HTML - Abandoned - Unfinished Business [v0.5.2] [Dedegaru]

I've played this game before when it was on QSP and that version had far more content. As it stands I can't see why someone would play this version over that other one.

Writing is alright. It's basic and for the most part an excuse to get to the porn. Signposting is iffy. Gameplay loop is follow a character around the house and wait until you get a new option to click on. The male is obviously the least written and the least well written. He's so under written that you somehow go full steam ahead to blackmail him into a butt plug without any buildup. It seriously came out of left field where as with the girl build up is slower and generally better. His signposting is also worse with the porn site.

Overall it's not great but it's not horrible. Tags are also lies as of 0.5.2 as there is no actual sissification or bimbofication in the game yet.

A really weak game both in gameplay and a story. As mentioned by many reviewers, the need to wander through the house, clicking buttons to spend time and watch bleak events is not engaging at all. This could not be the issue if the story and characters would be, ehm, present. But the characters are lacking, and there is no fun in corruption somebody who has nothing to corrupt.

Solid corruption game with two separate fetish focuses, female corruption and male sissification.
While I don't personally like sissification, I do really like the gradual corruption of the female character.

There isn't much in way of story, I however didn't find that aspect negative, the short intro serves well to establish why we are where we are as well as why we are doing what we are. The progressive corruption quickly turned into the primary focus.

The so called "wait grind" has been fixed by a huge margin since the earlier releases, resulting in an much smoother experience. While it's still fairly early in the amount of content, what is there is solid. Can't wait for additional content.

Version 0.5.2:
Rating starts with 5 stars...
-1 star for being boring. Too much repetitiveness of actions every day. Especially when your primary activity is clicking to make time pass. And when something does happen it's not interesting enough to make you want to click to see more.
-1 star for being tedious to play due to a lack of feedback as to whether what you're doing is getting you closer to your goal.
-1 star for the shallowness of the characters being interacted with. They're essentially cardboard cutouts with zero personality or history.
-1 star for needlessly breaking saved games on every update. There are better ways of coding games than making players waste their time having to start over and over and over again.

Overall it's just not a fun game to play. I've been watching this game since it first came out and, other than some bug fixes and small amounts of new content (that hasn't make the game any more exciting), nothing's really improved enough to make me want to go through its grind every time a new update comes out and breaks my saves.

I quited this game after, I don't know, 30 minutes of playing?

It is a really slow game and I get grind, but this isn't even grind, this is pressing de add time button 20 times so you can (try to) do the next thing. The next thing is stalking Sarah and pressing the same buttons and watching the same scenes over and over again. And no, the scenes are not interesting at all.

Also since there aren't a lot of visable stats anywhere, so you have no clue if it still works (after doing it a lot) or if you are doing it for nothing.

But then you get (sort of) an objective and to find the solution you have to go room by room to find it since there's not even the slightest hint how or where to do it and otherwise you can always press the +1 hour button again and search all the rooms again in hope of some progress.

There might be more interesting stuff if you pull trough all the repetitiveness, but for me, whatever it is, it was not worth almost falling asleep.

I like the story, but the actual game part is severely lacking and there is very little to do outside of the liner story.

Its basically do one task over and over and see one of a few rolling random images until someone levels up or send an email, wait for email to be read wait for single scene to occur then wait a day and send a new email rinse repeat.

There is very little to do in this game the button you going to click the most is skip an hour

despite having a pornstar as the main character none of the H-images used in the game are of her, there is no attempt to match up the images to Sarahs character at all - at the very least try yo match up the hair colour.

Played and older version and didn't really like it. The new UI changes make navigating the game a lot easier and the story is starting to develop nicely. I hope this keeps getting developed as it has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!

This game has a lot of promise, and I was very disappointed when it ended. There are rough edges, but the core is done well. Although it is still an early start, I didn't encounter any bugs of note. I do think that keeping a better parallel between the two would be nice. The male side of the "accident" opener felt poorly presented and didn't make a lot of sense. Also, getting the girl into the "relationship" felt a little too quick. Would have been nice for the MC to indirectly corrupt/degrade her first, before she slips into such a deep pit of perversion all of a sudden. Even still, it's very entertaining and I hope there will be updates soon!

the game is really great, first of all I think it is one step ahead of the others with its different thinking. Unfortunately, updates are progressing very slowly. I hope it gets the value it deserves.

Solid start to a decent concept. A little grindy. I would have liked to have played more but I reached the current end of content. If the stuff that follows is anything like what we've had so far it will turn out pretty well.

Pretty good grinder with some thinking involved how to push characters further. Gifs are exelent, story is decent, what it needs is more content. Hopefully author is planning to finish it.

What can be improved: Energy/power system, navigation can be simplified to reduce clicking. Some variety/more events/things to do while chars are at work.

It's one of those games with a lot of potential, that has no real content yet. (gave 1 extra star to pump up)
But the promise sounds good, increase your power, corrupt, get stronger, corrupt more and so on. So far with the girl ain't nothing special, but it seems that you'll turn the guy into a sissy. That's pretty interesting, there ain't that many games when the male MC sissificates someone else.
Also, because of the current low amount of content, feels quite grindy. But that should be fixed eventually with more content.
The only real critic I have is the lack of meaningfull choices