HTML Onhold Urban Gal [v1.9.1] [Abhorson]

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Overview:
An html porn game like none other.
Aw who am I kidding. It's a porn game where you play a girl in a big city.
Sexy times abound. You know the drill.
If it's good and you want to see more, let me know. If it's bad and you don't want more, let me know too.
This is my first time coding & making a game, so if there are bugs, let me know and I'll fix them.​

Thread Updated: 2024-03-28
Release Date: 2024-03-28
Developer: Abhorson F95zone -

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Censored: No
Version: 1.9.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Patches: BUGFIX v1.9.1

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[BaasB]

Abhorson
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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[MissFortune]

Not a ton of content yet, and just your usual work > fuck > sleep routine for right now. But it's definitely got a bit of quality to what little it has. Probably needs a blackmail/coercion tag, though.

 

[Stanlowe]

Thanks

 

[quiboune]

I'm glad I gave this a shot, it's a really good game so far! I like how there is no grinding and love the LGD undertones. I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next.

A few things I'd appreciate:

• Different starts. Maybe one you come up to the town to live with your lesbian lover, Vanna, or one where you play as a spoiled girl on a vacation. Both demand a lot of setup and expansions to the initial living conditions, but they'd really make the game better. Hope you'll consider that.
• New approaches to the manager path. I'm not really into sharing so I really dislike how the sleazy manager is okay with and maybe even encourages his employees to fuck clients. Would be nicer if he kept them all for himself, allowing the clients to look but not touch. I couldn't start the camgirl line for some reason, and the landlord also feels very simple and with little to no control of what happens.
• Still on that path, more build-up. Vanna quickly goes from stranger to brave hero and quickly fallen savior. The way everything advances quickly can be nice (less bullshit) but it might also make the fall less impacting. Would be nice to get to know her after she manages to get the manager off your ass, without knowing what's going on behind the scenes. Maybe even starting a relationship as she hints at slowly getting more aloof and corrupted?

Regardless of any of that, you have a really solid base with very good content and image choices. Godspeed, Dev!

Edit: This comment has been getting a bunch of facepalms but I honestly have no clue why lmao

 

[sibiloo]

welll... there is nothing to play for now ! low content

 

[Abhorson]

welll... there is nothing to play for now ! low content

There are currently 3 routes. Camgirl, Landlord & Manager.

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Some of it is well hidden. I should've make it more obvious. Thanks for giving the game a try.

 

[Abhorson]

Not a ton of content yet, and just your usual work > fuck > sleep routine for right now. But it's definitely got a bit of quality to what little it has. Probably needs a blackmail/coercion tag, though.

Yeah...I had hoped V1.0 would have more content, but I got burnt out so I'm posting it for some feedback. Thanks for the praise. I'll add the tags the next time I update the game.

 

[Abhorson]

I'm glad I gave this a shot, it's a really good game so far! I like how there is no grinding and love the LGD undertones. I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next.

A few things I'd appreciate:

• Different starts. Maybe one you come up to the town to live with your lesbian lover, Vanna, or one where you play as a spoiled girl on a vacation. Both demand a lot of setup and expansions to the initial living conditions, but they'd really make the game better. Hope you'll consider that.
• New approaches to the manager path. I'm not really into sharing so I really dislike how the sleazy manager is okay with and maybe even encourages his employees to fuck clients. Would be nicer if he kept them all for himself, allowing the clients to look but not touch. I couldn't start the camgirl line for some reason, and the landlord also feels very simple and with little to no control of what happens.
• Still on that path, more build-up. Vanna quickly goes from stranger to brave hero and quickly fallen savior. The way everything advances quickly can be nice (less bullshit) but it might also make the fall less impacting. Would be nice to get to know her after she manages to get the manager off your ass, without knowing what's going on behind the scenes. Maybe even starting a relationship as she hints at slowly getting more aloof and corrupted?

Regardless of any of that, you have a really solid base with very good content and image choices. Godspeed, Dev!

Different starts is a good idea. Once I have enough content it might be something I explore.

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The landlord path was the first one I ever coded, I think that shows I'll improve it eventually.
I may drag out the development and fall in the future. But right now, with not too much content, dragging things out would just bore the players I feel.. I hate clicking for 30 minutes for 1 jpg. But It's something I could do in the future.
Thanks for the suggestions.

 

[DracoBorealis]

Nice game so far although its very limited to what you do, buying some new clothes would be nice so far I got 2000 dollars after month of playing and nothing to burn the hard earned cash, but hey its 0.01.

 

[Nightcloak]

No clue if ntr is in this game or not from that description as that "if this is ntr, then it's ntr" isn't sufficient to determine. Time for a fetish class kids: ntr stands for actually a family of fetishes, the ones I'm aware of being NeToRare, NeToRase, and NeToRi.

