Ren'Py - Worlds of Wonders [v0.2.19] [It's Danny]

The first part was really good, plenty of girls all kinds of kinks that you decide yes or no on which I really liked. The story was really good with a guy who learns he can do magic and is really good at. Then about half way through they shoehorn some kind of sci-fi story with a cyborg that looks like him. What, why would you do that you had a good story going and you decide to really confuse things by adding two different genres in one story. Instead of getting a four or five stars I'm giving you three stars .

This was surprisingly good, I love all the fetishes and honestly everything about it. I am very depraved so the scat (completely optional btw) near the end was great, hope for more depravity with the next update. Keep up the great work and can't wait for more!

I'm going to put this as 4* for now. Initially I was very excited by the whole premise even with it seeming a bit like there was a lot going on with both worlds. I didn't like the idea of the cyborg when he was first introduced. It felt like a weird gimmick to introduce ntr or something like that. This most recent update however has changed that. I feel the robot will become an interesting character and add a good new aspect of gameplay for anyone who is into that. Especially with the option to transform his body. Sharing memories as well and controlling the character does also reduce any feelings where you're not in control.

Basically, the themes and story are really good and I look forward to seeing where they go. Gameplay is a nice mix of story and optional extras (with the phone and apps on there). Definitely has potential to be a 5* in the future. Much luck to the dev and I hope to see this carrying on for many future updates.

This feels like it was wrote by someone with sever adhd that cant focus on anything. It started off ok, it had a basic story mc learns he has magic goes to magic school. Even some of the stuff with the vampires and the weird house you visit and kind of didn't mesh all that great but it was on theme at the very least... but this cyborg stuff feels like a second game randomly shoe horned in. This has somehow turned into multiple protagonist game. I don't understand why anyone would give a fuck about the cyborgs story or want to see it have h scenes. It just feels so disconnected from the mc and his story. There are other story threads that have started and go nowhere and it feels like this will continue in this game because the writer has no idea what they want in this game. I'm not saying games cant have multiple genres but they need to make sense and mesh together and I think that's where this game falls down.

Right of the start MC seems so brainless, he meets a girl who turns into something not human, and MC dosent really try to find out wtf is going on and then he trust this unknown weird girl when she says its not safe at hes hotel, and he sleeps at her place???? how about getting the fuck out of there multiple weird girl hiding and refuseing to give any kind of information and he sleeps there???? how about going back to the hotel where hes already been sleeping with no issues......

Not only that hes a complete idiot, hes not supposed to tell anyone about hes dad and the house and yet first chance he gets he spilds the beans to the wierd girl after hearing more weird shit from listening in on her...

Also he sleeps in a vamp hotel knowing that its stupid, so yeah hes number of braincells arent high.

But still story is great and its easy to get hooked, its also well written and i love the selection of girls, there are alot and mostly all unique, something for everyone big tits, small tits and those in between, a ton of fetishes but none are forced on you.

Which makes me think of the choices in this game, they are simply just great, you can select who you want to fuck or not to be with, nothing is forced no girls no fetish, you truely feel free to do and pick whatever you wish, such a rare thing in alot of games and i love it.

I could have done without the cyborg content though, so far it feels stupid and a waste of time away from the main stuff, also the the hole thing about it looking like MC makes 0 sense since we know the cybrog can turn into anything even a woman so why would it ever use the face of MC when doing stupid illigal shit......

Story 5/5
I enjoyed the story, its a bit of fun with all the diffrent things like magic,vamps,deamons,elfs and so on list is long, its also well written.

Girls 5/5
Well there is plenty to pick from and there should be something for everyone, which is pretty rare normaly theres only focus on big tit fetish which i am not into so happy to see a balanced game for once.

Animations 4/5
They look good and they are decent in lenght.

Music/effects 3/5
Music is decent, sound effects i dunno the sex sounds arent that great but all in all its fine.

