V. season 1 beta?
the inconsistency of the art, though not my forte, is less than easy on the eye. visually i am not a fan. looks very much like a breakout project with much learning to be done.
the writing tries to deliver something beyond the normal humdrum but all the hooks are visual. the plot it delivers is par for the course by now. lacks any standout quality and only donning a harem route would rekindle any interest for me, and only as one for the spank bank. it's just low impact.
not that a harem route is plausible...
back when this first came out and was a regular to the updates page it may have gotten a close 4 star. it had very little competition and garnered a lot of interest.
that bar is not so low now though, 6 years have passed.
some great works have graced us here since while this one has meandered in development and delivered a stagnant plot that is lost in the background of what is on offer here.
i only managed as far as CH 22 before i could take no more.
now the dev is touting this as season 1, insinuating that there will be more.....
i do not have another decade or more of life to see if this pans out but i also have a hard time wracking my imagination to find anything about this that warrants another season.
there is nothing here to build on. something shoe-horned in at the death maybe?
an opening season sets the stage. this one has set a neon sign towards the exit.
the steak is cooked. serve up the meat and two veg and create a new dish.
considering seasons is like going way past well done into cremated territory.
ya can keep the dessert trolley. check please.
the inconsistency of the art, though not my forte, is less than easy on the eye. visually i am not a fan. looks very much like a breakout project with much learning to be done.
the writing tries to deliver something beyond the normal humdrum but all the hooks are visual. the plot it delivers is par for the course by now. lacks any standout quality and only donning a harem route would rekindle any interest for me, and only as one for the spank bank. it's just low impact.
not that a harem route is plausible...
back when this first came out and was a regular to the updates page it may have gotten a close 4 star. it had very little competition and garnered a lot of interest.
that bar is not so low now though, 6 years have passed.
some great works have graced us here since while this one has meandered in development and delivered a stagnant plot that is lost in the background of what is on offer here.
i only managed as far as CH 22 before i could take no more.
now the dev is touting this as season 1, insinuating that there will be more.....
i do not have another decade or more of life to see if this pans out but i also have a hard time wracking my imagination to find anything about this that warrants another season.
there is nothing here to build on. something shoe-horned in at the death maybe?
an opening season sets the stage. this one has set a neon sign towards the exit.
the steak is cooked. serve up the meat and two veg and create a new dish.
considering seasons is like going way past well done into cremated territory.
ya can keep the dessert trolley. check please.