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voltron123

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I didn't understand half of what i was reading.

Here are some examples of what i mean:

First image says "1 chapter". It should probably say "Chapter 1".

"Its a story about love" should probably be "This is a story about love."

"We live in a small town, the infrastructure and safety of which we are quite satisfied with" ->
"We live in a small town and we’re pretty happy with its infrastructure and how safe it feels."

"Our love began literately from a school desk" ->
"Our love literally began at our school desks. "

"I'm in music. I'm not as successful in my hard way, unlike May"
. Your hard way? what does that mean?

"...think about anything" ->
"... worry about anything"

I'm just 3 screens in and it seems to continue throughout the game.
If you are using AI for all the graphics you might as well use AI to rewrite the dialog to be more correct.
Allot of the text is a bit awkward and strange, like its been directly translated from another language.
 
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Skylark21

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Female protagonist tag but no multiple protagonist tag, does it mean you get to choose who you play as? Or was the tag accidentally added?
 

AngryDogStudio

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Guy has multi colored eyes (and low detail eyes)

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2 (or 3?) fingers

I don't even enjoy hard NTR so not planning to play. But my man you need an upscaler, an addetailer and to learn how to use inpaint and photoshop. There's so many visual errors and artifacts in literally all your example images. It's just not good to look at.
If you want some basic pointers DM me.
Nice to see you! I really enjoy My New Girlfriend. But i see a lot of errors in your visual style too. I'm not alone. It's AI, not all is good.
Also i want to upgrade visual style in next chapters, i know its not excellent. Thanks for help.
 
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SymbioticLife

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Nice to see you! I really enjoy My New Girlfriend. But i see a lot of errors in your visual style too. I'm not alone. It's AI, not all is good.
Also i want to upgrade visual style in next chapters, i know its not excellent. Thanks for help.
I'm not CircleGames lol, I help on Shadows but I'm completely unrelated to the MNGF project other than being a fan artist for it and a patreon.
 
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