Ren'Py - Witch Hunter [v0.24] [Lazy tarts]

As is with everything I critique I will base everything on Art, Story, Sound, and GamePlay.

The art is on point which certainly raises the bar that most games won't climb to. If the developer used this same style or skill on a game involving Korra, it would certainly be the best of any games of the same title.

The story is certainly not lacking either. It's on point, doesn't linger, and progresses at a steady pace. Tackling subject matter that most games of the Hentai genre would normally avoid and does so brilliantly while not fetishizing it to an extreme.

The main character (Cedric) is not like most I am used to, you play as the villain and it really shows with this one's actions. The grammar may be lacking but for a game that is practically new, this can be forgiven as some words can get lost in translation with a Russian made fan game. Definitely a dark game with very dark moments to be sure and not afraid to push them a little more.

Sound quality is about on par with most games in the same category but makes an effort to make moments special and deliver, home on that promise. Game Play possesses a small learning curve as no tutorial is given on many of the game mechanics such as building relationships or even in battle. A game that is a (point and click adventure hentai) is certainly common but with multiple choices that can affect outcomes differently can make this game unique and better to enjoy.

In all, my score is 6.5/10. It's still fresh and growing. Possessing great potential to be one of the best H-Games out there. I look forward to future updates and build releases.

This game suffers from poor dialog throughout. Mostly it stems from the broken English which leaves you confused because you cant even understand what is going on during an interaction. It is also riddled with bugs that prevented me from progressing the main story line. The idea seems solid and the art is pretty good but the bugs and dialog really make it un-playable.

I heard this was based on a show, tbh, I have not heard of or watched the show at all. Anyways, on to the review!

Art 5/5
The art in this game is beautifully done. Reminds me of Akaburs work now that I think about it. The style makes the game perfect.

Story 3/5
Not much to go on really. For one, haven't watched the show so no idea what it's about, but I think I get the gist of it. The story is... beyond scrambled in this game though, to the point where unlocking content can take far longer than it needs to. No hate to Russians since they tend to make the best Ren'py based games, but if your primary language isn't English (which is what majority of the players speak), then you need some type of tracker. There are so many English mistakes, it's easy to tell it was Machine translated with no real effort put in.

Adult Content 2/5
The art as said is amazing, but the lack of content is what kills this rating. The girls I do want something with, there's nothing.

Updates 1/5
Updates are... non-existent really. For making 6 times the minimum wage in Russia a month (2019 = 11,280 rubles / he makes = 68658.31 rubles), this guy barely releases quality updates. He can quite literally, quit work and solely focus on this if he wanted to. Really, I wouldn't even mind seeing sketches at this point. Seriously, take a look at his Patreon. He's nowhere near even remotely close to finishing this game, and he's already debating his next project. Real developers debate that when the game is at about 80% completion. This guy, however, milks the money as much as possible with terrible updates.

Overall 2.75/5
The game, idea, and art are all perfect. The developer, however, needs to be replaced. Never been so glad that f95zone existed or I'd never play half of these games.

The game follows the standard Akabur-Trainer-game formula, with you having to exchange money for sexual favors, in order to corrupt the girl, with a couple story events thrown in at points. Not very original, but what it does, it does well, which is largely due to the excellent artstyle. As of the current version (v0.31) there are about 1-2 hours of content with a couple of great-looking, but short, sexual scenes. My only relevant complaint is that the english translation isn't very good, but I got over that fact pretty quickly.

Great plot, besides extremely well made arts. A lot of close-to-rape situations, and you also shall kill parents of your worker, which I find quiet fun.

And do not forget, now there is 3 plot lines - Elyon, Tarany and Will's mother, but soon it will be lines with all characters of original.

Game has potential, not gonna lie. It has very nice art and so far, it's very intriguing, despite not being able to progress that much into the story.
The only issue I've got with this game is that the Blowjob and Handjob text are completely ripped off of Akabur's Witch Trainer similar scenes. Even the part where someone walks in on the guy receiving fellatio is the same. She keeps doing it while someone is talking to the protagonist. Same speeches as well.