Season 2 chapter 1 Ep13 B4 (what a name...)
The game could have been good...
You follow the journey of a college basketball star with a troubled past that he don't remember much about. Due to the few he remember, he have a goal in live, use his fame to spread love around him and help people in need. This while, unknown from him, this past imply that some people want him to fall.
Add the cuck queen girlfriend that want him to literally spread love, and this could have been a really interesting lewd game to play.
But "could" is the word that change everything...
The renders are average, with each everything clearly being out of the box. To the point that on a single image you can have some characters that have a realistic enough skin, while others looks like plastic dolls. Without counting the many errors, with metals that looks like plastic, or in the last update a door floating in space ? I don't know how is could be possible otherwise to see the room through the left and right side of the door at the same time...
There's also the case of Shauna, MC's best friend that you can choose as being either a female, or a transgender. That renders showing her clothed don't care about the possible dick, I can understand, it save time. But when she's on underwear, with her dick supposed to be fully erected, it's start to be visible that she have nothing "there". The worse being when she instinctively caress, through her panties or, worse, while naked, the vagina she don't have, instead of feeling the dick she's supposed to have. Something, must be noted, that don't limits to Shauna. All transgenders characters tend to have the same problem. Well, except the teammate that is an asexual Female to Male transgender who don't care a single second to have among the biggest boobs in the game; something totally stupid...
What lead to the writing...
On this side, I'm tempted to say that it's the Twilight of adult games. It feel childish, as if wrote by someone who wouldn't know what emotions are, and therefore would face the impossibility to express them with words. Someone who would also never ever have interacted with other human beings, and genuinely believe that peoples patiently wait their turn before reacting to what they are told. This even if it mean waiting for long minutes... by persons that have to speak before him.
The worse case being probably in that update, with a long monologue supposed to be full of sadness, but that is so out of place that it makes smile more than anything else.
But the issue with the writing don't limits to the dialogs, nor to the words themselves.
The whole first part of the game is the repetition of the same scheme, again and again:
MC awake happy, he then learn that something terrible is near to happen to him, but will not care a single second during the 48h that his day will last (yeah, I know). Then, when the night come, or near to when it will come, boom ! The bad thing happen. Then, boom ! Coming from nowhere the situation will do a 180° and the day will be saved. MC will then lie down in bed (except that time he was in jail), and every single girl living in the house will lie with him on the bed.
And since I talk about them, the girls...
I tried to count them, but lost the count. There's too many of them, fucking too many of them. Just with MC's close relatives you can easily count a tenth. His adoptive mother and her best friend, his real mother, his girlfriend, her sister, her mother, his best friend, his sister, the girl that had a crush on him when they were kids, and I surely forgot some. Then add at least a dozen for the girls that are close but not relatives, plus at least a dozen for the girls that are neither close nor relatives, but will still be sexually involved with him. Without counting the girls he have sex with because they want to have a child, but there's only half of dozen of them... so far.
It's simple, the only guys in this game are MC teammates (yet one is the FtM transgender I talked about above) and the baddies that goes against him. And I really mean the only guys, you wont see any other guy, unless they are jealous boyfriends/husbands, and therefore count as baddies because, oh god, it put such tension in the story, while making the MC looks so bright and nice...
But, the issue with the girls isn't just that there's way too many. It's also that they all have a problem that only MC and his caring personality will be able to solve. And when it will be done, they'll throw themselves at him, sometimes literally. Not that they waited for this to tell him how much they love him, want him to fuck them, and act like 13yo girls that just met this idol that they'll love all their life because "OMG he's such a wonder and I'm talking to him right now, never ever will I shower the shoulder he put his hand on".
When it's college girls, that they act in such immature way, why not... But when it's thirtish, or older, ones, it become ridiculous; even more ridiculous when they are trying to hide it.
And Basketball in all this ?
Well, so far near to 5 years, we had two or three training sessions, I don't remember exactly, and one off season match...
But it's not MC's fault. Days only last 48h (yeah, I still know), so he can't do some kind of studying, force the girls to explain what is their problem, solve the problem, fuck the girl he just solved the problem, fuck some of the girls he already solved the problems, put a baby in women who can't have one if it's not his (you read me right, the first girl to be pregnant is a forthish woman who genuinely thought that she was infertile), fight the baddies, and play basketball.
He have to make some choices, and like basketball is just what he do since his youngest years, what he love the most in life, after his girlfriend and best friend, as well as the reason why he joined that college, and, of course, the premise of the game, it's what he drop most of the time...
Make sense, right ?
In the end, it's the first game that make me regret that we can't give 0 stars.
Not because of everything I talked about, but because each update is worse than the previous one. Generally people improve with time and, whatever is their limits, you can somehow feel it. But here it really looks like a social experiment to see how far one can goes before people give up to all their hopes.