Choices 5/5
Not much to say, you deside what girl you want to be with and what fetish you want to play with, choices seems to work perfectly in this game, and i wish all games would put in this much effort.

This dev decided to create this work by putting a bunch of different h-game plots in a hat, sticking his hand in, and grabbing... every single one of them.

Outer space? Sure.

Dead father with mysterious dealings? Of course.

Demons? Why not?

Vampires? Those too.

Magic? Throw it in there!

Girl next door/childhood friend plotline that has no place in the story? We definitely need that.

Got room to shoehorn in a college plotline? Of course you do!

It's a skipfest but the characters are nice looking, it has some niche fetish content, and it's kinda fappable. Pretty clear cut 2.5 star game

The Harem's power, looks every game tagged like harem should have women that will get in love with the MC no matter what, every woman will want to fuck him no matter if they meet him 5 minutes ago or if they meet him when he was a baby, there are moments when the MC will have sex with women without a reason, like one scene when a woman is touching herself in front the MC without reason and other girl doing the same in a train, they don't have sex but only because the power of the script.

I love how everyone talks about how smart the MC is but there are a lot of moments when he lacks of common sense.

I love how the game force characters relantionships or interactions, like Keira, she is the most anoying and disgusting character in the game because she is "corrupting" his "sister" and the MC knows that but he does nothing to get rid of her and when we have a "chance" to do it, the MC thinks, "I don't want to ruin Lyn and Keira friendship", really?? Since the start we are told that Keira is a bad influence and making Lyn a worst person but when you can change that you do nothing? are you brain damaged or what? Again, the power of the script is indescriptible.

The MC being pretty homophobic for a young man that is supposed to be smart, educated and polite, when he meets Sam he make comments about Sam being a man many times when clearly someone with a little of common sense and polite would know that is rude. So Sam was talking with Nancy and the MC does those comment and she leaves sad. The MC slow like always don't understand what happened so Nancy points out what he did wrong because like I said, he has the common sense of a brick, and then he have a machist's though that "Sam catched really fast how to be a woman because they twitch every word a man says". Really this guy is so smart like the game want us to believe?

If you choose to date Sam the MC will start to think about find another trans woman and have sex with her, before to be with Sam to know if he will like it, WTF??

We are in a world where magic, demons, vampires, etc, exist and the MC wants to go and rescue a girl from vampires, he ask for help, people tells him is a bad idea and they give him pretty good reasons. He feels angry and "dissapointed" because they don't want to help and acts like a stupid and tries to rescue her without thinking that maybe he could get her killed or even him, because he knows nothing about that world and he is going against vampires not against harmless homeless people.

There are moments when the MC contradicts himself about what he says or think, like he was just trying to justify his stupidity.

Random scenes like the coffee shop, you can ask for a milkshake and the woman will take out her boobs in front of everyone and milk herself to make the milkshake and no one cares or act surprised or anything, is like something of everyday, looks like you could jerk off in that coffee shop and cum in a glass and probably they will find it okay too.

Some of the minigames are anoying because they are really hard, nearly impossible to do, because of time or ilumination, like the lockpick minigame.

Some of the minigames are anoying because they are really hard, nearly impossible to do, because of time or ilumination, like the lockpick minigame.

Looks like choices have no much meaning in the game more than let you fuck a woman or if you like or not some kink, like watersport.

The mom and sister aren't related to him by blood, even with the patch, so what is the point of a patch if they aren't related?
Is like if you are fucking your neighboor´s daughter, but you call him dad, so if we follow the Devs logic, you are commiting incest, even when you aren't related to any of them. That is fucking stupid.

Forgot about the sex scenes, this Dev clearly don't understand what his public is, why in the world I would want to see the MC's asshole while he fucks?? Is like in porn movies where the cameraman puts the cam right in the guy ass. I don't want to see that FOR FUCKS SAKE!!

In conclusion I don't recommend this game, probably if you are curious just unlock the gallery to see whats in it, but personally I wouldn't play it again.

