Ren'Py - Abandoned - What's Mine Is Yours [v0.2.0 Remake] [VitalSigns]

I played season 1-3 and the remake and thought all are terrible.

The season 1-3 first, writing awful, dialogue boring, models below average, sex scenes have animation but felt very boring, character just walking fetishes, and I hate all the character swaping I wanna see the perspective of the MC, but most of the time you see the perspective of the girls which I just found annoying and I couldn´t connect with the MC because of that in other words I don´t care who he fucks or what will happen, because the character will switch to a girl anyway.

The remake tried to make the story better but it is still awful and has the same problems, I don´t care about the backstories of characters I juat met, when I don´t even know enough about the MC, the animations and models are a little better but still only average and why evem make a remake when you will abandon it that is just annoying (except the creator has a very good reason or something bad happened which I don´t know then it´s okay why
it was abandoned).

Another thing that is really bad is that there are no sounds or music in either the seasons or the remake. (And only music in the main menu doesn´t count as having music in the game)

It had a good idea but was sadly very bad.

Loved all versions of the game.

Points to improve:
- Different nipples (in both size and color)
- Molly's dark thoughts on remake should have a different font. Current one is hard on the eyes imo.
- Proofreading the text. Basic mistakes can be found quite easily in a playthrough.

This review is for the remake, though I'll touch on the original.

This is fantastic, exceptional even. The dev clearly wanted better for their creation and decided to make that dream a reality. The characters are well developed and their personalities shining! Of the ones we've seen so far, there hasn't been anyone that felt flat, undeveloped, or boring. They all are interesting and someone you might want to spend more time with. The opening scene alone sets off the premise of the game with a blast, engrossing you from the start and only fanning those flames are time goes on. If you play the original, you can see a stark contrast between the two; the MC in the original was a decent man, but jumped on the extra sex like a moth to a flame, which lessened the story. The remake has the MC as a dutiful and loving husband, being torn apart by doubt with his wife's odd request, constantly at odds wondering if this is the right thing for their marriage and the woman he loves. Even as he does his best to try and make her happy and goes above and beyond for her, learning the ins and outs of her new fetish, he's racked with fear that each move he makes will be end of his life with her forever. it's a realistic and compelling story that will keep you coming back each update. Frankly, if there was a censored version of the game that removed/toned down the sex scenes, it might do well as a drama.

So despite all this, why only 4 stars? Why would something so well written and developed not get a perfect score? Well I mentioned that the story is realistic, and according to the dev they want it to be as true to a relationship of this style as possible. Realism is great and will bring much to the story if character growth continues as it has been shown so far. The problem is that the dev might be leaning too far into realism. In this first chapter of the remake, characters are constantly referencing the possibility pregnancy and the unprotected sex they're having, but the dev has made it clear that nothing will come of that. Why? Because as part of the realism, the MC will be making measures to ensure it never happens as he fears a child from anyone but his wife will ruin their marriage (there's been some talk in the comments here that he'll get a vasectomy). This is smart on the MC's part if he's going to be having lots of unprotected sex, but we are playing a game here. If the dev just doesn't want pregnancy in their game that's fine, but I think it might be more to keep with the realism. This is where I'm concerned: that the realism might come at the expense of story. If the dev needs to go this way to keep the characters and the story interesting then so be it, but I think there will be some missed opportunities as a result, especially for a dev who seems to want to try a variety of fetishes.

TL;DR: fuck you I took the time to write it, read it.....fine ya lazy bitch:

It's a good game with immense potential right now and with a strong foundation to build on. However, this very promising game may end up suffering as a result of its own self-imposed limitations later in development.

The synopsys was real bad. Yet I had good feeling about the game .
Actually the game is pretty good. The renders are bit outdated, but there is lots of sexual tension.
Overall the game provides good porn entertainment.

Fun times! I had just found this game and was playing through while thinking "this is a good story, but very simple graphics and not much choice." Then, along comes the remake. Choices! Well done with impact to dialog! And the graphics are spot on!

Well done! I hope to see it continue.

This review is about the remake. For context, I haven't played the original seasons, so I can only compare it to the MANY other games I've played. And for an alpha, it's pretty good. The writing is basic but solid, the sex scenes are good, and I didn't notice too many misspellings. Overall, it's a pretty good demo.

