VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Warlord [v1.0.1 Free] [deepglugs]

Nice story, nice girls, multiple endings, most of them not good. The game offers some replayability because of that.
I think I got the good ending, not sure if the best though, a certain goddess was not in the harem in the end.
The choices and consequences are not very intuitive, so you will probably not get a good end on the first try.
Overall, quite enjoyable.

Reviewed on 2024/03/31, Steam version 1.0.0
Score: 4/10


TL;DR:
While my first impression of this game was good, it ultimately failed to stand out. In the Adult Visual Novel-space, there is an expectation that the adage of “show, don't tell,” is followed. This game does the opposite. While this game certainly is an Adult Novel, visually it fails to stand out or impress.


Adult:
With 24 lewd scenes, there's plenty of adult content to be had. A few scenes are NTR situations, most others include family members.

Our MC, Icarus, is blessed by his succubus with a gigantic penis. During lewd animations, this often causes clipping. I'm sure there are some people who think it's hot to see a woman dislodge her jaw, I'm not one of them. Clipping is an issue in pretty much every animation. If it's not someone's hair, or legs, then it's the penis itself clipping through body parts or orifices.

The lewd scenes themselves consist of 1-3 looping animations, with wordy text describing what's actually happening. It will say how the lovers are touching each other, but it will rarely be shown. This also causes a disconnect between what's shown and what's read. The MC will be balls deep on screen, while the text is still leading up to it. Usually, these animations just consist of a single motion. While the movement looks fluid and natural, it gives a lifeless impression. This isn't helped by filters that make the women look like real life silicone sex dolls.

When the MC's face would be visible, a black circle covers it. I don't understand why. Is the dev worried about the MC's looks, or do they think this improves immersion or would let players more easily self-insert? I don't know. For me, it's distracting. Honestly, if players are capable of immersion or self-insertion with the massive cock, I'm sure they can handle seeing the MC's face.


Visual:
“Warlord” mixes photorealism with cartoon-style visuals. A heavy use of filters can make renders and characters look washed-out and out of focus.
Many scenes feature particle effects like animated fire, falling embers or floating dust, and I think these are gorgeous. But, if I had to pick between these animations and actually seeing characters fighting or lobbing fireballs, I'd choose the latter.

There's also a certain lack of attention to detail with these animations. They'll just abruptly restart their loop, and don't always fit what the text is describing.
A few visuals and animations stand out, and I wish more games would incorporate these. An example of this is the transition from night to day in Chapter 4.


Sound:
The choice of music is on-point. Scenes have a track that fits the general atmosphere and goings-on. There are no tracks with lyrics, which, I think, is perfect.


Novel:
Yes. This game is a novel.
Joking aside, a capable writer has written the story. There's a call to action, struggle, and potentially, victory. Player choice guides the protagonist down a certain path, which can lead to multiple endings. There seem to be 3 main endings, and several endings that can happen during the story.

I think I've only noticed one or two spelling mistakes, which is exceptional.

There are some inconsistencies between what's shown and described. The text will describe four soldiers, three will be shown. Things will appear on fire before a fight has started in full, and so on.

Toward the end, the story feels rushed. An interesting character is killed off, and suddenly the MC will infiltrate to attack the “big bad” with his sisters and aunt. It feels as if large parts of his hero's journey were waved away. The group of followers he gathered were abandoned and never mentioned again, and a single choice involving the succubus decides which of two endings the player gets.


Conclusion:
When deciding whether I'd recommend this game or not, I almost had to flip a coin. In a vacuum, I would hesitantly recommend this game, but in the AVN space, I can't. Not only did the story leave me wanting, the visual presentation of an animated render per few pages of text just doesn't do it for me.


Remarks:

• The replay gallery isn't accessible during the game, only from the main menu
• The absence of a (configurable) textbox makes some text difficult to read on bright backgrounds.
• Many, if not all, scene animation noticeably restarts its loop after a while. Including the Main Menu background.
• The scene gallery shows 24 locked scenes, some are marked as ELITE
• Elite is an NTR mode, players have to manually enable this (every time) after starting a new game. The game doesn't inform the player about it existing, and doesn't ask if the player wants it enabled.
• Some visual effects are very disorienting. Like when reading a long conversation while the render is constantly zooming in & out.
• While lewd scenes often show cum shots, its viscosity is too liquid.
• Characters are shown through side-images, but they don't show emotion and don't have action poses.
• There's no music on the main menu
• Some music tracks are too silent compared to others.

Very entertaining.
A good sidestep from the already great main story line. Character developement of both the mc and Eisheth depending on your choices are well-made. I was a bit skeptical at first but liked the idea that a mortal could influence an ancient and powerful being trough their connection in the end.
Some of the character models looked a bit strange in some scenes but apart from that it's visually pleasing in my opinion.

