First you mentioned there aren't any choices -- that if you deny a suitor's netorase path, he'll NTR you instead. That isn't true. You can play the entire game without your wife fooling around with anyone but you, if you so desired. You also mentioned being "forced" to watch a patron jerk off on your wife, which is again false. You as an MC can choose to watch that happen, after which your wife takes your voyeurism as tacit approval to flirt with that patron.
false, i tried that with Danton and still had to see him jerking off to her. I did stop him
in the process but the wife got mad about it. And the MC was kinda unhappy too, he wanted to get cucked. Okay, maybe the other path is not exactly NTR, more like cuck-in-denial, it still feels NTRish. So from the player's perspective it's not a meaningful choice and certainly far from True Love vibe.
Secondly, you mentioned there are no mythological races in this fantasy game -- that is also false, as I already have a centaur and orc in the game, as well as a goblin coming in the next chapter.
I say the two BBCs are the main focus and the central characters. The mythological creatures are more like side characters. Eg Danton is omnipresent and always chasing after the wife. You can't just say 'fuck off' to him. You said he will be the central character through the whole game. Along with the other BBC guy.
Thirdly, you mentioned I, as a dev, didn't "want" to add sounds, while I'm presently in the process of doing so. Strange that you have access to my internal design documents.
I asked you about it a few times. You never answered me but answered other users that you always play VNs w/o sounds so you consider them completely unnecessary. I just reflected that in the review. You never wrote you are going to adding sounds IIRC. I think it's fair for players to know how little importance you put on that aspect.
The only thing you got right was that the first two suitors are black and the MC is less endowed than them. But to reduce my characters to "BBC guy" and "Ugly Bastard" is, frankly, insulting.
never wrote anything about "less endowed than them". I don't even quite get what you mean. If you mean the MC's dick size then I didn't touch this matter at all. As for them not being "BBC guys" - well, they are black, they have huge dicks, in the game's world they are extremely attractive to women, one because of the physique, the other because of his money. And they have unhealthy obsession with the MC's wife, the wife reciprocates and the MC can't just tell them to fuck off - that's textbook BBC guys.
But what's disappointing to me most is that you've played my game at least three times, have been contributing to my thread since July (you and I had multiple conversations!), yet you decided to drop a 1* now, months later. Yikes man. I hope your weekend gets better.
I liked the early stages of your game before I reached the moment where I realized how little choice I got. I had a little convo with
reidanota on the matter back then so I even have evidence that I had all these complains already then. The other day I tried it again, hoping I'd maybe see it in different light, but no, I just can't. The game really went from 4/5 to 1/5 in that moment where regardless of which of the 3 options I choose in the tavern, regardless of what path I'm on (rival or cuck), I'm still forced to see Danton jerking off to my wife and if I stop him in the process, the cucky MC will regret it, he will dream about it, while the wife and Danton are both unhappy about him stopping it (even on the rival's path).
So I realized that I can't like the game. I wrote review pointing out it and exactly why. I think it's fair for other players to know about this criticism too.
. The score definitely means it's not for everyone, but sometimes you might find something flawed with just the right kinks.