My biggest problem is actually some of the writing. And take this from a guy who's obsessed with his own fanfiction, but I can tell that the author relies a lot on exposition to establish his characters. There's plenty of text rows dedicated to the internal thoughts of a character, even as nothing really goes on in the background. It's fine for short introductions or when there's some kind of action or "action" happening, it's certainly the kind of setup you see a lot in porn. However it gets a bit winded as it goes on, especially when you use it to delve into the personality and history of a character, and it can feel like a waste of time. It's the reason why the greatest writers don't spend a lot of time on exposition: They tell by showing instead. And really, that's my own advice for the writer: Don't just tell us everything about a character, find ways to show it instead. It doesn't have to be fancy either. It can be simple drama, like a conversation between two characters revealing more about them, like when Mary and Chelsey spoke with each other for example. It might seem simple, but it's so much more interesting than just watching a person think about themselves.

I also have a problem with the pregnancy-mechanic. I know it's supposed to add some realism to the "gameplay," but a VN is dominated by making simple choices to get to different endings. Leaving it up to random chance what happens in a story just doesn't work, not in a game structured like this at least. It'll just lead to frustrating replays to get to the player's desired outcome. It's especially frustrating when the outcome is set from the start, essentially forcing you to replay the entire story just to get that one girl you like pregnant. My advice? Just find a way to tell the story without a randomizing factor involved; some way to let us decide who ends up pregnant, if anyone. Make it a spray or pray-choice if you need to, just don't bother with this pregnancy mechanic. It's bad design.

On the note of pregnancy, I'd certainly not be against seeing an ending where more than one of the girls ends up pregnant, but that's just my personal taste. I'm not trying to tell you what to write, only how best to do it.

But yeah, those are my thoughts. I like what I'm seeing so far, but some things are better resolved as early as possible.

I'm going to delve deep into MY preferences in this review, so I want to emphasis, this is just my opinion. I'm not making this game (or games) so I'm not trying to tell a developer what to do. This is just my reaction to playing these games.

This is an interesting fantasy. The reason I played this game is because, as a heterosexual, I'm naturally interested in a female harem. That's what this basically is, with a bit of a twist with the wife.

If I want to play a game about lesbians, I'll play that one. I don't play games about lesbians. If I want to play a game about gay men, I'll play that game. I don't play games about gay men.

I also don't like convenient bisexuals. Both bisexuals and gay folks are a small percentage of the population. You don't run into them everywhere. So, putting a lot of bisexuals in the story is what I consider lazy storytelling. It solves the problem of juggling more characters, since you can cram several story possibilities through one character. Dragon Age 2 did this for this very reason. But it sacrifices good characters, because good characters are kinda believable and sooo many bisexuals... sacrifices believable character environment.

I also like to stay focused on the main character. If a story starts going into territory covering, say, the antagonists sex life, or side characters sex lives... not interested. It's hard enough to write a good story with a focus on the protagonist, when you start juggling the focus the momentum is lost. Same goes with flashbacks, time skipping, etc.

So if the re-make becomes side-tracked with girl-on-girl sex kinda like Act 3 is, I'm not gonna be interested in that. Like, I don't care about Nicole's foray's into her sexuality. I'm interested in the MC and his harem adventures. That's what I signed on for.

I've already played the remake, I think it's on the right track... though honestly I didn't hate Act 1 or 2. More character development is the right way to go, it's more immersive, we get more invested. I think some of the ideas are interesting, the older daughter and the pregnancy options. Feedback on the pregnancy thing, IF we're gonna be having sex as often and as barebacked as we were in the original games, there's gonna be a higher than 1 n 8 chance of girls getting knocked up. I'm all for it being out of the MC's hands and up to mother nature. Heh, and so far MC's wife is all for expanding the family. If you wanna go that route, it's interesting to me.

Anyway, I'm interested to see what happens next. And I wish everyone all the best.

This review is for The Remake... what a change!

The time and effort put into reworking a game which wasn't working previously structurally into something much more interesting is great!

It is great to see someone take criticism the right way!!

Review will have spoilers, since they're important to why this game gets so a meh score

Not really sure why this is split into 3 'season's. No part is big enough to justify this. Its just weird. The only real difference between the seasons is that beyond the first you actually get (1 or 2 very minor) choices, rather than just being a kinetic novel pieced together out of illusion characters.

Because its pieced together from what it is, the sex is meh. The girls are fairly meh. The main dude looks silly, because he's made in a game which doesn't do manly men well, yet he's described as if he's some kind of peak human male.

