VN - Ren'Py - WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B5] [Braindrop]

Edit:
So now that the game has had quite a few more updates come out I've dropped the initial rating I gave. I think that many of the choices over time have made the game worse. The amount of characters has gotten out of hand and the story feels more and more shallow with each release. Countless unbelievable excuses for the delays in updates.

It wasn't really a problem at first with the facial poses that many of the characters have, but at this point all of the characters do that duckface shit and it's ridiculous. No one actually looks like that all the time. I think the characters would look better in a more natural state. Don't get me started on the literal black square censorship. Either way the dev seems to be taking the Icstor route and milking the goodwill generated from the early weekly releases they were able to churn out.

[Review Version Day1-2 Windows]

This is a cleverly crafted game that is well written.

I feel that games where the MC himself has places to be and things to do already has a strong leg up out of the gate compared to games where the MC has to be "endured" (like an 18 y/o virgin delivering pizza). It kind of allows a double fantasy (e.g to become a Rock Star or a Mafia don akin to a standard RPG) in addition to "getting the girls." In WVM you get to live the life of the star athlete in college.

MC has a close circle of 3 + 1 he lives with and the set up allows access to plenty of additional young girls/cheerleaders. Meanwhile, a sideline promises a steady stream of MILFs.

There is plenty of content already, the dialogue is well written (though it goes a bit OTT with the "I love you," "oh I love you more" sweetness for my tastes). The renders are good and there are plenty of H-scenes.

Recommended

About WVM Day 1 v1.1
PLAY IT! I have a good feeling about this game.
+ Writing in this game is one of the best on F95.
+ Reliable main female characters
+ I can finally romance shemale character!!! thank you for that! (choice about her being shamale or female is yours)
-One big flaw of this game is MC (your) background:
~ dick as big as eiffel tower,
~ he is mr. perfect (TOO PERFECT!!!) -> sport guy, gentleman, there is no woman that can resist him. He doesn't have to do anything.
~ I don't know american reality, but this thing with receiving a big house for free seem rather unreal and I don't like it.

4 stars because Braindrop seem like a talented person.
Although this is a 'fuck all the ladies kind of game' I will play this one little differently: avoid all other womans in this story and focus on my Shauna romance.
I will add one more star to my review if author will let Shauna to use her dick on the MC

day 1 review

This will be a treat for anyone who likes romance. It will also appeal greatly for those who like a confident, competent, caring, and respectful MC who also happens to be an all american, all star, horse hung stud.

That is great, but it brings with it one problem. The MC is too shoehorned into being that good, loyal friend and BF. It makes for a very awkward and sudden shift in characterization if you choose to pick the less noble options available on this first release. There is quite a disconnect between everything you learn about the MC and some of the things you can choose to do. The writing is good enough that the characters really come to life, and when the choices you can make takes such a drastic turn from what you would expect from that character, it feels a bit off.

With such a strong introduction of MC's character, it really needs is some segway into why the MC's morals might change or how the circumstances affects him. Maybe a scene where he is understanding but truthfully dissatisfied with the GF wanting to take things too slowly. Maybe some internal thoughts on him being sexually attracted to the best friend lately if you choose to check her out. Maybe the step mom's boss only agrees to let her go on the trip with you if you bang her. MC can begrudgingly accept it, but it flips a switch in him that maybe sex is just sex or that he enjoys the depravity. Just something to prod him along the cheating path.

That said, some of the cheating and more intense scenes were really hot, if a bit short. Dev can certainly create some kinky scenes as well as romantic stuff, so the future is looking quite bright for this game. Writing is great. Story is set up quite nicely at this point. Characters are believable. Black teammate seems like he will be a real bro. Dialogue sounds very natural. Renders are mostly great, but characters look a bit odd in a few scenes.

edit: The dev fixed some of the issues about the inconsistencies deriving from MC's cheating on day 1. It is slightly more in line with the character now. Just slightly though. Chapter 2 also opens up another can of worms with gf's sister that seems a bit off if you go for it. Even she reacts with "wait... what?" Lol.

