This is an exceptionally hot corruption VN. The village of Grimwood seems okay on the outside but there is something creepy and supernatural going on there. The citizens of Grimwood seem to have separate agendas and many of them aren't good for our innocent Lily. I have no complaints at all about what is there right now.
That said, a lot of events happen to Lily that allude to some supernatural forces or perhaps something more conventional like something being slipped in her drink. Why is all of this going on and who are the different actors? My fear is that there is a lot of backstory that will be left out because everyone is looking for the sexy stuff. There is already a lot of depth for one of the paths but at this point there isn't much else so I guess I would like to see how this plays out because this could be a fairly expansive VN if constructed right.
That said, a lot of events happen to Lily that allude to some supernatural forces or perhaps something more conventional like something being slipped in her drink. Why is all of this going on and who are the different actors? My fear is that there is a lot of backstory that will be left out because everyone is looking for the sexy stuff. There is already a lot of depth for one of the paths but at this point there isn't much else so I guess I would like to see how this plays out because this could be a fairly expansive VN if constructed right.