What is she doing - NTR game

mily.dominant

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Hi.
It has been some time since I wanted to make a "game", well more like interactive story than a game. So I finally decided to try it :)
I use sugarcube for the game and I want to focus mostly on the story than anything else (grinding etc is not what I really like but I will use some repetitiveness so it is not just sex scene to sex scene ).
I know I could have used renpy for this but with few images I personally enjoy HTML more than renpy. So since I do not plan on making any 3D models or anything and I am using real pictures and embed them into the story in the HTML.

The game is a NTR game and the main twist you can enjoy in the game is that you will have 3 ways of NTR.
  1. Your partner does not know you know what she is doing and you spy on her.
  2. Your partner does not know you know and you interact with the people she is doing it.
  3. Your partner knows you know and she is the one telling you about it while those she does it with does not know that you know. (Damn that is a terrible sentence hope you understand :D )
Also these ways will not all be exactly the same for example when your partner tells you she may omit some stuff.

This post is very very alpha and at this point I dont know if I should focus on polishing the esthetics of the game or focus more on the storytelling, let me know in comments :)
If you ask why I even posted this very short version, then it is because I would like some feedback that would pump me up to work on it more. :)

Obviously I accept and constructive criticsm :)
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foxicube

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This is my first time playing a game with real photos taken from the internet but i gotta say , i really liked the whole feel to it. It's an alpha release so i know there isn't much yet but I think this could be great if more content was added! Great job :D
 

mily.dominant

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This is my first time playing a game with real photos taken from the internet but i gotta say , i really liked the whole feel to it. It's an alpha release so i know there isn't much yet but I think this could be great if more content was added! Great job :D
Thank you for the feedback :) I really appreaciate it. I will do my best.

And I know I put it in absolutely wrong thread :D But I dont know how to move it :D
 

foxicube

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Thank you for the feedback :) I really appreaciate it. I will do my best.

And I know I put it in absolutely wrong thread :D But I dont know how to move it :D
Contact the admins by opening a ticket . They are usually really polite and helpful im sure they ll guide you.
 

Adabelitoo

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I'm not really into NTR VNs (I do like NTR doujins and hentai). The idea does seem interesting but if the guy knows about it and he doesn't care about he losing/sharing the girl then it's not really NTR (it's still NTR enought to make people complain about your game thou).

Maybe I'll check it once you finish the initial realease but I'm not a super fan of real porn or HTML either. In any case, good luck with your game.
 
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mily.dominant

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I'm not really into NTR VNs (I do like NTR doujins and hentai). The idea does seem interesting but if the guy knows about it and he doesn't care about he losing/sharing the girl then it's not really NTR (it's still NTR enought to make people complain about your game thou).

Maybe I'll check it once you finish the initial realease but I'm not a super fan of real porn or HTML either. In any case, good luck with your game.
There are a lot of NTR games where guy knows about and or doesn't care about sharing. Losing is different though. For example Cuckolding reports from Atelier Sakura
https://f95zone.to/threads/marinas-...eat-fuck-college-student-atelier-sakura.4361/
https://f95zone.to/threads/lendable...us-business-trips-final-atelier-sakura.22777/
So I have to disagree with that part.

The netorare has many aspects and ways. For example my favorite way is not when the protagonist pushes the partner to cheat but when the partner cheats on the protagonist and he somehow finds out and spies on her.
Other people like it when they proactively push the partner to cheat on them and have the partner share the experience (Cuckolding reports I mentioned above)
Others like the way when the partner openly dominates the protagonist and cheats on him. In my opinion that is the most close to typical cuckolding.

That is why I want to implement more ways to look at "What is she doing" ;) .

Anyways thanks for comment and hope you will try the game when it is bigger. I have a dilema now how big should the official release be :D From what I saw sometimes it was super small with zero scenes so I will think about it maybe finish one more day and see :)

There are many many things I will possibly add since my strongest side is the making the story. Maybe even non-netorare content.

And of course I would rather make a 3d models or drawing game but there it takes most time to make the graphics and I want to add more story and not wait for models to be made. Plus I would have to learn how to do that because I have no experience in it as well as am not artistic at all :D And making lame ugly models? Rather no models :D

All in all thanks for the feedback. :)
 

Adabelitoo

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There are a lot of NTR games where guy knows about and or doesn't care about sharing. Losing is different though. For example Cuckolding reports from Atelier Sakura
https://f95zone.to/threads/marinas-...eat-fuck-college-student-atelier-sakura.4361/
https://f95zone.to/threads/lendable...us-business-trips-final-atelier-sakura.22777/
So I have to disagree with that part.

The netorare has many aspects and ways. For example my favorite way is not when the protagonist pushes the partner to cheat but when the partner cheats on the protagonist and he somehow finds out and spies on her.
Other people like it when they proactively push the partner to cheat on them and have the partner share the experience (Cuckolding reports I mentioned above)
Others like the way when the partner openly dominates the protagonist and cheats on him. In my opinion that is the most close to typical cuckolding.
I don't know japanese so I don't remember the specific translation, but the word NTR comes from the japanese word "stolen" which means losing the girl or watching how she prefers to be with the othey guy instead of the MC and the MC actually feels bad/affected/helpless about it. Also it is important than the girl who is "NTRing" you actually has any kind of meaningfull relationship with you and a reason why she should be loyal to the MC. If a guy encourage his partner to cheat on it, then it's technically not even cheating, so it's pointless to call it NTR. It's like eating a lot and them complain about getting fat. It just doesn't make sense.

If a guy enjoys sharing his woman with a friend/dude and fuck her together, then it's just sharing. If a guy enjoys watching her woman getting fucked by another man then that's cuckolding. If a guy enjoys watching her woman getting fucked by another man but he has that feeling of guilt/anxiety while he jerks off, then that's usually called a "NTR fetish" but that isn't NTR in itself.

Then, if a lot of people dislikes cheating, blackmail, sharing and/or knowing that a girl you never met/talked before is with another man, and they decide to call that NTR, that's a completely different problem. It's like people/media saying over and over again that HIV kills: it doesn't kill, people don't die for HIV, what HIV does is damages the immune system and interferes with the body's ability to fight infections, it's another desease that will finish the job on that weak system. The misuse of the words doesn't change what words actually means.
 

mily.dominant

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Then, if a lot of people dislikes cheating, blackmail, sharing and/or knowing that a girl you never met/talked before is with another man, and they decide to call that NTR, that's a completely different problem. It's like people/media saying over and over again that HIV kills: it doesn't kill, people don't die for HIV, what HIV does is damages the immune system and interferes with the body's ability to fight infections, it's another desease that will finish the job on that weak system. The misuse of the words doesn't change what words actually means.
Yeah some random girl is no ntr.
I tried to find some official definition of netorare but could not find it so let's say it is some broad concept that has no hard lines.
All in all the game is ntr oriented many people don't like ntr but that is what I enjoy and I am making the ntr game because of that . I may add a possible way when protagonist has no idea what she is doing and only know what he does. It shouldnt be too difficult but it will make that path much shorter than other paths.