VN - Ren'Py - Unholy Angel: Wedding Adventures [v0.3 Final (Revised)] [Bunny Devil]

Sorry for my English, its not my native language.
Really good game and promising too. Despite the fact that the game is short now I've been pleased to play it. The drawings are great, because I don't like 3d that much, but also I don't like cartoonish ones. That's game make it middle way. The dialogues are great too. Its easy to see how author bring some common sense on that.
So, best wishes to the author and good luck for him

Graphically the game is not bad, we do not have a great story, the simple relationship of a couple that will explode during the game, something that indicates a great love, but a trip to a luxury resort is enough, that the characters only think about their needs, 90% makes us understand that the couple will not get married or will do so with a large load of betrayals, pitiful audio, but to add more cons, too small updates. Just a waste of time

perfect game with beautiful CGs and so far the story has good progress and scenes. although i would prefer original characters but it's not a deal breaker for me.
i would expect better monthly updates but the dev has done good so far.

Pretty good game for the genre, obviously taking cues from the EvaKiss style, but it doesn't look like a carbon copy and seems to enhance it for the characters, though I would want to see more variation and emotion in facial expressions for Diana and Brian, art is good and looks sexy otherwise, CG's are traced which is ok, but while the AI art is not too bad, it still gets a bit of a negative from me for its use, so I hope it isn't leaned on. Story itself is pretty plausible, and sexy, though it needs to be careful with not just diving into tropes, and making sure there is an option for a variety of relations and paths, from pure love to pure lust (which does already seem to be there to some extent) - text could use some proofing and an overall check, but otherwise a fairly good start and hopefully it heads in the right direction.

An EvaKiss style of game with a lot of branches, down-to-earth story and traced artwork. I really love these type of games and although it's a bit too early to tell, but this one seems pretty good so far.

- Art 4/5: matter of taste, if you're okay with traced art then this game is pretty good. -1 star only due to the obviously AI generated backgrounds. They are totally fine, just I wouldn't give 5 stars for AI generated stuff.
- Story, characters 5/5: so far it seems really interesting, on similar level as EvaKiss games. We'll see how it goes in future updates.
- Porn 4/5: there's not much content at the moment but what's there is good. Again, we'll see. No animation, that's for sure (as it's the case with the EvaKiss type of games)
- Writing 3/5: in general it's quite good. But it's pretty obvious AI was used for some of the dialogs (but I'm sure there're hand-written parts too). Which - again - could be fine, but some of the dialogs are so soulless, it's quite a downturn. I'm talking about the unnecessary mumblings of irrelevant information, if you play the game it will be obvious what I'm talking about.

I recommend playing this one if you like the games of EvaKiss, I'll surely follow this one closely. I really hope they won't force the BBC path, we'll have enough other options.

Really liked the game , especially the models both gf and her friend are perfect for
corruption, also the scenario of wedding/ honeymoon in carribean leads to a myriad of possibilities for a ver naughty game. Hope the developer continue updates regularly, also hoping for a path were husband is oblivious about fmc cheating/ interracial . Cant wait for future updates

There's not a ton of content to fairly critique, but I'm seeing a lot of potential for this to have unique storylines? or even branching endings.

I like the art style and with enough updates, Unholy Angel: Wedding Adventures could become another hidden gem in the Choose-Your-Own-Story type of game.

Overall, I won't directly compare this to other games, & I'll simply say this. (If the primary focus for this game is to generate a strong pledge/donation structure, each release HAS to really create content for a player-base which results in genuine excitement for each release.)

Hopefully within the next few months we'll have enough content to really get a good idea about what the plans are for the future. I'm looking forward to seeing this project really take shape!

Unholy Angel: Wedding Adventures starts off promising... unfortunately (and lets start of with the bad), the narrative setup in the intro is confusing. It starts off with Diana being conservative, and then wanting to explore, but then not really exploring. The intro could use some more expounding upon her college sex life before meeting her fiance. The intro sort of took the wind out of your own sails. I wanted to see Diana getting fucked in all sorts of different scenarios before meeting her fiance.
Also, there isn't a lot of deviation in the art, or showcasing of any real sex-scenes. It is just the same static image of Diana, standing in the same position, but with a change of clothes here and there and in different locations. When she was watching porn with her husband, that would've been a great time to show them sitting on the couch, fooling around or something; rather than them just standing in the same position the entire time.
The good - The premise setup is really great, and this game has a lot of promise if you fix some stuff. The intro narrative started out exciting, seeing as how you introduced Diane's step-dad, and some college flings. But you can empower your intro by actually showing Diana doing stuff with them.
Your story seems like it is going to be strong, but, first and foremost, find someone who can edit your text for you, especially for the intro.
The art (or at least the bare-minimal amount you have so far) is pretty-good, but lacks variety. It's obvious it is just preexisting images of porn stars, that are "painted" over, but there needs to be more of it. I'd imagine if you bump up the art count, and enhance the scenarios a little more, this is one of those VNs to rival Good Girl Gone Bad.

There is a TON of potential you have here, unfortunately, in summary, fix your text, bump up that art count, and be consistent with your story and narrative.

Based on v0.1 Beta .
Hot damn! This looks super good and promising.
The art looks great. The character design looks beautiful except guys who I think can use a bit of touch ups. The FMC looks gorgeous like a top class pornstar(she does not look "innocent" as the game claims). However, the set up till now is great. The dialogues look good and normal. Just be mindful of corrupting the FMC properly for that route. Looking forward to the more scenic updates as there are no sex scenes or nude scenes of the FMC till now. Best of luck dude will be looking forward to the updates to come.

Super nice storyline with a very good unique 2d art for the characters. Nice to not see the same faces in all VNs again, but instead using fresh drawn characters. The game have some nice choices, hope these beginning storylines can be in future updates further developed. At the moment the game is pretty short, but very promising... from my side 5 of 5 stars for now.