VN - Ren'Py - WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 F] [Braindrop]

What can I say.

This game has good renders, and a kernel of an interesting idea. Parts of the cast had the potential to be interesting. I did enjoy the first day or two of game time.

But oh boy, I thought I had seen Gary Stu characters before, the main character of this one is the superman of Gary Stu's. The storytelling in this game is awful, mainly because your choices don't matter, much of the dialogue between primary characters is 'hey you're awesome'

I first guessed something was up when the character moved 3 times in 2 days. (From home to special college house, then from special college house to even more special college house).

The characters are not developed, we keep being told the MC is awesome, but he doesn't do anything awesome. I end up getting bored, and then clickers cramp from skipping so much dialogue.

So I can only rate this game as poor. Good Renders and ok animations do not save it for me.

WVM is divisive, for good reason: (1) as visual porn, it is very good, but (2) as a VN it leaves a great deal to be desired.

Most people seem to privilege (1) over (2) -- which is fine. This is prime fap material. Gratification is pretty instant, and the Dev provides regular, high quality updates. His work ethic is commendable.

The trouble is -- as many, many others have observed -- the plot is absurd. The MC has Wilt Chamberlain-style animal magnetism/attractiveness multiplied by three orders of magnitude. Every female in this game from 18-70 wants to strip naked and instantly jump him. That's believable if you are 12 and if your primary insight into feminine nature is via porn... but not among those with even passing experience of human females on planet Earth.

Let me be clear: I am not insisting on hyper realism. This scenario might be more believable if the MC were an incubus, or in a sci-fi setting. Nor am I suggesting that polyamourous relationships are impossible or making some dumb value judgment about them. They are possible, and can be cool in games. I am just suggesting that college coeds on our planet do not behave like the women in this game.

I also don't want to sound too harsh. As visual porn, there is some good stuff here. As someone with a mild impregnation fetish, I like that theme, too.

But... I guess my point is that the game is not _erotic_ -- there's no build, no tension, and no risk.

Take _Lexi_, for example, as an illuminating contrast: that game also features an MC who is a total Alpha. He can beat the crap out of virtually anyone and has a giant dick! But he also has problems, and feelings, and flaws/vulnerabilities -- and the women in that game do too. And... they behave like more or less believable women, even in the presence of Mr. Alpha.

So... horses for courses. The dev has produced a great visual fapfest. He works hard, and has strong skills. But the women in this game don't work... or at least, they don't work for me.

Amazing fucking game (pun intended) honestly after playing 75-100 of the games here I can say most games have a strong point & several weak points but not this gem. The renders are on point & they all feel Very HQ/HD. The writing is pretty dam good even tho i kinda hate sports, so even tho I'm just a rando dude commenting here that's a well earned compliment from me lol.



Jamie & shauna are both such sweethearts but daaaam Jamie a closet succubus & shauna tryin' to catch up but tbh how those 2 get me everytime isnt how hot they are (cheesyness incoming) but how close they've grown, dialogue does a great job of conveying that they Do indeed love each other also & it melts my fucking heart lol.
physical character design is awesome, never thought in a game with so many girls that they could all actually be unique so kudos there as well. Pretty much the same personality wise, again great job. I also appreciate so far how not every girl wants to or follows thru with mounting him withing 24 hours of meeting him & also how they dont lose what makes them uniques after a good dicking.

The speed at which MC hooks up with these individual ladies feels about as natural as I can imagine a game can make it regarding dialogue & choices not necessarily frequency/ ease & the hookups (mostly) feel very organic. The story has enough original-ish twists to keep it from falling into the generic category. Amazing job all around thus far my dude!! Keep up the amazing work & this game has earned a spot in my top 5 if not higher by the end, definitely patreon support worthy !

My usual disclaimers when writing reviews on here are that A. I am here for the "plot" not the plot and B. I generally dislike visual novels. So take both of those into consideration for my review when thinking about this game.

Despite generally high ratings I think a lot of recent reviews have said most of what I'd want to say about WVM, but I'll quickly summarise them here in a pros/cons list before adding my own thoughts:

Pros

• Great visuals - animations are smooth and renders are (broadly) pretty top tier.
• Sex scene quality - they're regular (again, broadly) and fun and the highlight of the whole thing.

