Art looks great, including the semi-animations.
Wish the UI was a bit more game specific.
Game feels heavy, saving and loading or clicking things instead of being snappy either doesn't register or takes a second.
Hoping in the end he does get that orgy with his moms.
Most of the text is great with no typos, or purposefully used ones. The stuff below is just what kind of stood out to me. Left of the colon is in game, right is thoughts or fixes.
Really?! ahhhh : Ahhh (MC naming scene)
I had had enough! : (yes this is grammatically correct, but reads weird especially to non native speakers)
like my own mothers : (same as above)
That is until when her evil : (similar)
You'll have everything necessary for this mission with you. : (same)
most certainly wont : won't
know how it's like thinking : (similar)
Bunt NOBODY : But
better hit the bed : (similar)
(clicking on things feels heavy, slow, and sometimes doesn't register)
After doing something you can re-trigger it as long as you haven't advanced time, like going to the riverside and first meeting myrtle, if you go back to map and back to riverside the chat triggers again
when you were sleep : asleep
(not a fan of how all choices end up the same)
What's worst than being eaten : worse
(can click to look at pixie house before clicking pixie, which makes me think MC would be weirded out about a small house before seeing them)
doing anythin bad to you : anything (maple broken wing)
and I won't be surprised and if all this : (reads weird)
She must be sleep now : asleep
don't you go an rest : and
friend take a good care : (remove a)
Going to pamper maple even if you change the time frame before night retriggers same convo.
And say hello to Bun-Bunu : (seems like MC should say "for me", otherwise he should expect friends to say hello to each other)
to Pixitown for that : Pixietown