Ok...lets give this a try...
I am totally open to suggestions if you want to DM me. Anything that will help me get better is appreciated. Some of it is what I'm limited to with my current resources others may be lack of training
Didn't notice. I usually have to work on stuff late night after work and guess my eyes were too tired. May address that before next release
Design choice, I kinda like it. Maybe she wears colored contacts?
That's because one is a dream sequence (proving my point you can't review a game based on the images folder). I personally HATE dream sequences as they usually are used as an excuse to include H-content which the author hasn't "earned" yet. But it appears in the original 2 versions.
Not my first choice, but the best I can do with my current resources.