So it falls back on story. Which is... fine for an excuse to jack off. And bad otherwise.
The grammar is bad, the way it constantly switches between people talking and thinking spontaniously is bad, the way they think in ways no human would think is bad.

Basic premise is that your wife is a cuck. She wants to see you fuck. So she tries her luck and pimps you. This gets really fucking weird in part 3 when she nearly goddamn stabs you for fucking around, when she asked you to do it. Like what the fuck you crazy bitch? Part 2 is nearly entirely a 15 year long rant justifying this (rather than puttin the rant in part 3, where this actually happens), as being 'realistic'. When there's a girl who has 90% of her interactions being choking on your dick and being called a cumdump and being happy to be given the privelege. Clearly realism isn't the goal, except when it is. Its jarring. And the sort of emotial issue the writer of this game clearly just plainly isn't good enough to handle.
In general the wife is written really weirdly. She immediately degrades herself and becomes the 'slave' to the dick sucking girl, despite establishing she won't cheat on you (and really, a chick fucking another chick is still cheating), constantly gets off on watching you fuck them, makes little to no attempts to fuck you herself, forces you to call her an ugly old hag, then does a complete 180 out of nowhere and pulls a knife on you.

The other girls are... walking fetishes. They get introduced, angst over their fetish then fuck you. But their thought process in this tends to be really weird. Stupid. Like
"Oh shit I wonder if big dickius will be offended by rape fetish, I literally don't want to have sex with this guy unless its specifically rape roleplay or actual rape, that is the only acceptable situation 100%".
They're all so absurdly focussed on their fetishes they barely come off as characters.
The only exception being dick sucking girl, who tries to dom you, then finds she likes being dommed. But keeps a side bitch. And then gets dommed by her side bitch. She has the most scenes, probably, of any girl. So she's the only one with any real personality beyond wanting to be fucked in a single absurdly specific way.

So you got a game with lazy art made in illusion engine, no animation, no sound, bad writing and bad grammar that is also split into 3+ parts for no apparent reason.
But its still okay for a quick wank.

Review based on Season 1 and 2.

First of all, let me start with what I like about this in particular.
I like the idea of having a VN about exploring various fetishes. Going into details about them. Discussing acceptance.

Which brings us to what could be improved:
Not doing much of the exploring part.

Having no more than a single sex-scene for most girls, without going into detail about what makes them tick, and then casting them aside, is a big turnoff.
And I think this is why most people have a problem with the ending of Season 2: it's not (just) because the author chose to change the cast, but rather that he ended their story way too premature.

I understand that he wanted to fix exactly the lack of depth in Season 3, and starting from a clean slate is easier. But I think that most people would have preferred if he expanded the existing characters instead.
Juggling with so many characters is no doubt difficult, but there are ways around that (like focusing on a particular subset for a season, and a different one in the next).

In the end, this left a bad taste, and I'm not sure I even want to try S3, no matter how much better it is.
It feels like it's throwing aside any problems, instead of trying to fix or accept them, which is the opposite of what the game's story is trying to tell...

Season 1:
"What's Mine Is Yours: Season 1" is a short and pretty fun nukige, especially if you like a little bit of spice with your vanilla. And considering it's one of the only few games centered on cuckqueaning, you might want to check it out.

[Read the full review here]

Season 2:
It's a decent nukige with some hot scenes rendered in Koikatsu, but plot-wise it's a steep step down from it's predecessor, which has created some expectations, plus the non-ending leaves an annoying feeling. It barely feels like a cuckqueaning game and more like any other nukige with a harem of young beauties.

[Read the full review here]

Nothing about this game was believable. No effort was put in to make any of the events here make any sense. The result is very much a pile of nonsense where all the girls are nymphos you can fuck any time, if the game gets better later on then that would be great but I mostly probably missed it since I started skipping after the first hour or so.

to start off, this game is a visual novel. There are no options, so just putting that out there.

Now to the elephant in the room, NTR - this game is about your wife(who's a fellow teacher) being a cuck, and asking YOU the protagonist to fuck other girls.

Now normally i dont like cuckolding, but this game does it very well. It's all consensual, and it feels like the girl is play-suffering, only to fuel her fetish more.

As everything in this game is done on a consensual basis, I really enjoyed it,it has a lot of high-quality images and a LOT of high quality rendered sex scenes.

