VN Ren'Py Abandoned Undercurrents [Ch. 1] [Adults games and Daz Art]

Vrijgeest

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It is very ragged. The renders bounce a lot and are not great. I agree about the age difference. I know it is modern times but the language is quite violent. Maybe that is ok in Russia or America but can it not be more normal. The dialogue between father and daughter is rough. Another demo without legs? I think so.
 

fulcrum

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Feb 2, 2018
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...i see a lot of empty text boxes after each line. is that intended?
 

varkatzas666

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My rating to this version 0.1 is 2/10. Why? It has no history, or they do not explain why the father has such desires for his daughter. It has some grammatical mistakes. When Jess discovers that his father took his panties, he does not flinch or bother and takes it naturally. It's awful,no desire to offend