VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.11] [Saxonado Studios]

[nidezrel]

To be fair, for last update specifically we only saw what happen in the gym itself through Amelia's recollection while they were reclaiming. It's entirely possible she was playing it up for effect.

Given what he does in the locker room, it seems entirely plausible that everything she said was true.

For people who might still not see the issue here, imagine that the MC hadn't stumbled on them in the locker rooms. What would've happened? Brandon seemed intent on having his way with her, even with her saying she wanted him to stop, so she was going to end up raped, or she was going to break free and escape, and likely have been traumatized by the situation. Also, she might've also been found by someone else and suffer further humiliation - oh look, there's the woman that was fucking Brandon in the lockers. This is pretty bad, man. I don't know that you could redeem the situation with a few extra lines.

 

[unknown5629]

Given what he does in the locker room, it seems entirely plausible that everything she said was true.

For people who might still not see the issue here, imagine that the MC hadn't stumbled on them in the locker rooms. What would've happened? Brandon seemed intent on having his way with her, even with her saying she wanted him to stop, so she was going to end up raped, or she was going to break free and escape, and likely have been traumatized by the situation. Also, she might've also been found by someone else and suffer further humiliation - oh look, there's the woman that was fucking Brandon in the lockers. This is pretty bad, man. I don't know that you could redeem the situation with a few extra lines.

I think the locker room was a bad setting.
But I’m sure everyone can make up their own head canon about what happened.

personally, I think she wasn’t exactly bothered by it, and would have proceeded without the husband.

It’s just the first time there’s been an actual partner who is a bit more dominant and sax wanted a more submissive Ame when it comes to those types.

she’s a mafia princess who threatened Geist and takes no shit. I’m sure she could have gotten out of there.

 

[nidezrel]

personally, I think she wasn’t exactly bothered by it, and would have proceeded without the husband

Really? I don't think she would've. If she was down for it, I don't think she would've resisted in the first place.

I've been thinking, and the only way that I think this could maybe be redeemed for me is with some sort of reverse blackmail. Bust Brandon when he's with Amelia in the lockers, and threaten to expose him. Now, you've got him under your thumb. He has to do what you tell him, or he's fucked. It doesn't overwrite him being a sex offender, but it establishes that the MC does care about Amelia's safety and not just getting his rocks off, stops this nasty almost rape plot, and passifies this loose cannon character. And then you can just order him to cooperate in the NTS plays for you two.

I just wish this situation was avoided altogether. Playing with oblivious bulls, who think they're actually doing something illicit and making a married woman cheat, just attracts the worst types of characters. Feels like too much drama for a game that's trying to avoid drama.

 

[Fitharia]

personally, I think she wasn’t exactly bothered by it, and would have proceeded without the husband.

I'm sure you wrong there, she wouldn't have done it, if it wasn't for her hubbies kink, she was clearly bothered by it, why she settled with a bj, but that wasn't what Brandon wanted, he wanted to fuck her right there. This setting for me kinda ruined the game, it was alot better before.

 

[Adhdclassic]

I could be wrong but DEV said no hard NTR but that was damn close. For me it kinda removed the lightheartedness.

 

[yosiahsomthing21]

Is it just me or is there no skip button?
(No disrespect, loving the game)

 

[luccel]

Is it just me or is there no skip button?
(No disrespect, loving the game)

100000% just u

 

[Poundar]

Here’s some context from the dev regarding the locker room scene and what they intended.

“Oh yeah, it's hard to convey fully of course but my intention was always that Ammie was just stalling for time!

She was under the impression that MC was watching the various exercises the whole time and saw him watching (even when he didn't think she was)

I debated writing in a moment after the 3rd exercise where Ammie would have said something like "Ohh, I think I hurt my arm... Do you want to help me patch it up in the locker room...?~" where it's explicit what Amelia's intentions were, but I preferred having it be more of a surprise reveal in the end.

Ammie wasn't in any pain, or wasn't enjoying it, she was trying to wait for MC to arrive before really "starting".
When it took longer than expected, she was trying her best to endure the pleasure, thinking that if MC didn't turn up, she would just have to tell him about it after or something... But luckily he did!”

 

[Poundar]

Here’s some context from the dev regarding the locker room scene and what they intended.

“Oh yeah, it's hard to convey fully of course but my intention was always that Ammie was just stalling for time!

She was under the impression that MC was watching the various exercises the whole time and saw him watching (even when he didn't think she was)

I debated writing in a moment after the 3rd exercise where Ammie would have said something like "Ohh, I think I hurt my arm... Do you want to help me patch it up in the locker room...?~" where it's explicit what Amelia's intentions were, but I preferred having it be more of a surprise reveal in the end.

Ammie wasn't in any pain, or wasn't enjoying it, she was trying to wait for MC to arrive before really "starting".
When it took longer than expected, she was trying her best to endure the pleasure, thinking that if MC didn't turn up, she would just have to tell him about it after or something... But luckily he did!”

They also followed this up by stating they’ll make a few writing tweaks to convey this better.

So anyone running wild with NTR, Rape, blackmail accusations can just take a chill pill.