Premise of this game at first seemed like some others, but dev did a great job keeping the story interesting. Game play is well paced with both dialog and erotic content. Mini games are skip-able as is content. Over all an excellent job and well worth a play.

v0.2.12 rating 3.5*

Very nice little game. The renders are nice, animations smooth, and the story is just fine. Its always a tricky thing to make a game that takes place in the future, and well this one has issues with that. Apparently we are still using iphones and driving minivans around a hundred years from now, but that sort of thing is more a function of the cost of making ALL the background assets science fictioney I'm guessing.

There is plenty of lewd content for a story forward game and serve a wide variety of kinks. The women in the game are also of a wide variety. From nubile coed barely legals to GILFs, normal girls, trans girls and demon girls. Its all in there, and rather well done.

The story is... fine, but the actual writing is... not amazing. Its a bit Engrishy with a fair number of grammar issues. It was obviously written by someone who doesnt speak English as a first language, but I had no problems following everything and the writing actually didnt come off as robotic like a lot of translations do. It all just needed another pass from a native english speaker. I suspect its probably well written in the original language. Like i said I was mostly okay with the issues.

A big issue i did have that cost the title a full star or so is that its buggy. Like send you back to the main menu buggy. There are fixes for it but I had to hunt far and wide to get em. Annoying, and really even a little alpha/beta testing would have caught it. That's really unacceptable. Game breaking bugs are so rare in Ren'py games these days so that really just stands out.

Worlds of Wonders [v0.2.12 Bugfix]

Story/Narrative
Essentially this story is Hogwarts in the modern setting, but clashed against advanced technology. There is decent exposition sprinkled here and there on the news, talked about by the characters and the MC alike. So world immersion is built fairly well as a result. The first half of the game I would say explores more of the magical side, with technology being given relatively less screen time. But the story doesn't even seem halfway done so I'm sure that will be expanded upon as more updates come out.
That being said the whole Hogwarts vs Technology seems to take a back seat to the love interests. There are a wide cast of characters with varying personalities, and different motivations. This review isn't really based on the story, but if I had to solely base it off of the narrative I would give it 3 out of 5 stars as of right now. The writing doesn't really give enough payoff for all the build up, in other words; there haven't been enough significant events to justify the journey. I'm just hoping they expand a little on the technology side of the story, and build up the inevitable climax of the MC and his family.

Gameplay/Choices
Throughout the game there are multiple choices the player can make to influence the content they see. A good amount of kinks/fetishes are already showcased through the beginning of the game and as shown in the new app on the phone, plenty more will be explored. All of which seem to be toggled on or off so that is a plus. There are two minigames I can remember that are optional to pass certain tasks in the story. One is only used once, and the other ranges to easy from pretty challenging. So variety is poor but they're skippable so it doesn't really effect the game negatively or postively.

Bugs/Grammar
The BUGS in this game are quite frankly terrible. Mainly because they made me quit to the main menu multiple times. The way I had to play this game, was to have the original game in one folder; then have a copy in another. One copy would have a patch I downloaded to fix the UI error with the phone. But that fix actually broke the menu screen; so I couldn't save/load. I had to quicksave, then hop over to the other copy without the fix to continue.
I would like to add I've played at least dozens of adult visual novels before this. Never once did I have to do what I had to for this game. Needless to say, but these errors need to be completely fixed next update.
I can't remember any grammar mistakes, so either there were none or there were a small handful so I forgot about them.

Cinematography/Soundtrack
The renders in this game are pretty average. Though there are some details in this game I haven't seen in to many others. The camerawork in most cases is pretty generic and just seems like they leveled the camera for every shot. Which doesn't take away from the game mind you, it just makes it feel more of the same in terms of visual novels. There is no real identity or signature look the game has that makes it stand out from the others. Soundtrack is very bare bones. It's not muted thankfully, there was effort put into multiple scenes that adds to the atmosphere. But some songs linger to long or seem just a bit off in terms of the current scenario.