Sexy AVN with a mildly dark plot. The story is relatively easy to follow, the models are very attractive, and the visuals are above average. My only issue with the story is that the MC should have been having sex like his life depended on it, because it literally did. I realize there was a gradual corruption element, but the collection of "Lust Energy" necessitated those kinds of encounters, with a very willing harem. The lust and chaos stats seem to get lost in the development of the story, with the AVN slowly morphing into a more simple kinetic story that avoids stats. Some choices have severe consequences and it's worth a few playthroughs to figure out the different endings. Very much enjoyed this and look forward to future productions of this creator.

This game started out OK as a mildly darker fantasy game with an interesting model art style and some decent dialogue. By update 12-14, most of the game has been replaced by incredibly bland AI art and character monologue. There are several scenes where instead of talking to the LIs, the selling point of the game, the character instead monologues and then it says that he then spoke to the LIs. There was a whole update with like, maybe half a scene worth of conversation with romantic interests and a sex scene it says you blacked out for and thus do not get to see.

Incredibly disappointing turn for this game, which was a solid four before this. Would not recommend.

The story and writing are really good but the visuals are underwhelming at best.
AI imagery isn't good enough by far and lacks cohesion, it breaks immersion instantly.
Animations and 3d renders are below decent.
This isn't a visual novel but a good regular novel with a lackluster illustration every 5 pages of text.

Good (really): Story and writing
Bad (really): Visuals

Besides maybe the first cumshot just awesome animations, voicing etc. Doesn't get said often enough but I personally really hate games that doesn't the freeze frame flashing orgasms and more animators needs to adapt animated cumshots and creampies.

This is one excellent little thing right there.

While it certainly could use more renders during the action scenes (battles and travel, not sex in this case), the game is pretty nice.

The art is somewhat different to what we're used to, but it works well, aside from the cum which looks absolutely ridiculous.

The story is pretty decent, and considering the settings of the game, makes sense as well.

Beware though, there aren't many choices so far, and some combination of choices, will seemingly lock you out of the "best content" (depending on one's tastes of course.)

The game, from its lore and choices, seems to be best played by trying to keep your chaos and lust in exact balance, which is incredibly difficult to do considering the few choices available, and the fact that just missing one, will very heavily throw you into the other path (locking you out of choices very quickly.)

interesting and emotional story
models are sexy and beautiful
in my opinion game can use more choices
i like the medieval games so i keep an eye on this one
keep the updates coming and good luck to dev

The most banal of the story starts: "hero village got burned down thus he rages and makes the contact with some dark and misterious power"
The only original appeal was it being dark and gritty but that got rework with tags being changed to a more vanilla and family friendly ones(pun about incest replacing rape intended). Making an already mediocre piece even more basic both story and porn wise.
The graphics/3D models are somewhat good when it comes to faces, even if a bit dated.
All in all:
Story 1/5
Graphics 4/5

So the Version I played was

Version: 0.5.1

I have to say I liked the game. I will be honest and say that at first I wasnt going to try the game because i wasnt a huge fan of the screenshots. I think what made me try the game the most was the name of the game.

When i hear Warlord i think of a conqueror or empire building. The death scene was tragic but it honestly served its goal.It made me want revenge but to not blind revenge. so i think you did a good job there.

Now though I got to kill the knights...now what. the vengence has been completed in a sense, so i am curious to see how the dev will make us see how and why we will end up as a warlord, or hero, or demon, or just guy trying to survival.

Warlord Review Version 0.5.1

It's kind of funny when you come across games. This one struck me for two reasons, some questionable decisions to start, and luckily, it had a style that appealed to me.

Now, I'm not gonna say the AI generated images are to everyone's taste, but I will say that the atmosphere of this game is very stylistic. It feels ethereal, like you're playing a game about the end of the world.

It's not quite that, but after what happens in the first scene, it might as well be the end of the world.

I'm not gonna do a full review cause the game is pretty short as it stands, rather I'll give my general thoughts.

First and foremost, there is very sad moment at the start of this when someone close to MC dies. There is a LOT of anguish and if that bothers you, like it did to a reviewer below, you don't have to play it. HOWEVER, it was set up very well. It USED to be a LOT more controversial prior to this most recent update with the character being raped as well. Luckily the Dev changed it, or I wouldn't have given it a shot.

Second, the story. We can talk about what makes a good story, but it's so short none of that really matters. What matters is the telling of the limited story and the Dev does a great job of setting up this tragic story and making it affect all those involved. And they clearly have an idea of the universe the characters inhabit because they have lore out the ass.

The MC is the part that I like. There are some decisions you can make that will probably determine some corrupt/good MC, but that's for the future. The MC is not just a dude going on his sexual impulses, he thinks about the scenarios and acknowledges the family taboo. The fact that he finds himself in such situations but manages to come out squeaky clean is awesome to me. We need more MC's that don't give in to temptation at the first moment.

Lastly, I LOVE the art in the game. Not the AI art necessarily, though it does its job, rather I love the models. I don't know what models the Dev uses, but I love the, this sounds insulting but it's not, plastic look from them. It reminds me of the hot video game characters of the past during the Xbox/PS2/Gamecube era. Just nicer and more detailed.

