It's very good and something the dev can be proud of.
Things I generally liked:
-There's one animation early that's not awful, but it goes at about 3-4 fps as far as I could see. The animations later down the road get much better though. Overall I thought they were mostly good.
-The writing, if you can ignore the Engrish, is good.
-The character designs are fantastic.
-The 'hypnotic' aura is a nice touch.
Things I did not like
-It makes the assumption that all guys like lesbian sex between harem members or something along the lines of lesbian ntr. I can't really dock points for it, but I think it's completely random and out of place. It's at first just the mc's imagination (and one character not yet established as a love interest,) but later becomes canon scenes where behind his back they become more intimate.
-The Engrish is trash. A notch above mtl I guess, but lazy beyond belief. Some sentences aren't translated at all, some leave the spanish punctuation "¿ ?" Some sentences are translated so poorly that the character's response "it's not a date" does not fit into the context of the previous statement. It could have gotten a 5th star out of me but the TL is just bad enough to overall hurt the experience of the game. I consider myself fairly generous on this subject too, so me shooting a star down over this is extreme.
Overall, I guess since harem sharing (even lesbian) really isn't for me, I don't think I'll keep playing. It probably isn't the case for the majority of you guys, so I'd very much recommend my fellow f95ers give it a shot. Good luck to you developer, I hope you make what you're going for.
Things I generally liked:
-There's one animation early that's not awful, but it goes at about 3-4 fps as far as I could see. The animations later down the road get much better though. Overall I thought they were mostly good.
-The writing, if you can ignore the Engrish, is good.
-The character designs are fantastic.
-The 'hypnotic' aura is a nice touch.
Things I did not like
-It makes the assumption that all guys like lesbian sex between harem members or something along the lines of lesbian ntr. I can't really dock points for it, but I think it's completely random and out of place. It's at first just the mc's imagination (and one character not yet established as a love interest,) but later becomes canon scenes where behind his back they become more intimate.
-The Engrish is trash. A notch above mtl I guess, but lazy beyond belief. Some sentences aren't translated at all, some leave the spanish punctuation "¿ ?" Some sentences are translated so poorly that the character's response "it's not a date" does not fit into the context of the previous statement. It could have gotten a 5th star out of me but the TL is just bad enough to overall hurt the experience of the game. I consider myself fairly generous on this subject too, so me shooting a star down over this is extreme.
Overall, I guess since harem sharing (even lesbian) really isn't for me, I don't think I'll keep playing. It probably isn't the case for the majority of you guys, so I'd very much recommend my fellow f95ers give it a shot. Good luck to you developer, I hope you make what you're going for.