Side Notes
The Futa/Trans tag is for the transgender females in the game, that take a more realistic version of the trans tag. Not the hyper futa you might see in porn (for those wondering).

Overall
The game definitely needs more work but the dev seems to be posting semi-frequently so I fairly certain we will see improvement. But until then I don't recommend playing this.

Worlds of wonders [ v0.2.10 ]

Don't know why I didn't try this game until now. But this one is surprisingly a nice game. Nice renders and got sound effects. Models are nicely polished. Nice variety of characters luke humans, demons, vampires, faes etc. Also got a nice magical story. But the core story is not Fully explored. For now game is focusing on girl's story. There are various kinks of you don't want to see it you can avoid it. Animations are good . And futa route is also nice futa character is uncomfortable with her sexuality and is doubting wheter Mc likes her or not. Also Mc is also doubting about how His relationship with her turns out. Whether he like the sex with her or not. Fair amount of content too.

Overall I enjoyed the game. Looking forward to next updates keep up the good work dev.

TLDR: Annoying snorefest.
==============================v2.9

*Lots of talking about boring bs, feels like a typical slice of life dating sim. Zzzzzzzzzzzz...

*Next to no choices, especially ones that actually matter.

*Can't give two fucks about incest because apparently your "sister" and your "mother" both are black. Nothing against blacks, but will not bang. Not to mention that this is step-shit all over again even with the patch because mc is white and not biologically related to them, yes, even with the patch. Why the fuck do we even need that patch?
Fake incest is fake.

*MC is kinda wimpy, and a total dumbass.
But somehow every ho is into him anyway. Probably the almighty power of the harem tag, or his baby face.

*Ever had a girl drive YOU to a date with her on a fucking bicycle? You can experience it here. I nearly vomited.

*The "game" doesn't particularly care about player preferences, mc still gets hard from his "sis" even if the player doesn't give a shit about her, or mc is into some soldier chick and wants her autograph, again, even if the player doesn't really give a shit about her, too. Or goes on to rescue vampire food, yes, again, regardless of what the player may want to do in that situation.

*Sex is an absolute snore.
*Animation is meh at best.
*Technically has sex sound, but 0 variety and on top of that is abysmally horrible. Luckily you can turn that shit off.
*Ambient is meh in most places, repetitive, and low variety.

*The 'dream elf' needs work on her face, or i want an option to put a paper bag on her head.

*Mc finally gets his hands on a magic tome and tries to learn a new spell, AT LAST!
So, what does he learn? Of course, it has to be some worthless bullshit that's also tied to patreon..

*So, dev, you want the player to care about mc's family? Yet you make 0 effort to develop a solid bond between the player and your characters first? Congratz, you are making the same exact mistake devs of Fallout4 made who thought i'd give a shit about some kid i saw for literally one minute. So naturally, i never really cared about rushing to some club to save my dumbass "sis," yet mc did so anyway, because fuck players and what they think amright?
Mc also constantly goes: 'Damn, this or that chick is so beautiful, being with her is a dream~.'
Meanwhile you the player: 'Uh-huh bruh, whatever you say. Ugh.'

*Will require proofreading because a lot of Engrish.

*Annoying fucking minigames, but thank the void you are able to skip that shit.

*Camera angles in some scenes fucking suck, enjoy having a dude's asshole all over your screen while he bangs.

*So apparently nobody finds it weird that there is a cafe where you can watch milfs make you a milkshake from the milk they squeeze right there in the open, outa their own jugs.

*Girls in this game apparently expect a guy to know about their shitty girl singer groups. Gimme a fucking break...

*Pink haired bitch, while on a date with mc, called mc 'cute,' talked to some random bitch as if mc didn't even exist, then took him to women's clothing store and told him: 'Maybe we'll find something here for you.' Then we are granted the "joy" of listening to some random rich kid singing some stupid song while his bodyguard goes all snarky at mc and then goes away (thankfully) before i lost it.. Right after that the pink haired bitch proceeds to say stupid shit to the already annoyed (by rich kid) shop owner girl and mc actually proceeds to defend the pink bitch when the shop owner reasonably but politely tells her to fuck off. HOLY FUCKING SHIT!
I should have never asked pink haired bitch for her number, seriously big mistake.

