The renders are okay, but inconsistent. MC is having his way with Valentina in bed and she bounces back and forth between having a doll's level of makeup on and minimalist makeup on depending on what render is showing at the time. The Valentina character is fun to look at, but that's distracting. Some characters look kind of silly. For instance, while Mia is a beautiful character model, she has this kawaii headset on which is cute... at first. But she wears it everywhere. Even when she's in normal conversation with other characters and you know it's not connected to another device, there it is. Why? We get it, she's the MC's daughter, she's supposed to have this nubile look... but the model doesn't need a pastel-colored kitty headset to sell that. Everything is just so... over the top for no real reason.
The story is stupid bordering on comical. The prologue seemed good until the MC left home, then it got kind of weird. MC can be part of a gang, but why does that gang dress like a national military? Unless they're female gang members, in which case they should dress kind of slooty. After the actual story begins, most of the story is comical but suddenly the MC has to go to university? This
Also, why is today the day the MC's dick becomes A Mighty Rod™ and why did his libido finally become one with the singularity today of all days and turn him into a cum machine? Because let's be honest, he could've kept going with Debra (or Valentina or anyone really) had the muscles not simply gotten sore. Clearly the pump was primed, but the motor wasn't working anymore.
I'm going to give it two stars to this point. On the one hand, the story for this is so comically bad it almost comes back around to being good again, but it's just so stupid that gives me a headache. The developer clearly needs an editor (lots of technical writing issues) and a new writer (lots of creative writing issues; lay off the psychedelics), not . Not saying the developer won't have improved that as there's still a few versions of gameplay between where I am now and up-to-current for that to change... but as the current version is "reworked," I'm inclined to say the dev likely missed a few things.
The story is stupid bordering on comical. The prologue seemed good until the MC left home, then it got kind of weird. MC can be part of a gang, but why does that gang dress like a national military? Unless they're female gang members, in which case they should dress kind of slooty. After the actual story begins, most of the story is comical but suddenly the MC has to go to university? This
Also, why is today the day the MC's dick becomes A Mighty Rod™ and why did his libido finally become one with the singularity today of all days and turn him into a cum machine? Because let's be honest, he could've kept going with Debra (or Valentina or anyone really) had the muscles not simply gotten sore. Clearly the pump was primed, but the motor wasn't working anymore.
I'm going to give it two stars to this point. On the one hand, the story for this is so comically bad it almost comes back around to being good again, but it's just so stupid that gives me a headache. The developer clearly needs an editor (lots of technical writing issues) and a new writer (lots of creative writing issues; lay off the psychedelics), not . Not saying the developer won't have improved that as there's still a few versions of gameplay between where I am now and up-to-current for that to change... but as the current version is "reworked," I'm inclined to say the dev likely missed a few things.