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VN - Ren'Py - Wife in the Building! [v.0.1.0 Beta] [DinoTail Games]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    sunaboz

    As of [v.0.1.0 Beta] it's a kinetic novel that poses as visual novel with choices. There are no choices available, the boxes for it exist but "they are not implemented and the option above will be used". But even if these boxes were working it would have been a binary choice game where the second choice would lead to no content so either way it's garbage design.

    The only redeeming quality are graphics IMO, the artist is good and some scenes are hot. It's nothing mind blowing mind you but it's good and it's not another AI shit.

    Either way can't recommend it because it's too one-dimensional and too boring for my taste.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    DLee24

    This game has great potential. However, what I agree with from the reviews below is that I am slightly concerned because there are many characters who may be involved with the female protagonist in the future. If this game lasts for 5 years and you play it all at once after 5 years, it will be a huge advantage, but most users who will play the game that is updated once every three or four months may feel that it is empty compared to the updates. If the developer develops this game full-time, I think it will be a very, very cool game. However, in order to do so, it would be helpful if higher level sponsorships were possible with attractive benefits.
  3. 2.00 star(s)

    Fantoosh2

    Good game, good story, and attractive graphics. The reason for a two-star rating is that there is no content.
    After v5, you'd expect some juicy content in the game, however there isn't any as of now. The amount of content in this game until version 5 is equal to any random game for a single update. Dev takes about three months to complete a single update with five minutes of content. A solid game heading in the wrong direction.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    NaughtyFan

    Really nice graphics and veryy teasing. Love it :) Hope he keeps on dragging the teasing part. I know i am being greedy but it would be lovely to see more different varities of teasing and location. :love::love:
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    louquest

    Very good, the provocative tone is perfect and the wife is very hot, I loved the art of the game and the details, I just thought I needed to have more options when making decisions, please update this game as soon as possible... thank you for making it available here!
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    Holdem High

    This Dev deserves support. It looks nice, is well written, but what stands out the most, is that the scenario's are extremely HOT

    Picked this up on a whim as I am very into hotwife stuff and it is not disappointing. What a great little game, with very good storytelling and a unique, pleasing, artstyle, full of very hot and believable scenarios
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    Enlight432

    • FMC's behavior and morals are very mature and this is great, it makes you fall in love with her more, it makes the story and characters more realistic, it increases the logic of the game, a married FMC should talk like this, she should act like this,she should not be like some other games that forget everything after seeing the first dick of another man, including her husband and principal, etc ! You can tell a lot about this FMC from his appearance, from his personality, from his attributes, one of the great things about this FMC is that she is not stupid! I hate stupid FMCs who do stupid things for stupid reasons, the next thing is that she is not shy, she is very confident, I also said her looks are amazing
    • MC's presonality is not as strong as FMC, but he is stronger than 99% of MCs in sharing games. He is very confident, not a loser, and is not afraid of bullies and unlike his sidekicks, he fights bullies, his appearance is also acceptable
    • The writing of this game is excellent, the developer of this game knows how to make a logical story with mature characters, there are no dialogues as if the developer is only thinking with his dick, you can enjoy every dialogue
    • The story of the game is very good, it involves you, it is not a story that you just want to skip, you want to know the continuation, I enjoyed every moment of it
    • Atmosphere and other models and tension in relationships and all other things are also great, I can write all of them, but there is no need
    • I forgot something: the drama of the first game is great, we saw some heavy dramas in the first game, but these dramas made the love between mc and fmc more, it made us fall in love with fmc much more
    • Sometimes the art is great, you enjoy it a lot, but sometimes it's not very good, i hope this problem is solved

    A music suitable to the theme of this game makes this game much more enjoyable​
    The character Blake, in particular, is over-exaggerated to the point of being a odious, making him increasingly difficult to tolerate​
    One character’s story, where he and his wife are involved in swinging, is portrayed in a way that is unsettling. His wife cheats and makes out with strangers, and he is pressured into accepting it by her and their therapist. This depiction raises serious questions about the game’s handling of healthy relationships​
    amount of content in each update is so little that, even though it’s a good game, it’s starting to frustrate me​
  8. 2.00 star(s)

    Cithiri

    Kind of a shame, because when this first came out it easily could have turned into a five star game, but the updates since then have been pushing this in a less than great direction.

    Pros:
    -The wife is portrayed as considerate and loving without being a literal doormat. She has her own agency in the story, but not at the expense of her relationship with her husband. This is a balance that many writers struggle to achieve.
    -The teasing photos that Lara sent when she was tutoring Lucas were great, but what was even better was how she reacted to what she did after. The regret and shame that she felt for jumping into this new idea too quickly and crossing several boundaries that she never thought she'd even come close to really hit her hard, and the conflicted emotions that she had over the situation really helped solidify that she does truly care for her husband, and wants to have a happy and healthy relationship with him.
    -No humiliation. I pray the dev keeps their word on that. There are too many games out there where the wife is just nasty and mean to the MC, which is a huge turn off for me.

