While the art style is cute, the writing is a bit sloppy. It really needs some serious proofreading. Also, hiding the textbox hid the mobile video screen during the call to the "stepgrandmother". They need to do away with putting step in front of everything, if it is for Patreon, they still don't like stepcest anymore than incest. You could make it clear at the first that you are the step-child then just drop putting step in front of every mention of a "family" member. Nobody ever says "hi, stepgrandma" or "what's up stepcuz", they either just use their name or they use the more familial terms like grandma or cuz. Although cuz is not really used as much for your actual cousin as it is a friend. We tend to just call our cousins by their names. Maybe if you are fucking your cousin, you could slip the word in there for some kinkiness but not in just general conversation.