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This is about as far as i could tolerate the bullshit in this "game."
Basically very amateur work, that's barely non-kinetic, with lots of very cringe and annoying as fuck moments.

v0.2.7

Pros
+ H-scenes are animated with sound
+ The world building is the most note worthy thing, but not much of it has translated in to interesting plot yet
+ If you enjoy a magical world that parodies Harry Potter, this is that

Cons
- No gallery
- Not many H-scenes yet, and most of the H-scenes with penetration are with one character.
- H-scenes tend to be short and fast. Typically it's one loop and then the finish. Scenes don't build up arousal, very little dirty talk and sex animation never goes fast enough to feel intense
- The Reflector Mini-game is optional, but it can feel impossible to beat when 3 projectiles come at the same time. You can't reflect all of them with a single well timed input, you have to hit enter 3 times within a very short time window. Also the actual hit box for reflecting projectiles is smaller than what you see. Often times projectiles touching the box doesn't get deflected, and projectiles still within the box, fail to get deflected.
- It's another one of those you are the "chosen one" story lines, where you're blessed by your lineage. The problem with this storyline is that there is little to no tension ever. You can make really big mistakes, but can't be punished for it because you're just too powerful.

Conclusion
I really like the fantasy genre and I like sandbox games, but I find that this one has really slow pacing, you can't stop your character from making certain decisions, and the H-scenes are unremarkable. The exciting stuff is school life at the wizarding school & what we're doing with magic, but the story is getting slowed down by side story developments and lore without relevance to plot.

i like the story, although sometimes it seems unlogical! But hey it´s a game about magic after all.
The Renders are really good, many fetishes are covered (avoidable),
NO NTR!!! , some minigames but you can always skip them (i always do) animations are not too bad. I hope they will improve but i have seen far worse.
So far a fast update cycle (4 weeks i guss so far?). Worth a try in my opinion..

pretty good game and the sex scene with the half demon was perfect submissive or dominant i loved them both and of course step sister story is very impressive but classic ause always i was love in with you bro but you didnt see me

I'd like to review this when there is a decent amount of content, but I really don't have the patience to wait until 2050. I do like what is here so far, don't get me wrong. I REALLY want to give this four stars. It's very good, the presentation and worldbuilding is top notch. My issues are the same two issues I see over and over. DEFAULT RENPY UI and I'm not sure what bothers me more, a completely awful translation, or in this games case it's almost well done but there are lapses in grammar and words used strangely. A big one being "hu" instead of "huh." Either way, the English isn't all there and it's detrimental to a visual novel. You know, something you read...?

The story is MC's dad dies, not too sad though because he didn't know his dad. Leaves him a house and finds out he's a hairy wizard, or whatever the joke is. He lives with his step-mom and step-sister, a weird thing with that is the "patch" makes it so MC refers to them as step-family? I don't get it, but whatever. Up until the beginning of the story, MC was dumped and ready to go to college on a scholarship. But then get a letter saying his dad's dead and MC needs to go to the reading of the will. His dad left him a broken down house and a key (which isn't even a part of the story yet) and MC wants to learn about his birth parents. So he goes to Dark Falls to try to learn anything. There he learns about magic and how to learn more of it. He was going to a regular university, but Awkwarts, the university of magic, is free and will help him learn about his father. Can I just say, AWKWARTS? Are you kidding me? Anyway. And.... That's all there is in the game so far. MC learns about magic and other races, deters a couple vampires, and sleeps with a half-demon. Not a lot of actual progression.