 

[unknown5629]

Here’s some context from the dev regarding the locker room scene and what they intended.

“Oh yeah, it's hard to convey fully of course but my intention was always that Ammie was just stalling for time!

She was under the impression that MC was watching the various exercises the whole time and saw him watching (even when he didn't think she was)

I debated writing in a moment after the 3rd exercise where Ammie would have said something like "Ohh, I think I hurt my arm... Do you want to help me patch it up in the locker room...?~" where it's explicit what Amelia's intentions were, but I preferred having it be more of a surprise reveal in the end.

Ammie wasn't in any pain, or wasn't enjoying it, she was trying to wait for MC to arrive before really "starting".
When it took longer than expected, she was trying her best to endure the pleasure, thinking that if MC didn't turn up, she would just have to tell him about it after or something... But luckily he did!”

Understandable. It’s hard to write nuance in nts without the NTR people losing their minds

 

[Fartfacereturnss]

Understandable. It’s hard to write nuance in nts without the NTR people losing their minds

Been seeing more reactions from NTS people and Anti-BBC people honestly. Complaints that the bulls are too forceful or not enough reclamation.

 

[SomethingBoring]

Can anyone help with a problem I have , no matter what I do the game Locks me into saying yes to race play I choose all blue options from start to finish and it still doesn't let me say no , anyone have any idea what to do ?

 

[LksLight]

I rather like the direction things are going with the latest updateds. Seems the writer has finally got back into his usual game.

 

[retadrddoge]

now thats what im talking about. this update is good, this bitch head game is crazy. I COOOM

 

[nidezrel]

Here’s some context from the dev regarding the locker room scene and what they intended.

“Oh yeah, it's hard to convey fully of course but my intention was always that Ammie was just stalling for time!

She was under the impression that MC was watching the various exercises the whole time and saw him watching (even when he didn't think she was)

I debated writing in a moment after the 3rd exercise where Ammie would have said something like "Ohh, I think I hurt my arm... Do you want to help me patch it up in the locker room...?~" where it's explicit what Amelia's intentions were, but I preferred having it be more of a surprise reveal in the end.

Ammie wasn't in any pain, or wasn't enjoying it, she was trying to wait for MC to arrive before really "starting".
When it took longer than expected, she was trying her best to endure the pleasure, thinking that if MC didn't turn up, she would just have to tell him about it after or something... But luckily he did!”

Well, that answers that. Can't argue with intent when we've got it from the horse's mouth. If her dialogue is rewritten to not look like she's resisting unwanted advances, then there's no reason for the MC to be concerned for her safety, and solves that problem.

Personally, that answer makes me a bit sad. I really thought, given everything that happened until now, that Amelia would not go as far as to fuck him in secret. Especially when she said what she said when they arrived at the gym. It feels like that meant nothing if she would go as far as doing that. Her personality and tone in the story seem to have taken a shift, into more secretive sex with others and less romance with husband.

Also, once again, what about condoms? Surely neither were carrying any. Would Saxy really be down with her doing him raw right then, without checking with the husband? Really? If so, then man...

 

[deviousstorm]

I took it more of she is teasing the MC than she would actually do it. I would also guess she did not have sex with the trainer after leaving. If anything probably cleaning up. Now I would mind if we got her perspective of her cleaning up, maybe even talking to brandon? Like did I do it right etc etc. While the MC is dreaming up his wife getting absolutely plastered by Brandon.

 

[nidezrel]

I took it more of she is teasing the MC than she would actually do it. I would also guess she did not have sex with the trainer after leaving. If anything probably cleaning up. Now I would mind if we got her perspective of her cleaning up, maybe even talking to brandon? Like did I do it right etc etc. While the MC is dreaming up his wife getting absolutely plastered by Brandon.

Yeah, I like the idea of him dreaming up secretive sex as opposed to her actually having secretive sex here. I think the earlier delusion scenes in the game worked really well in this regard. Have the raunchy delusions, but keep the real stuff above board and more innocent.

I guess Saxy always said that this is what was gonna happen, right? That the content in the delusions would just become the reality over time. I just didn't think it would be like this. It feels like a shift in tone that is much less vanilla now. I can't help being disappointed.

 

[deviousstorm]

Yeah, I like the idea of him dreaming up secretive sex as opposite to her actually having secretive sex here. I think the earlier delusion scenes in the game worked really well in this regard. Have the raunchy delusions, but keep the real stuff above board and more innocent.

I guess Saxy always said that this is what was gonna happen, right? That the content in the delusions would just become the reality over time. I just didn't think it would be like this. It feels like a shift in tone that is much less vanilla now. I can't help being disappointed.

I am not particularly thinking that will happen. I am personally fine with it. but I get the criticism.

Personally I wish it was contextualized a little bit better maybe?

 

[secrethentai123]

I for one actually loved the update and loved exactly to the dot what happened! The update was great.

 

[wommerrx]

I don't really like this idea of having fixed bulls, I think it's kind of shitty, but I don't know my opinion, only if you can choose which ones they will be because Brandon's personality is shit.