NeToRare: the most prolific of the three and if people know any one of the theree it's usually this one. In netorare a couple has their relationship shattered by a third party providing evidently mind-blowing sex to one of the two (while this is typically some kind of delinquent dude stealing an "honest hard working man's" wife, both the genders and stage of the relationship can vary). This is treated as a tragedy and the cucked individual's reactions can range from suicide to snapping and magically deciding they're into that shit, but the relationship is dead and the second person doesn't think anything of them anymore.

NeToRase: basically a couple with a swinging/cucking fetish. Both individuals in the base couple are perfectly fine with one fucking half the known world while the other gets little to no action, it doesn't harm their relationship in any way and they tend to go to bed still very much in love.

NeToRi: this one is much closer to netorare than netorase, but with a perspective shift. Rather than the story being about some random guy coming in and wrecking a lovely relationship, the focus (because "protagonist" is still a bit strong in this scenario) is the homewrecker not the wrecked home. This is sometimes treated as a revenge story or "justified" in some way (MC gets bullied so now he's stealing the bully's gf etc) but not always.

Edit: so actually playing the game the prologue/setting the stage is in fact ntr (though on the light side for ntr). for those wondering

 

[BryanZyr]

Some suggestions I could give in order to enrich the game experience:

- Add more options to the camgirl event. For stance, the MC can start off exposing herself completely, being a no-face camgirl, or wear a mask. After enough streams, viewers might make tip offers if she agrees to show face.
When the MC becomes a enough popular camgirl, they can request her to have real sex. Either with a man or a woman. The MC can then bring someone in from a dating APP, or alternatively, do a lottery for a viewer to meet her in person and fuck her on cam.
- Add a pharmacy that will introduce pregnancy management options. Such as birth control pills, condoms, plan B pills, pregnancy tests, etc. You can have it further developed by having consequences from sex. If the protagonist gets creampied, there would be a random chance she will get pregnant. This can either lead to an abortion, single mother ending, or shotgun marriage ending (if the MC gets pregnant from her boyfriend).
- prostitution job. Perhaps the MC can roam the streets and see a girl working as a street hooker. She can then ponder if prostitution might be her way out of poverty. If she decides to be a prostitute, she might catch the attention of a pimp and offer her work in a brothel were she can meet a varied type of clients.
- add a strip club were the MC can perform strip dances on a stage. The shows will start relatively modest with the MC doing an exotic dance and finishing with her doing full nude strips and masturbating from the audience. Alternatively, she can provide private lap dances and offer sex in exchange of some tips.

 

[blackravenoz]

Nice start so far.
I look at the content and get 2 little bugs in your code.
First you get the wrong path with the cam13.gif and cam14.gif.
Second the camshow with Mr.Johnson couldn´t be happen, because you set your variable $camgirl to 12 but ask for 13.

It´s a simple game so far, if you want my advice, keep the corruption slower and get more random events.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[NightOwl71]

Decent first release, especially for a dev newbie. So here is my feedback. I liked some design decisions you made - like the fast corruption progression in the lack of other content, otherwise you're right, ppl would be bored. Once the game is fleshed out more, I'd pace the start down. Also, doing 3 shifts in one day shouldn't be a permanent thing. And we need some more material for the good girl path over time and of course revenge paths towards ex-bf and family - at least based on what we read at the intro. Be aware of the model choices in the vids/pics please. I know it's almost impossible to keep it consistent over the game with a female MC, but I really hate when the model changes within one sequence or has zero resemblence. It just breaks the immersion. Most important of all, keep it fun to develop and play. You did a good job with that in your first release.

 

[Iscariote]

Not bad. I'm not really into games which use real porn footage, but this is not bad. I'm a huge fan of corruption routes, and I encourage you to creating a prostitution route. If you really wand to go dark, you may also build a drug user route where the girl little by little uses all her money in it and finishes in prostitution to pay for her doses (that may be too dark for some people though).

 

[Troll]

Chy are the tags in CAPS ?

 

[Abhorson]

Nice start so far.
I look at the content and get 2 little bugs in your code.
First you get the wrong path with the cam13.gif and cam14.gif.
Second the camshow with Mr.Johnson couldn´t be happen, because you set your variable $camgirl to 12 but ask for 13.

It´s a simple game so far, if you want my advice, keep the corruption slower and get more random events.

Thanks for picking through the code, that's very generous of you.
Re: Corruption. Yeah unfortunately there isn't too much content in the game right now. As more stuff is added I'll have the luxury of taking my time since there will be more stuff for players to do while they wait for the next porn scene.

 

[Abhorson]

Chy are the tags in CAPS ?

It was recommended in the guidelines...though come to think of it, most games don't use caps. <shrug>