VN - Ren'Py - WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 B7] [Braindrop]

This is a fantastic game. I've played a number of ren'py-based adult games and have to say that this title stands out in my opinion.
In particular I think the setting of the story is quite refreshing and its progress so far is interesting, too.
Characterization and character progress of the main character(s) (and honestly, most if not all other characters as well) are handled very well. They have me waiting to see where the story takes them next at any rate and I (somewhat similar to the main character) have begun to care about them (to a degree of course). That is an impressive feat to achieve for any writer. So my appreciation and commendations for that.
The writing and use of language (inner dialogue in particular) obviously are the main tools for this. In other words: great writing, keep up the good work!
The choices available in-game feel quite impactful. That is another really good thing for a game of this sort. I hope the developer can keep this up in the future, when more characters and/or further story developments continue to complicate things. It would be important to keep close watch on the story not being forcefully limited too much (which might make the player feel like the decisions are no longer that important) and on the other hand keep the characters likeable and true to their characterization so far. This is not a problem at the moment, perhaps just something to look out for in the future.
Now I don't know much about rendering or animations. But what I have seen in this game looks great and is definitely at least on par with other games out there.
Let me finish by saying again that I think this is a great game which I definitely will keep an eye out for in the future.
Thanks for your hard work!

so going in i just figured, another school romp lets see how it goes! while bored and looking for something new to try, and all i can say is damn! blew me away this was a hell of a lot better then i had expected even with the best hopes. hell as of writing this day 1-4 has about as much content as some 0.6 or 0.7 and its got a fucking PLOT not kidding a fucking plot this isn't a plumber coming to snake her drain boys its an actual story

short talk tho its a good guy harem game how rare is that , also has some great clips and im super excited to see where this goes

I'll start by saying Braindrop is putting a lot of effort into WVM, probably beyond a healthy amount, and it shows. All the characters have distinct personalities that don't bleed into each other. The review rules say "try to be objective", but the things I love most about this game are very subjective.

When I first saw the 3 main girls, I thought they looked... slightly odd. I thought "Jamie has weirdly sharp corners of her lips, and Azel has a hilarious expression constantly". Looking back now, I realize this sets them apart from other games where all the women are designed to be objectively "perfect". It seemed like Braindrop wanted the characters to look unique, not perfect. They aren't objectively perfect, but many would argue they are Subjectively perfect. They grow on you really fast, just as a certain meme-lord implied.

Anyway on with the "objective" part of the review.

Render and model quality: 9/10
The character models clearly have a lot of time and care put into them. It's almost as though they are exactly what he envisioned before even creating them. I'm not going to say they are objectively awesome, but most models are at least unique, particularly with expressions. I love it. I'm taking a point off for two reasons. First, some abnormal usual ass cheek protrusion. It's hard to explain but I notice it right away in a game. Secondly, there is a lack of definition in skin and/or eyes on some models. Shauna for instance. Her skin is very smooth and IMO lacks definition. Her irises lack depth as well. As far as image quality, I don't recall any compression artifacts.

Character development and dialogue: 10/10
As I stated earlier, every character has a completely unique personality. Braindrop's personality and speech patterns don't seep into any of the characters, which is extremely important when it comes to writing dialogue. There are rarely any typos, and Braindrop's grammar is likely better than mine (it is impossible to assess your own grammar since our own errors are not realized by ourselves). The vocabulary isn't overbearing or pretentious. It's good writing, but the average English speaker definitely won't need to google words constantly to play the game.

Story/concept: 9/10
The story is a sort of "dream come true" plot, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. It's just really relentless with it is all. I find myself conflicted on this because we all want dream come true, but the same time, it isn't the most sophisticated way to write a story. Sophisticated isn't synonymous with appealing though. There is plenty of progressive metal that sucks ass, meanwhile "Hey Joe" by Jimi Hendrix is almost a universally beloved song. The story has it's drama though, so it's not all rainbows and unicorns I guess. You will be a knight in shining armor for every single woman in the game, and that might be too saccharine-sweet for some people.

I'm not that good at giving reviews but since I decided to pledge to Braindrop after reading the note at the end of chapter 4 and learning how consistent he has been with updates despite difficult circumstances I thought I'd give it a try.
The art direction and renders are great, the writing is good especially regarding the characters, every one of them are likeable (at least those meant to be ) and though I've played my fair share of harem games I never knew how much I wanted one were your girlfriend want you to build a harem until I played this one

Okay, we have there one of most fast growing games of this year. So i taken eye on it.