This game has serious scope issues, there are a ton of love interests and the other half of the story that is hinted at, but not even implemented yet. There's the whole magic side of things and then there's the brewing Sci-Fi plot of space and the damn android on the game's banner. Not to mention the miniscule update size. So Once again this just feels like a patreon-milking story that will take forever by design, unfortunately. And I UnRen'd the game to look at stuff, I'm not kidding how overdeveloped it is. I get making things to build off of, but there are what, THREE "open world" segments in the game in which you walk through two doors, can't click on anything, click on the objective, and are forced right back into the linear story. On top of the shotgun blast of fetishes trying to cater to everyone, I don't see this not being a complete headache of a game to make.

TLDR - Short. Very short. Default textbox, font, and choices which is visually unappealing. The story is good, what little there is. And worth a read, in my opinion. Just.. Find something else to do until there's more here.

Writing review for 0.2.4.

As far as I see, the game as of now is just getting up to speed, and the story is just starting.

It is a VN, with minor choices. The story, and maybe more important, the storytelling is very good. For me, that really makes a difference. Having enough to read to keep me interested, but also few enough not not make me skip reading. That is really a crucial point that a lot of writers do not understand.

Yes, some story parts (the family) are not really ingenious. But as I said, storytelling is more important. There is no rush, and no endless stupid presentation of MCs forbidden thoughts.

Good game.
Solid 4-star.

Interesting story, good character designs, diverse character design, good animation, and the mixture of animation with the text sequence is good. -1 star due to soft-lock in some scenes if you lose the mini-game. But overall I would recommend this game.

I can't wait to see where it goes, will get out more of this dev's work and might check his Patreon, if these are the type of games he/she makes. Recommended to play if you enjoy fantasy-based VN games.

As of ver 0.2.2

Rating - Average
That about sums this game up from what I've played so far - average.

Almost everything about it feels like a cut-and-paste of bits and pieces of any of a dozen other games, and then reassembled in a slightly different way.
Immersion just isn't hapening for me with this game because of scene transitions or dialogues that don't fit the situation.

E.G.:
1. You get a room in a hotel for the night, get up the next morning, have one short conversation with the hotel staff then go and visit someone at a nightclub. One very short conversation later and you're preparing to leave the club *late at night*. Did the MC just switch off for the rest of the day? One short walk and two short conversations and it's already late at night?

2. You stay at the nightclub the next night after short conversation and very brief look at the 5 or so other cutouts (you can't interact with them) that were there, then wake up at midday because apparently you had quite a party there last night.
Huh? What party?

3. Was the MC driving to the old town or catching the train? He said "driving" a number of times.

These might appear trivial on their own, but there's enough non-sequitur scene changes and portions of dialogue that don't fit the scene, that they break any potential mood or flow of the game.

Nothing about it stands out at all.
Nothing here is new or different.
I do not think this game has any potential if the dev is going to continue to just copy and paste unoriginal VN "clip-art" and not put in any care and attention to details.

Pretty good game (0.2.1). Some grammar errors but didn't bother me much. The renders are very good and the story is interesting, characters are unique and likable/dislikable. The choices were meaningful, it felt like and a good array of different kinks were portrayed. But I really liked that there's further depth than just main story and kinks. The characters have their fears and concerns and I felt I really cared about them.

Some minor complaints:

-Team manager of galactic crew is just 27 year old, it's highly unlikely she would've had enough time to get educated enough, and she acts like 35 year old anyway.

-Dark Falls having no electricity feels like a stretch. But there's magic involved and most of the story is still unraveling so I believe there may be an explanation later.

-At times the scenes felt a bit rushed to transition into next one. Like at one moment the MC is at the cafe, one click and he's back home. But mostly the pacing is good.

And praises:

-Great renders
-Great sounds/music
-Great characters with depth
-Great dialogue choices
-Attention paid to details, I was impressed several times when I noticed small things on scenes
-Very nice character/scene gallery! +++++

Some people complain about partial sandbox, I personally like how it's done here. Overall I recommend this game and will be waiting for future updates. Good work so far from the dev.