I really like this game so far. And I agree with 'balitz Method' on all their points.
Here are some nitpicky points I noticed and what I would like to see.
- Minor bug, the 'her' variable needs two variants for the male: 'him' and 'his'. At some point in the dialog 'him' was used when 'his' would have been correct.
- The default name of the MC should probably be a gender-neutral one, like "Alex" or "Sasha" etc. (Both mean "Defender of humankind" which would be fitting.) And would be nice to have neutral pronouns (they/it). If changes between "he" and "she" are properly in place, it should not be that difficult I think.
- Seraphinas laughing face seems to move differently than the rest of their body up and down. Different frequency? BTW I really like this subtle up-and-down movement of the characters!
- More height and body type and appearance variation of the maids. Maybe some muscly barbarian maids. More colorful and unique outfits, not shades between white, grey, and black. Different faces or face features maybe?
- Coherent art style between scenes and dialog.
- Extra Volume channel for background sounds like rain.
What I would like to see story/scene wise (I haven't played the whole game yet, so this might be a bit premature):
- Gentle/Loving femdomy scenes, where the MC is dominated by their maids. I think this is likely since the scenario is set up that way... MC should probably have the option of being a sub as well as a dom, but Western femdommy harem games aren't that common. What I mean with femdommy is more akin to 'reversed roles' like reluctant/shy mc and determined/proactive female than spanking and pegging.
- Surprising story twists and turns, that keep you guessing what happens next.