Mehs

• Gary Stu protagonist - the MC is an absolutely perfect specimen. He's got the best cock in the world, he's smart, refined, humble, has an unlimited source of money and charisma and is a philosophical genius who can make women fall in love with him as fast as fall onto his dick. Some people have listed this as a negative and some a positive. For me its a heavy positive (in theory) because, as stated, I'm here for the fucking, so if I can self-insert on someone basically perfect then that's just gravy. But I totally get that others are really turned off by this.

Cons

• Gary Stu protagonist - look, I know what I just said, but fucking hell it's SO over the top in this that even I was a bit thrown out of the experience.
• Cringey and unbelievable dialogue - I think probably the biggest detractor of the game as a whole.
• Plot is equally ridiculous and nonsensical
• VERY limited interaction and choice (worst sort of VN) which basically boils down to "do you want to see a sex scene for this girl?"

I think the single biggest issue with WVM is that Braindrop seems to not really know what he's making...

What WVM obviously is, is a carefree harem romp in which you (the perfect guy) gets to go to college, collect a harem of gorgeous babes, knock them all up and fuck them wherever you want. There's a bit of drama here and there, but not much more than spice on top of your perfect world... Even here it's not a top-tier harem game because the girls are basically dolls with no purpose outside of pleasing you, but it's harmless and good fun and smutty and sexy. 3.5/5 stars.

What he seems to THINK he's making is a genuinely realistic philosophical treatise on how to be an amazing human and have a polyamorous relationship. This is probably why every girl has to have a 20 minute segment explaining why it's perfectly reasonable, rational and realistic that she is happy to be just one girl in your harem and also won't see anyone else and also WANTS you to fuck other women. These women also have to spend a separate 20 minutes explaining why you're just so amazing and wonderful and how there's nobody else like you (to the point of being ridiculous and jarring). It's simply not realistic. Stop trying to pretend it is.

This happens so regularly that by day 3 I was done with the dialogue and started skipping my way through it. I knew I wasn't missing anything other than more unnecessary compliments (and, worse, the sex scenes actually started becoming less frequent).

Plus, as I've mentioned, one of the big reasons that the game could NEVER function as a realistic relationship sim is because literally all of the girls have no purpose other than existing your pleasure. They have no interests or desires except to remind you that you're a perfect specimen and father of their babies.

It's honestly a damn shame because the first hour was genuinely quite good fun, but then it just went off the rails and started taking itself way too seriously.

• Renders 8/10 - Author is a talented artist that's for sure.
• Plot 0/10 - Just forget, it not exists. Think about this game as of serie of short porn stories. There're only two types of questions: "Do you agree to fuck this doll girl?" and "Right now?" (optional).
• Writing 0/10 - 12yo babbling, no excuses.
• Sex scenes 4/10 - Very basic

Summary: author is a good artist, but a failure as a scenarist.

[0.6.5]

There should be a genre tag for "Mary Sue". This game is one of the best games in that genre. The MC just goes around being awesome, being told how awesome he is, and having women fall on his huge dick because he is so awesome. This isn't a game for realism, hard choices, or pesky things like that. Take it for what it is and it can be fun.

Im following the game a good time now .
i feel that in the past few months the game took a very wrong turn, somewhere.........................................
In the first 3 or 4 (game) days was a definite 5 star game.
And then something reeeeeally strange happent !
It seems that, from that point on, the dialogs are made from a 12 years old child..................................
No depth at all in the dialogs, the plot is not excistent anymore and all i can guess is that the dev whille his trying his best to have frequent updates he forgot to put the most important ingredients in the story : Complexity and Purpose.
i dont belive in quantity over quality.

As a reader i really prefer to wait for 2 even 3 weeks to have a good reading experience instead of an update every week that makes no sence at all .....!!!
I wont go in detailes , theres no need of that.

I will just put my faith on the Developer to take another one turn , in the right direction that time , that im prety sure that he can !!!

(If so ill change my rating review)

First things first - this game already comes with a ton of content, not only when it comes to dialogue and story, but many characters to choose from as well. If you are looking for a very smut-heavy game, in which the action comes to you easily, this will certainly be your thing. There is a lot of action, as the game plays like a true sexual fever dream of what has to be a very, very tired man. Dialogue can sometimes get a bit repetitive and the impact of choices can sometimes feel a little thin. The renders are great as well, although some faces feel a bit off to me.

