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I feel like the realistic face works better because it fits her body more.
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There's already another story planned with these characters.
But if you have any ideas for students and teachers, I'd love to hear them, as they'll be in 0.4.
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Ok thanks for the ideas I'll keep that aside. For now the only 2 new characters for version 0.3.5 are the MC's mother and sister. Right now I'm recreating the MC's sprite. I'm going to change his haircut and hair color.
Also for the kind-hearted teacher with a huge booty, she could have brown hair and be the history teacher for the class. Maybe she bring up ancient history that the MC will connect with aliens?
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Hey dev!
I'm a french speaker as, I suppose, you are. And as such, some typical "frenglish" mistranslations stand out to me in your writing.
I'm currently just starting the game but I noticed two things that you should be wary of:
- Too much "But". You shouldn't use "but" to emphasize stuff like you do in french. "Mais non", "Mais qu'est-ce que tu fous ?!" feel off when translated using "but ...". In these cases, just remove the word "but" and it should feel more natural. You can add a "sigh" or some expletive if you really want to add some emphasis.
- "On est Dimanche" translates to "It's Sunday" rather than "We are Sunday"
I'll try to add to the list if I find other simple mistakes that stand out to me.
Good luck with the game!
I'm a french speaker as, I suppose, you are. And as such, some typical "frenglish" mistranslations stand out to me in your writing.
I'm currently just starting the game but I noticed two things that you should be wary of:
- Too much "But". You shouldn't use "but" to emphasize stuff like you do in french. "Mais non", "Mais qu'est-ce que tu fous ?!" feel off when translated using "but ...". In these cases, just remove the word "but" and it should feel more natural. You can add a "sigh" or some expletive if you really want to add some emphasis.
- "On est Dimanche" translates to "It's Sunday" rather than "We are Sunday"
I'll try to add to the list if I find other simple mistakes that stand out to me.
Good luck with the game!
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No, we meet the real mother in the next version, but we can't fuck her yet.
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Thank you for your feedback, yes I am French and I have a lot of trouble with English grammar so your corrections are really welcome. Thank you very much
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thanks for your hopes, the next version comes out in less than a week.
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Thanks for your work bro, I think everybody will agree when I say that a big update would be better.