    Cons:
    -We already had a decent base of characters for the story to unfold, why the hell are we introduced to new people every single update? There's nothing wrong with having a decently sized cast, but so far every update has been focused on introducing one ore more new characters into the story, and that's a big concern. Tons of shallow characters do not make for a great story, and if they don't serve a purpose, they shouldn't be in the story in the first place. Why did we need the sleazy guy at the strip club to be introduced to give the first scene where Lana is tempted to fulfill her husband's cuck fantasies, why not use literally any of the preexisting characters? Why did we need Ben introduced to push the story forward with Lucas instead of things progressing naturally on their own? So many characters introduced in the early stages of this game makes it so there is no time to focus on any of them, and all of them feel shallow.
    -Because so many characters are introduced repeatedly that all serve the same purpose, it feels like the story is retreading the same ground over and over. The update that introduced the strip club gave us Edgar, who hits on Lana but gets rejected because she's not ready to take that step yet and didn't like him. This update gave us Ben, who hits on the wife and while it's a cliffhanger ending is VERY likely to get rejected because she's still not ready to cross that step and also doesn't like him.
    -Some of the characters' personalities are grating. Some of them were designed to be like that, but they're still annoying. Ben, Blake, Edgar, even Kenji to a lesser extent... too many of the characters are too unlikable. Especially with Blake, the dev is trying way too hard to make him unlikable and it's basically turned him into a caricature. We get it, he's a douche, you don't need to keep hammering it in every five seconds he's on the screen.
    -The one coworker that confesses he and his wife are experimenting with swinging. Jesus Christ, this guy needs a hug. I know most people playing this game won't see his situation as bad since they like the idea of netorase and swinging, but holy fuck, that explanation he gave on how he got into that situation was just depressing. Dude's wife cheats on him and starts making out with random people in the club, yells at him for not being ok with the fact that she's making out with random people in the club, then gets gas lit and browbeaten by her and his therapist into accepting that she wants to cheat on him. Like, what the FUCK. Just because it aligns with the dev's/player's fetishes does not mean it's healthy, this situation is horrible.

    TLDR:
    Very promising start has been marred by too many new characters that don't feel necessary, and nearly all of them retread the same ground covered in the last update. While the relationship between the MC and his wife is depicted as healthy and loving, some of the side characters situations give me serious red flags on what the dev considers a "loving relationship" for netorase. Hope this one turns itself around, but it's really heading in the wrong direction for now.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    uiosi

    Nice story and hand dravn is refreshing. Keep it up. I would like nice stories you came up with. Just go slov like now... devolop stories.
    I heard few audio inserts...
    On redit there are asmr and maybi you can goet somone to voice it :D Or some enthusiast.
  10. 1.00 star(s)

    fvckamacka

    Updates take too long. content is close to zero and the sudden change in storyline is awful. The game started out very, VERY promising but went downhill real fast. Hopefully the developer can turn things around but right now its not worth playing or paying for.
  11. 1.00 star(s)

    Ilcoriglianese forte

    This game already has its plot and method revised in another well-known game, too bad, that it brings with it all the defects of that one and adds more, I would have expected that at least in this version things would have been better, but I see that unfortunately we are very poor in our imagination, needless to say, a copy of something that already exists
  12. 3.00 star(s)

    PantsRats

    I waited a while to try this one, and I should have waited longer. After several updates since it's release, there's almost no content here. There are exactly two choices, and maybe fifteen minutes of story. (v0.3 atm)
    The plot isn't anything new so far, but the pacing of the story is fine. The pacing of the corruption (or whatever you want to call it here) seems steep, but it might be too early to tell. The artwork is great for the style.

    In the end, I'm mostly disappointed there isn't more here, and I'm concerned at how little the updates seem to contribute. This feels like an initial release, but it's been out for months.
    It has the promise to become a decent title, though nothing groundbreaking, and it still might take years before it reaches it.
    Likes: Genis
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    Argeddon

    Art is nice and original so far. Writing is good. Cast is relatively diverse and hot (e.g., old man, highschool/shota, interracial, etc), and hopefully grows to be a good number of characters readers can be invested in. So far, things seems consensual with swinging, sharing, cucking etc, which is nice (Won't mind if there are other branches to harder stuff as well, as long as there is choice). All in all, a promising game, and look forward to its development.
  14. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 2631651

    the game has perfect pacing, just as the theme it addresses must be developed. It's at an early stage, but you can already see its personality, which sets it apart from the rest. I highly recommend it.
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    Paran69

    Even if is still in his early stage this game has something that others don’t have….a beautiful idea. I think that in the future, if the dev will have the necessary support, this game can became something really big
  16. 5.00 star(s)

    k_hang

    One of the best execution compared to many other games I have played: simple straightforward setting, tension, anticipation, and cool graphics. keep it up! I am sure people will like it. I hope this one continues development.
  17. 5.00 star(s)

    sno2

    Cool. Including phone teasing content with tension of unknown something very well implemented. It will be cool if more element like hidden tattoes, piercings, etc , which accidentally detecting - could be included in the game. Good luck!
  18. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 6490541

    Excellent execution so far. The chemistry and love between the wife and husband feel very real and wholesome. Unique hand drawn artstyle is also a plus. Can't wait for the next update when Lana finally starts fucking other guys.

    So far there hasn't been any humiliation aspect to the ntr which is a big relief. However, I still wouldn't mind Lana saying stuff like "His cock is so much better than yours" or denying the MC sex to fuck someone else (playfully). If these things can be done without the humiliation aspect, I believe it adds to the game's netorase elements a lot.
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    DrewDry

    Amazing Art, Great Story, Love the Concept.
    One of my favs after Tale of Love Lust and Our Red String, there is less content as of v0.2 but great potential.
    I not slow burn nor fast paced, just perfect till now.
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    Max_Einar

    I was pleasantly surprised with the story and content to date. Very much looking forward to future updates. I was disappointed when I was at the end of this update, which is a good thing. Keep up the good work.