This is flat out the most promising first release of an adult game I've ever seen, and very likely to become one of my all-time favourites if you keep this up. Overall exceptional work for a first release! [Incoming wall of text]
The review (based on v0.2.1):
- the writing is overall great, on a level rarely seen in adult games. The dialogue is smart and witty, nothing is overexplained, and the jokes are on point. I personally care more about the quality of the writing than the quality of the artwork, having played plent of text-only games. As long as the story is good, the premise is exciting, and the dialogues are interesting, I'm sold. And Irphaeus totally nailed it so far. (Ithe game also avoids the usual trap of doing a boring exposition and making players read through walls of text before even getting started, which is becoming more and more of a problem with bad games.)
- highly diverse cast of characters with a wide range of girls to fit any and all fetishes and preferences. Even the male cast is fun and interesting (I love the otaku, he's the best). I am genuinely curious to learn more about some of the characters and would do so even if there was no sexual content at the end of it. The game does a super great job of making everyone feel unique and appealing, with everything from the looks of the girls to their personalities and apparent motivations. Kudos!
- the girls are incredibly hot, each and every one of them. The game introduces them well, which helps a lot with my first impressions, but even so I was blown away by how every one of them was different than the last! The wide range of hair colours and styles, heights, faces, personalities, and of course boob sizes is impressive and appreciated. (I totally love the way the MC mentions the girls' cup sizes all the time!). But more importantly, it manages to make me WANT the girls from the very beginning. I can't decide which one to focus on first and that's a massive plus for the game. I will definitely keep coming back for more with every new release.
- while the overall story of the game is rather cliche (the guy wanting revenge, wanting a harem, the school setting, etc), the main character is definitely not. I love playing as him. I like that the MC actually has a real reason to want revenge. I like that he's a real villain, at least for now. I like that he's smart!! I like that he knows how to talk to girls, that he's not shy or inexperienced. I like that he's confident. And I like that he thinks big instead of just wanting to fuck everything that moves. He's definitely in my top 3 favourite adult game protagonists (so far).
- finally, I like your humour and the moments where the game brings in references from internet culture and such. I genuinely burst out laughing when the (br)otaku said 'Deus Vult' at the end of his nice speech about the MC. [insert 'Ah, I See You're a Man of Culture As Well' meme here]. It's very refreshing to see games of any kind bring in stuff like this. It just makes the world more believable.
I think I'll stop here, it's a huge ass wall of text ^^ What can I say, I haven't been this excited about an adult game in a very long time... A must-play for absolutely anyone!