would like to remind you that you can access all the scenes with the save files I've included. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask on Discord or here. I would also like to hear your opinions and suggestions after your playthrough.
Yes, there was a mix-up there. It should be like you said. I fixed it, it will appear correctly from the next patch. Thank you for pointing it out!
I'm sorry if it seems like I'm just complaining, but I think the game has good ideas and a good story so far and I would hate to see it fail because of bugs, mix-up or typos.
So please don't see this as me complaining but as me trying to help.
Edit: I have found a few more inconsistencies but don't want to impose myself. If you want, I'd be happy to provide the locations. If not, no offense.
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Hello, I apologize for the late response. I have been struggling with some internet problems for a while now and it still hasn't resolved. Honestly, it is to my benefit that you point out such typos and mix-ups. If you want to do this more easily and freely, I look forward to seeing you on the
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