There are some fetishes involved outside of cuckolding, most notably sadomasochism,degradation, voyerism and bdsm.

The sadomasochism was a bit much for me, and sometimes i felt painful for the wife. but she's so far in the closet on basically every fetish, that after a while i just went balls to the walls on enjoyment.

10/10, 5 star, however you like to rate things, this game SLAPS and brings a constant stream of new exciting things. I enjoyed it thoroughly(and finished the current version S3 v0.2) in about 2 and a half hours.
Good luck, and may your dicks THROB.

Story is definitely good. Cuckquean content is very rare, so seeing something of such high quality is really nice. It also covers a lot of different kinks between the seasons. The animations were all very good, along with the facial expressions. MC is an actual person with a personality but doesn't get in the way of all that good smut. Easily 10/10

the most fappable game i've been playing like this game is on my top 5 next to corruption and harem hotel it's don't have a fancy story but u not gonna skip it even if u do skip at first u gonna roll back once u understand what u missing game have some strong fetishes and also loaded with content u should try it on

Pro:
-Multi fetish
Cons:
-Rushed story
-Rushed ending,its what the guy said below.Its stupid
-Basic Koikatsu game.
-No development between characters.Especially the ending
-The plot just going nowhere and I think Dev dont even know what he is doing.He obviously doesnt have any idea to continue the story.
-Wasted potential game after a garbage ending.

Not recommend unless you want to felt regret after you play it till the end.

Best Cuckquean content on the whole site. For anyone who’s already familiar with the fetish this novel will make you feel right at home. The writing is good. The wife is perfectly submissive, and it makes you wonder why there aren’t more games of the genre.

Jesus Christ. I'd love to give this game 5 stars, but I can't. It has, honestly, one of, if not the worst, endings that I've ever seen. I'm getting ahead of myself.

You are Handsome Big Dick Sensei, a man who is entering his forties, and also happens to be a teacher at your local high school, where your wife, Molly, also happens to work. You and Molly have a good sex life, but, when she discovers Teacher/Student porn on your browser, she starts to have fantasies regarding her very students "stealing" you away from her with their supple, fertile young bodies. After she sends a snapshot of your massive cock to the students hidden group chat with a sign that says "please fuck my husband", your students start to line up at your office door, all wanting a piece of your 10-incher.

Each of the students embodies some sort of fetish, and either you, your wife, or another student in your "harem" all work to fulfill the deep desires they have.

The writing is good, though I'm not going to give it anything but a "good", given how abysmal the ending is.

"How bad is it?" You ask, alight with curiosity.

Well, I'll fucking tell you:


Realistically, even with the 3 star review, it's quite hard to actually recommend this game. Like, the story means nothing, so why play this when you can literally just download Koikatsu on this very site and play that instead? At least the stories you think of over there might have even a shadow of a satisfying ending.

1/5 stars. *NOT* Recommended

written at the end of season 2
This had a great premise with an excellent hook and a strong story start but the creator it felt didn't want to follow through on many of the possible plot/story elements that could have been explored (and there were A LOT ) and just wanted to make a standard game where the plot was an excuse for the porn rather than porn with a plot... REALLY HOT THOUGH
would love to see this same concept done again with more wrenches and turns in plot/drama.
4/5 stars
missing one star for limited scope the project has. thanks so much.

I also appreciate the honesty by the dev in answering questions regarding the directional plan they had with the game and not leave people on the hook thinking the plot and story were going to get more serious. I know a ton of people wanted a lot more than what the dev wanted to give and there might be bad reviews for this because of it, I fully suggest to ignore them, this game was good, it could have been AMAZING though and I think the butthurt reviews given for this game are based on the anticipation and let down of the simplified end given in season 2, The dev though early on said and told everyone in the thread the story is never going to develop beyond fetishy level stuff and 1980's pizzaboy plot lines. Meaning the plot line is an excuse for the sex and fetishes and the ending never really was going to matter.

Ok this is for Season one the only Completed season so far, though Season 2 is also shaping up to be just as good.

This is a Fetish VN. Yes the Wife is a Cuckquean but each girl brings a different fetish into play. They range from just the normie stuff to Rape play Each is done well and you want to see how many more and how deep into each one they will go.

While Season one only does each one once other then the more plain stuff the fact that there is a Season 2 shows there can be so much more growth into each girl and you want to see it happen