The writing is really good. It's not generic like in a lot of porn VNs, it's not really based on stereotypes and if there is something stereotypical, it's handled well. The story is nice. It's not forced and handles the "MC's family, but not really" problem very well. I really like the character's personalities. I think those are the best asset.
Now some criticism, because there is not much of it in the reviews I have seen, and even though the author won't mos likely read this, criticism is always useful if it's on point.
There are some problems with grammar, but it's ok. It's not as immersion breaking as I thought it would be initially.
The game could use better renders, though. The character models look really old, even in the newer episodes, the lighting is meh, and it's all still kinda grainy. Author probably doesn't have that great machine to make high quality renders.
The poses are not that good and I don't like the facial expressions. They don't look natural.
The models themselves could use newer hairstyles and textures. They are not really that pretty (for DAZ3D models), but the way they are written makes them appealing regardless.
Overall a very fun experience, which is a bit dragged down due to the artwork's lack of polish.
Now some criticism, because there is not much of it in the reviews I have seen, and even though the author won't mos likely read this, criticism is always useful if it's on point.
There are some problems with grammar, but it's ok. It's not as immersion breaking as I thought it would be initially.
The game could use better renders, though. The character models look really old, even in the newer episodes, the lighting is meh, and it's all still kinda grainy. Author probably doesn't have that great machine to make high quality renders.
The poses are not that good and I don't like the facial expressions. They don't look natural.
The models themselves could use newer hairstyles and textures. They are not really that pretty (for DAZ3D models), but the way they are written makes them appealing regardless.
Overall a very fun experience, which is a bit dragged down due to the artwork's lack of polish.