Game is not bad at all, scenario is somehow fresh and game nicely flowing. My biggest problem is art in this game. Other people here talking about awesome renders, great models, excelent graphics. ....
GUYS? LIKE WTHack? WHERE? Tell me please where you saw it? Art in this game is definitelly FAR under average. Many models expressions is somehow almost SCARY, when they trying to smile! Almost al models eyes going crossview ? (AmI using right word for it? Looks funny.) There almost no lighting all renders is done by blank light maybe dome and only camera lights.

DAMN GUYS! If you want to talking about nice art look on games from Philly, NoTvill, Motkey and many others, but this?!

Quality of art in this game is big NO ( Games in 2016 looks better than this one). Don't talk about great art, if there is nothing even close to great art. That's probably done, because Dev have little experiences with 3D, fine everybody somehow starting, but that hype around ?

So my Overall is 3 stars, I finded no bugs, storyline is fine, but art draging that game down in a big way. I didn't give 2 only because I already give 2 to much worse game with many bugs and things around than this one is.

(v0.4.6)

You play as a young athlete who enrolls in a college with a struggling basketball team. Your status as the star player has made you very popular with the ladies, and you are given many perks to play for the team. It's basically the perfect setup for a fun care-free romp. Except for one thing...

The main character has a girlfriend who is stuck in the deepest depths of the uncanny valley. I find her to be very unattractive in both looks and personality, so I would gladly get rid of her if the game gave me the choice. Unfortunately, the game never gives you that option, which means I'm stuck with her. She also happens to have the most content of any of the girls by far, so you end up seeing an awful lot of her. Which is a shame, since I do enjoy pretty much everything else in the game.

As far as the gameplay goes, it's a standard visual novel, so there's no grind at all. There are some choices that change how the story unfolds, but the only ones that matter are those that involve side characters. The early game has a seemingly important choice to be made about the two main girls but it doesn't matter in the long run because the game funnels you back onto one path later on. These sorts of fake choices always annoy me so that was a big disappointment.

(v0.9.4)

Not only has this game failed to improve, but it has gotten much worse over time.

The facial expressions are still disturbingly unnatural, the main plot continues to railroad you onto one path even when it goes against your early choices, and Jamie is forced on you harder than ever before. There are a bunch of new characters that are added into an already bloated cast, which slows the development of established characters to a crawl. The new characters are either redundant, pointless, or just plain awful. The main story is poorly developed, with characters making absurdly stupid decisions in order to drive the nonsensical plot forward.

It was originally a flawed game with a lot of potential, but now it's just a bad game with a handful of sexy scenes scattered about.

I the game the models I have never seen besides your bff who can you chose which gende she have (female or transgender) that idea i thought is damn hot and cool. The story, the text and of course the models are gorgeous and makes so much fun to play this game, I can only give 5 stars so far and can only say so far dl the game guys and try it out.
Can´t wait for an update but the good part is that I dont reach the end of this version so far.

++ Good renders quality and great pool of girls to get close with
+ Animations
+ Story
+ Harem possibility with no downsides?
- No sound (really minor minus)

Really good experience so far. Story is interesting, girls are lovable, lewd content is plenty. What else to wish for really?

In need of a positive story, different kind/type of girls, beautifully made models and an active creator? Search no further.

Models, 10/10. Not only the quality, but also the different types and how the MC talks with them. It feels natural. I have to go back, but not many animations atm. Mostly, there are high quality pictures. Not to mention, none of them are ripped from somewhere. Or not that I know of

Story, at the moment of writing this, it is not really original. Or not really out of the box. I really like it, because the mc is a bad ass pussy (he calls himself a pussy, because he cares about people). And the girls love him for it. Maybe something will happen, but at the moment it is a really well written feel good, you in the spotlight kind of story. Ever wanted to be adored because you are really good at something, try this game.

Fetishes, this game is pretty straight forward. Lots of different models. I bet all sex related positions will be tried. Plus you can choose if your close friend will be a trans or not. It is an option! It isnt forced onto you by the creator. I choose to make her/him a trans. Story wise, I really like it so far.

Lastly, this is not a shitty grindy sandbox game. Your skills are maxed from the start.

Holy shit! How did I miss on this game?! Not letting it get out of my sight now that's for sure!

The gals are really cute and it was a pleasant surprise to see the option for T content if one wishes it so. Visually the only minor nitpick I have is that the protagonist is walking around with Eiffel tower in his pants!

