VN Working on my first game, looking for feedback

How do you like what you see?


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vampz

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Jun 1, 2020
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Well, others have replied, but yeah basically netorase isn't cheating per se, it's more akin to sharing (MC willingly shares his LI with others, while netorare is cheating, the LI decides to cheat on MC).

I like the threesome idea, the step-sister can be cool, the futa friend too (would it be for the GF only or would the MC be able to play with her too ?)
Are you asking about the futa or step sister?
Either way, the idea I currently have is for my version of Tara to be futa (which would explain why she's shy), and the step sister would be younger and inexperienced
From that point, I actually want to create a side story for them to be together, at least sexually (though I think building an actual relationship would be far more interesting)

As for playing around, step sister + MC and Futa + MC are planned, also threesome of them
Not sure about GF with them, but I'm open to ideas
 
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niennunb

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Are you asking about the futa or step sister?
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Either way, the idea I currently have is for my version of Tara to be futa (which would explain why she's shy), and the step sister would be younger and inexperienced
From that point, I actually want to create a side story for them to be together, at least sexually (though I think building an actual relationship would be far more interesting)
Color me intrigued !

As for playing around, step sister + MC and Futa + MC are planned, also threesome of them
Not sure about GF with them, but I'm open to ideas
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vampz

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Jun 1, 2020
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Hi all :)
I've been working hard on generating some more art for the game, and wanted to share some with you
Also, I thought on the names of the different girls (not 100% set, but I like them)
Let me know your thoughts (names, art, direction etc), every bit of feedback counts

I do have some specific questions to you
How much do you care about backgrounds? I can get decent results by generating an image via txt2img, then get variations via img2img, and it's decently consistent, but how much do you care about this?
Also, for some reason I have a severe issue with earrings, I can't get rid of them, and they keep changing styles between images. how much would that bother you? because I would rather give you more images per event, even if they're not that consistent

Can't wait to hear your thoughts
BTW, the images below are images I thought are good, but I have better shots, or I need to remake them
So consider them usable bloopers, I guess

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