I don't really mind it too much, but I can confidently say that if you want the most consistent and "canon" experience, you should probably stick to being faithful to the gf or at least to the main girls. The two main girls seem like it could probably lead to a wholesome poly relationship.. with maybe adding the step mom to the mix at some point.

The side pussies are still a bit hard to justify in terms of character. At some point, he just has to own it up and accept that he is a sex maniac. I mean how can I turn down Bailey and the coach... and now biological mom and sister is joining the fray?? Thank god MC can cum like 16 times a day to satisfy all these chicks

Monster cock. Monster cock. Monster cock.

Why do so many people ruin their games by giving the MC a monster cock? I swear the bj scene with the gf looked like something out of a horror film.

The renders look stunning at times and then other times they look really odd and goofy. Not really my cup of tea but I can tell a lot of work went into this game so I wont give it less than a 3 star rating. Will likely come back after a few updates and see if I want to change this review.

Solid beginning. I like almost every character. Giving some options at the start is just good game quality. Don't know yet how much of an impact your choices have. Definitely gonna follow. Setting/story is also pretty rare. This is a good twist, to be wanted by everyone.

I Haven't Seen Such an Amazing Game In Months I Like How Each character is Carefully Thought Out and The Sexual Content Aside the story shows affection towards Characters I would Recommend It To All And The Shemale Twist It Gives you some thing new to explore in 3d games Its Amazing
Although Could You Please Reduce His Penis Size Thats like The Only Flaw Here

Hope U continue This Amazing Game This World Needs Devs Like You.....

Well seen this game today i must say i skipped past it thinking no not for me BUT Had a scan through some of the comments and then i gave it ago
glad i did . just hope i 'm not going to get into another game that get's abandoned it would be ashame i think it show's a lot of promise keep up the good work DEV

just a update i have gone from 4 to 5 star wow good work DEV

can we stick six stars on here WOW WOW WOW

That was actually a very promising start, such lovely and gorgeous ladies, especially Azel, Jamie and Shauna. I even loved it when each of the ladies told what MC means to them, how they met, and such, it's lovely to get that background and connection with them right off the bet, helps me care for them that much more.
Art is great, animation are of good quality and writing is good, very easy to follow, the story to come sounds quite interesting.

I'd like to give 5 stars, but as they say, there's no such thing as perfection and there's always room for improvement, and I'm sure the more and longer the dev keeps developing this, the more he'll improve

This is one that I would recommend to play even in its current build, there's quite a bit in it already

I'll be sure to keep my eye on future updates, really loving this already

This is my review for WVM [Day 1 v1.1 BUGFIX]. 5 Stars.
This has the potential to be one of the best if not the best Game/VN ever!

Pros:
Story 5/5: The story is refreshingly new to me, I have not played any other game/VN with this kind of story before, the story itself is well written and believable, decisions have weight to them and the characters have depth/personality/emotion, the MC is believable other then the yule log between his legs, you can pick and choose who you want to pursue and those choices effect the story line
Graphics 5/5: Models are excellent, only a couple that I have seen before but all in all the models are well done and you get a good assortment of body types and sizes, tons of excellent animation for the sexy scenes
Game play 5/5: No grinding or sandbox elements, no mini games, its simple and straight forward

Cons:
MC has a giant yule log for a penis
Azel appears to be cross-eyed most the time
Ahego face on Alexis (waitress at the coffee shop) looks silly and breaks immersion
Shauna's penis with transsexual content turned on changes sizes, initial reveal shows normal sized but its considerably smaller in the images/animations for doggystyle and missionary sex scenes and isnt shown in images/animations where it would be visible, namely the BJ scene

****Update Day 1-3****
Like always fantastic Graphics & Animation...
The Story is still going Strong....
and Boy,this update was Great,and also shows other Devs how to do a update that has great gameplay and takes lots of time to finish,not like alot of other money making games that take only around 5 minutes to Play...
The only thing that is not so nice to hear is that the Dev will not implement some NTR scenes,but I still love the Game, just thought it would add a little Spice to a already Great Game.



