For the first 5 minutes of this, the text attempts to tell you how to play the game, what gifts to get for the girls, and how to make them mad or happy.... in very broken English.
After 25 lines of nearly incomprehensible mis-spellings, misused words, and bad grammar, I gave up.
I'm sure if you just skip reading, there might be something fun here, but being a visual NOVEL, the text is key to keeping the player invested. Bad writing, horrible formatting, and I do hope that the developer might be able to find someone capable of translating whatever they are trying to say into something a 3rd grader might be able to decipher.
If the DEV works on the writing, I will up my star rating. But I'm not the boss here, so that's up to whether or not the dev wishes to focus on it.