- Thread starter Saxonado Studios
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- Sep 30, 2018
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Honestly it felt like a nothing sandwich. Opens with anxiety inducing her leaving you on read all day, again, comes home and oops teehee sorry. Next days she's gone to the gym with random guy number 2 and you have to check his Instagram to see his posts of his wife and then after having to wait for her again, even the dirty talk was lame and no reclaim either. I know I'm a bit of a downer over the last few updates but when I heard it was more of a tease update I got my expectations too high. Story is focused too much on her fucking around and not enough on couples dynamic like it was at the start. And given the weak quality of the writing you can tell the writer just wrote bbc in because that's what the poll chose, the writing could have been way sexier and he could have actually spent some of the update focusing on the couple and not a quick and cheap buildup for a quick and cheap sex scene. He should have stuck to his guns whatever they were cuz this ain't it it's too much low effort ntr bait while abandoning what made the wife sexy for me which was her demonstrated devotion. Having her go off on her own and him having no say in what she does and having to wait around for her all day no answer day after day isn't it. Hope everyone else enjoyed it though.
- Jan 30, 2021
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you dont have to type this much just type u want a vanilla route.
Small correction, same hour. She's home for only a few minutes before she leaves again. I thought that was weirdly rushed. She just came home from a tiring business trip, where also she just had the first sex away from the husband - kind of a big deal - and she can't even chill for a little bit and talk to her husband before going out to the gym? The scene didn't necessarily need to be longer, you could've just had a fade to black time skip to a few days later. It's just that having her come and immediately go back on more NTS plays away from the MC makes it feel like these events weren't really that important to her.
I liked the opening with mc being paranoid why Amelia was late and not answering. It was good showcase how she isn't just always messing with him and that he gets carried away with his thinking. While her going to the gym right after coming home was initially disappointing I think it paid off with him losing patience and taking control later. And having to check Brandon's social media is nice variety how mc knows about her activities with added bonus that bunch of other people get to see her.
As I said in earlier post it was good introduction for arc to build up from especially with mc joining the gym as well so there is room for mc/Amelia moments. Having two guys back to back where mc just sits at home would have been lame.
- Jan 13, 2019
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What i expect in future:
-Gangbang (yeah this will obviously happen)
-Dogging in car
-Exhibitionism and she gets groped a lot
-Another beach trip but strangers jerk and cum in her body.
-Drunk bait (she's drunk and some stranger took advantage of her)
-Glory hole
-Train scenes
-More groping scenes
-Exhibitionism in changing room in mall
-Gangbang (yeah this will obviously happen)
-Dogging in car
-Exhibitionism and she gets groped a lot
-Another beach trip but strangers jerk and cum in her body.
-Drunk bait (she's drunk and some stranger took advantage of her)
-Glory hole
-Train scenes
-More groping scenes
-Exhibitionism in changing room in mall
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