This is the rating for the Game in Version [Day 1 v1.1 BUGFIX ] from me:

Pros:
+ Very easy to understand
+ Fantastic Renders
+ Nice Story
+ No Dullness
+ Fantastic Animations
+ Nice fresh Girls
+ Long Gameplay
+ Great POV

Cons:
- Dick to BIG

Conclusion:

Who would have thought that this would be such a great game behind such a small titel,I sure didn't think so...but boy was I told otherwise.
Love that you dont run around senseless, plus the game doesn't get boring at all.
The Game is also going at a good pace,not pulling useless game play to the Max.
The girls look fantastic and tight, also I love the closeups, they are fantastic,cant say it any differently..
The Animation is also Top notch and one of the best I have seen.
The only thing that I dont like too much is that the guys dick looks like a third leg,fucking huge,makes you worry that it doesn't come out of the girks mouth while screwing, the late John Holmes would have been Jealous.
Not into shemale,but still played it and thought it was great.
But Dev,Please make that dick maybe three inches smaller,and the women will thank you for not torturing them.

aside from not liking the monster dick it is one of my Top 10 Games.

Recommendation:
Damn worth the download
Lots of fun Playing.

it´s only Day 1 and it´s allready better than most complete games.
love the characters , shauna and the mom are my number 1 ^^
jaime is realy cute to
if the game contiunes like that, it can be the best adult game in the net, at leats for me (sorry for my english, i hope its not totaly crap^^)

Great game. Beautiful renders with unique models, not the same used-up models featured in every game on the site. It's very well-written, both in the sense that the English is good and doesn't break immersion, and it tells a new and interesting story with original and likable characters. The protagonist isn't a total douche. Has more content in its first release than most games in their 5th.

Highly recommended.

I can see this game becoming one of my favorites.
The pace is pretty good, the writing and story is interesting, (i love basketball so that makes this game even more appealing to me, can't wait to see some scenes of us playing basket )
For this being just a first reléase is pretty good with a lot of content and sex, no blue balls and it seems like it will be one of those games where u can have a lot of sex with different ladies... since I don't want to spoiler, you should play it and you will know what I mean, of course, you can also be just loyal to your girlfriend.
You can choose your childhood friend gender shemale or female, for those that have that kink.
The renders are very good except for some of the renders done to Azel, her eyes look a bit weird sometimes, but that is something the dev can fix easily.
for those that like vanilla games and centered in the mcs (us) this a must-play, nothing more to add.
Have fun & Support the dev if u can spare some money.

So where to start?

This is another update for this VN. My first one was way back in August of 2019, then another one sometime in 2022.
Now this one in December of 2023

The Dev started off the year decent enough. Promising an update a week. I think it lasted maybe 60 seconds in the grand scheme of things.

PROS
I can't give this mess of a VN any pros because at this point, the VN should have ended around 2-3 years ago.

CONS
Everything is a con with this VN. Over stuffed with way way way way way way way way way way to many ladies, and the creator just keeps adding more to the mix.

SUMMARY
Honestly if Braindrop would have just kept it short and sweet this VN would have been really good. I honestly believe that the whole process just steamrolled him into a frenzied panic to add more content than was needed.
And now he's going back and redoing the whole thing from the start.

Yes I am a supporter of this dev. Yes this will not last any longer.

There are harem VNs out there that are leagues beyond this one.
Less women, better story and stop giving false hope of when you plan on releasing updates. Simply state that you plan on releasing an update when you can.

OVERALL
SKIP THIS VN AT ALL COSTS
Way to many outside factors prevent this dev from actually sticking to a solid release time frame, and constant set backs run rampant with his schedule. To many ideas running around, and to many things on his plate are preventing him from focusing on creating quality content.