The story is nice and moving at a good pace, good balance with teasing and the steamy scenes.
The only fear I have with a harem story is that some characters may be less developed or have less screentime but so far so good.

Overall you can't go wrong with this . It is a pleasant game that it won't waste your time!

Also dev is not a mute and keeps the patrons & fans updated which certainly helped my decision to support him.

This has rapidly become one of my favorite games on the site, great writing good characters, fantastic models, nice animation and a very intriguing story. I really do not have a single bad thing to say about this game, I look forward to every singe update that is put out.

Ohoho! What a game! I like the characters and the story, the fact that I can choose which person to engage with, and, even the fact that I can put the second name. Great quality and a great start. That's how you present a game! And, of course, the fact that it's a harem might be making it even better! Great job man! Keep it up!

ONE OF THE BEST ADULT GAME INDEED
The Story is amazing sofar!
love the girls! They're Beautiful and unique!
Each of them has their one beauty!
The Render Is Amazing!
The Animation too!
although
The sex scene can maybe more longer,and has more style to choose
and maybe add some music background and sex background voice/music
otherwise,what's the preference setting for? hehe

This game is amazing. Great renders, fun story, lots of hot women to choose from, something for everyone. Especially great for lovers of harem type stories. Really enjoy the trans option too. Can't wait to see where each update takes it. One of the best adult games I've played.

This has become one of my all time favorite VN's! Writing/story is excellent! Updates are VERY Regular, no need to wait 2-6 months for new content! Models are not box stock DAZ which I LOVE! All around it has been a PLEASURE to play this VN.
Pro's:
Models, STORY/WRITING, Animations!
Con's:
Not sure if this is even a con anymore as it fits in the story and is writen well but the MC's dick is HUGE LOL. DEV Seems to have nerfed it a little which IMO fits better. It's still large but not OVERLY EXCESSIVE as in the beginning.
Choices seem to have little to no consequences as of now. May change in the future?

BAILEY and NATALIE are BAE!

This game is top-notch. Good story, lots of choices, doesn't force/shy away from LGBT, and the character models vary but are all hot. Definitely one of my favorite games on here, and I hope we meet the sister and she joins in the action, and the bio mom as well (they were both super hot and even if the mom aged it seems the creator also added the old nurse in, not my style but the mom definitely aged well).

The render quality is below mediocre, the characters look like they came straight from a nightmare, their morphs are so over the top that it completely deforms their faces when any pose is added, which is a beginner mistake...a beginner making $4k a month.
I'd be surprised if the Dev worked in Daz, more than 2 weeks before the release of this game.

The writing...what writing ?!

There's nothing different being done in this game that a myriad of other exact same shit quality games aren't doing already yet this one is successful for some reason.
Just terrible all around.

Great game. From the very start I thought that the girls were very cute, but the detail put in to even the facial expressions blows it out of the park. And the story is very well written and flows nicely. The only real criticism I have is that the transgender model for shauna seems like an after thought. the dick looks like it was copied and pasted from a different model just to get it on there.

[Based on day 3 release]

Wow. You can see that some developers get it and some don't on how to deliver a fap game. This game has attractive renders, animations are good and varied. Not the best on the sight but clearly good and varied.

Foster mom (shown on the banner) actually looks old enough to be a mom. The MC isn't a complete and utter horror of a human being which is nice. The story is believable, and engaging enough that I'll be returning to this game monthly. You meet different characters organically to the story and each character's relationship to you progresses differently so you are at different stages of a relationship with different people. This makes the game feel less gamey with regards to how relationships advance.

This game is still "early days" but there is plenty of sex and i don't feel the dev was holding off and rationing a handjob here with a blowjob at the next "phase" either.

This is very much a visual novel game but that is it's strength not a weakness as a fab game. And as i stated above there is plenty of sex content and i mean actual sex.

This is worth the download and worth your time returning to the game monthly.

Looks like this is becomming my favourite game cause of the cute behavior and opennes of the woman characters and not degenerated religious property like false love.
Love is freedom not conditional thing - I love you when you will do as I want and when you don't then I don't love you anymore because I can not own you... and our society takes it for normal behavior...
Anyway times are changing and ppl are waking up. We should do whatever feels right not listen to others or religious nonsense.
+ Cute dialogues and girls
+ Great renders

- Don't like freckles

suggestion:
Some of the sex animations could be with more field of view (better to see whole ass than just half of it)
Also an angle from 1st person perspective for more immersion would help

Otherwise great work