HTML Abandoned Which Way...? [v0.0.1] [KJun]

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The story of an unfortunate guy that receives a life-changing item.

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Thread Updated: 2020-09-02
Release Date: 2020-09-02
Developer: KJun

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Censored: No
Version: 0.0.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Canto Forte]

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[Davox]

Game currently has 1 H scene with 5 videos - You see the H scene as part of the introduction, all choices after that are to empty content - don't waste your time

Its okay writing, not a native english speaker
The font is tiny ass Times new roman

It doesn't look to have been play tested much, not that there is much to play test. I.e if you go to sleep it wakes you at the exact same time in the next day. go to bed at night on Wednesday you wake up at night on Thursday.

Oh yes the story, your girlfriend cheats on you, you lose your job and your gandpa dies all on the same day. Gandpa leaves you a pill, which turns you into a hunk...

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Probably should have the transformation tag but its nerd->hunk not m->f

Its the Devs first game, good on you for trying and all, but this needs way more work before you release it to the public.

1 out of 5 - no point releasing a game with this little story or direction.

 

[Bobin1001]

Going to wait for more content.

 

[KJun]

Game currently has 1 H scene with 5 videos - You see the H scene as part of the introduction, all choices after that are to empty content - don't waste your time

Its okay writing, not a native english speaker
The font is tiny ass Times new roman

It doesn't look to have been play tested much, not that there is much to play test. I.e if you go to sleep it wakes you at the exact same time in the next day. go to bed at night on Wednesday you wake up at night on Thursday.

Oh yes the story, your girlfriend cheats on you, you lose your job and your gandpa dies all on the same day. Gandpa leaves you a pill, which turns you into a hunk...

You must be registered to see the links

Probably should have the transformation tag but its nerd->hunk not m->f

Its the Devs first game, good on you for trying and all, but this needs way more work before you release it to the public.

1 out of 5 - no point releasing a game with this little story or direction.

Working on it...

 

[Tinuss]

Game currently has 1 H scene with 5 videos - You see the H scene as part of the introduction, all choices after that are to empty content - don't waste your time

Its okay writing, not a native english speaker
The font is tiny ass Times new roman

It doesn't look to have been play tested much, not that there is much to play test. I.e if you go to sleep it wakes you at the exact same time in the next day. go to bed at night on Wednesday you wake up at night on Thursday.

Oh yes the story, your girlfriend cheats on you, you lose your job and your gandpa dies all on the same day. Gandpa leaves you a pill, which turns you into a hunk...

You must be registered to see the links

Probably should have the transformation tag but its nerd->hunk not m->f

Its the Devs first game, good on you for trying and all, but this needs way more work before you release it to the public.

1 out of 5 - no point releasing a game with this little story or direction.

I think the dev makes it quite clear that with a version number of 0.0.1 you shouldn't be expecting tons of content.
He even says so in the Developer's Notes.

Of course it is good that you provide it as feedback, but giving it a 1 out of 5 kinda doesn't make sense.

 

[Deleted member 219172]

its a start but requires more storyline, looks not bad at all

 

[Pif paf]

Google drive link requires explicit access, please correct this!

 

[KJun]

Google drive link requires explicit access, please correct this!

Sorry for that, and thanks for telling me, I think I fixed it~.

 

[Davox]

1 out of 5 kinda doesn't make sense.

Thats why I didn't leave an actual review and to me it makes perfect sense.

The game in its current state is pointless to show people. There is nothing new on show and its so short I've got no idea what kind of game this will be, what direction its going in and what makes it different from the bajilion other HTML games that start off in the same way.

As a proof of concept this 'demo' fails and its likely to trigger people into leaving actual negative reviews which will harm the games development in the long term. First impressions count.

 

[Mondoblasto]

KJun Whichever way it got through your editing, non-Spanish languages do not use inverted question and exclamation marks (¿¡).

 

[KJun]

KJun Whichever way it got through your editing, non-Spanish languages do not use inverted question and exclamation marks (¿¡).

Thank you very much for telling me!, I'll make sure to not use them anymore~.

 

[BadWarThunder]

I have only 2 recommendations. First, improve your English...sometimes the mistakes are so funny it's fucking hilarious reading some of the text. But still. And second of all, don't release a game/update until it has a lot of content. I bet many will simply forget about your game because it had no content.