I'm happy to give this fledgling game a 5 because I like the style, it has an earnest attempt at something well thought out and the MC refuses to be a part of a sex game. So far

Good job on the changes @deepglugs

TDLR, v0.5.1, a very early version of the game, so take the review for what it is, but this seem to be a game from a dev that can manage both posing/renders/animations *and* story-telling and character building. That is quite rare and usually means the game will be good.

Pros

• Interesting story and take on classical mythology
  
  
• Unique looking models, unique looking cock for MC (not the same recycled one that can be found in so many Daz3D- and Honey Select-games)
  
  
• Very smooth animations
  
  
• Male MC bigger than female characters (what it looks like anyway)
  
  
• Choices matter. I think. You seem to choose if you try to stay on the narrow path or if you go down the autostrada of lust, violence and revenge. However, as mentioned, early game and it might turn out to be more railroad:ed than that, so take this with a grain of salt.
  
  
• Fitting and atmospheric music
  
  
• Good writing that mostly support the tone the dev seem to want to create.
  
  
• Deep worldbuilding that grounds the story.

Cons

• Non choices. A couple "choices" in the beginning where there is only one alternative. What's the point of that?
  
  
• Railroaded choices: As a counterpoint to what I wrote above about the choices seeming to matter, in the beginning there are a couple of formative choices where the player is forced to choose revenge and romantic interest for his sisters. The player can choose options that do not contain those elements, but all those lead to an immediate game over. Nothing wrong with the dev deciding that these two elements are going to be a part of the game regardless of how the player want to play the MC, but the fact that the dev choose to rub the players nose in how the MC has to be played in this instance might signify that the story will be more railroad:ed in practice than other choices presently seem to indicate. But once more, early on, we'll see later on.
  
  
• Minor errors in language and pronouns. For instance refering to soldiers from the empire as emperial soldiers rather than imperial soldiers.
  
  
• Minor errors in tone that makes the MC feel more like a modern person than someone living in the middle ages. But mostly it feels on point.

In its current form, this is not a visual novel. It's mostly walls of text with various bland background scenes. The majority of the "story" is in text only, you don't even see renders of the characters. The few character renders that are currently in the game are most for the H-scenes, which are rather unremarkable.

I don't see much hope for this "story" (it's really not a game) in its current form.

It was an okay game with renders that stand out enough to not be totally lost in the shuffle but since the dev decided to tone content back to please people who wanted the game less adult and more PG rated, it's less of a dark adult game and blurs in more with with dozens of other games with very similar plots. Still, I'll round a 2.5 up to a 3 for the renders being unique enough.

Version : Ch 4
Playtime : 1-2 hours (so far)

Models/Renders : Good
Story : Good
Dialogs : Quite good (proofreading needed)
Immersion : Good

I've just finished my playthrough and I really liked it. It doesn't have much content yet but it's very promising.

It needs a little proof reading to fix some dialogs, but the I really like the storytelling and interactions : not too long and not too short.
I like the dynamic foreground/background effects and the efforts to make the scenes more "alive".
I'll update my rating in the future, and I hope this will continue, because it's very promising and I really really like where (I think) it's going. I can't wait to give it a better rating because in my opinion you have a 5 stars material here.

Thank you for your hard work, I might support you in the future.

Under normal circumstances I would argue that the plot has a lot going for it. Moral dilemma, the depicition human abysses combined with erotica. It can be a very good premise for a dark plot.

What I don't like is when authors use rape or sexual violence as a plot device and even though the depiction in Warlord is not explicit, it feels very much implied and is rubbed in. The mother becomes a victim of sexual barbarism in order to emotionally stir the protagonist and thus the viewer. In a way, it would be more honest if the abuse of the mother was depicted with renders, because the lack of renders leaves it to the viewer's imagination to imagine even worse.

The fact that the protagonist is incapacitated by the plot shortly beforehand (basically only for this purpose) and that you are expected to fight a desperate and pointless fight to save your mother is pretty much the foundation of the exploitation genre. You are supposed to feel total despair so that you carry the emotional scar of the protagonist along with you.

This is the main reason for the low rating. I think there are other points of criticism, e.g. too few renders for very important scenes, static portraits as a substitute for scene renders and text as a render substitute.

I like the dark atmosphere, I also like traumatic events as a prelude to stories (just not blatant exploitation, there is an aesthetic to trauma depiction. Abuse is no stubtitute for good drama.), the art pieces and the fantasy setting. The music is very powerful as well.

The developer hinted that he might abandon this VN unless he gets a good reception. And I truly think there is potential buried in there. But don't base the emotional involvement of your MC on the sexual abuse of others, unless you want to tell a story about madness. And even then it's honestly a cheap shot.

Good stuff
Likable competent protag.
Attractive women.
Interesting story with solid writing.

Bad stuff
Early version with a short amount of content.

Thoughts
I really enjoyed my time playing this game & think it has a lot of potential. Looking forward to future updates. Will likely update review as game is updated.