In any case, worth picking up and following.

I gave the game a try after reading a lot of positive reviews and it's definitely not for me.

- The story is very "vanilla" and average. The protagonist is written to be the perfect man that could do not wrong, I guess it's okay if you love to self-insert in these adult games.

- Some of the interactions between characters were weird and more appropriate for a high school setting than college.

- The main girls are somewhat weird looking.

- The option to have a trans character or not shouldn't even be there since it's obvious it is intended to pick the trans option, otherwise the narrative becomes nonsensical.

- The sex scenes and renders are okay, but nothing special.

Overall I found it to be an underwhelming experience.

Overall the game was good but now it's bad and getting worse, it is well made(zero errors and no lag) with amazing art quality both in charaters and locations(which there are lots of for both) but the interesting and unique story is destroyed by political messages and MC being the perfect person(noone is like that) the good amount of choices are getting undone as the game "takes over" when MC interacts with characters later in the game (there are some girls MC should just hate but it wont let you, everyone gets forgiven).


The last update destroyed alot of the relationship "choices" the MC had with the girls making all of them friends, seriously if MC was any more of a "white knight" it would bilnd people to look at him.

After the last update there is no way to avoid the obvious political adgenda in the game(which im not legally allowed to mention) which is dragging down the game, its porn, i dont want to be thinking about political adgendas while playing so for me i'm out.

- Hi, babe.
- Oh hello, babe.
- Where have you been, babe?
- I was just answering the door, babe.
- I've missed you, babe.
- I haven't seen you for like 2 minutes, babe...
*Jamie looks at MC with creepy eyes*
- ... and obviously I've missed you, too, babe.
- So, who was that, babe?
- Just a mailman, babe.
- Is she a good woman? Did you have sex with her and impregnate her? (babe)
- Yes, I did, babe, I love you so much, Jamie, you're so cool.
- Oh, I love you too, babe.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!

Negatives:
- I hate forced relationships in games (there should be a tag for it) and I just can't stand Jamie which leads to me not enjoying half of the game, because half of the game is about babe-ing and huging Jamie.
- Dialogues are so awkward that I feel like watching The Office, MC is just perfect and he talks in a way that no normal people talk, like he's in the middle of philosophical debate
- some girls
- plot is just so stupid I can't even...

Positives:
- a lot of content
- frequent updates
- renders quality
- a lot of girls
- Harper and Azel

In general, this is not a bad game (hence the high ratings, obviously), I just can't stand few things and if you do not care about these things - you may enjoy it a lot. I may adjust my rating in the future, depending on where the story goes.

[v.0.6.4]

This is definitely one of my favorites on here.

Story feels alive, and renders & animations are greatly crafted!

Weekly updates, might not be that much in them, but its definitely alot more than you might see elsewhere!

All in all, you should give this game a go! And consider supporting this man on Patreon! He deserves it!

I was really expecting more when played this because it so highly rated. I was excited going into since there's so few games with these kind of rating exist so it should be good. Boy was I wrong.

One of my major frustrations was the very weird close-up framing of every NPCs face. It's like 90% of the game is just staring at a face cut off at the forehead. It just becomes uncomfortable after a bit.

The other major gripe is the super basic sex scenes just aren't worth it. There's plenty of them with all the characters but it feels so half hearted.

Ultimately there's some decent looking NPCs we've seen 100 times before but I just ended up feeling disappointed. None of it felt hot or sexy. None of the choices really matter other than the first one with Shauna.

the story is pretty good, the characters and the dialogues feel natural most of the time and it keeps you coming for the next update, pretty good job on dev/s for keeping the story interesting and fun and relatable at the same time

i can't say i played out every choice so far, but from my experience, with the choices i made in the game, it feels like they have more moral consequences, more of an internal questioning on protagonist's part, as far as i can tell the others are not really affected by them, again, haven't tried out all the choices so far, so i might be mistaken, but i'm not really complaining about that, it kinda connects you to the character

overall, i think the game deserves 5 stars, i really hope the good work will continue and the dev/s will continue to build up and create an even grater story for us

Pros

• Graphics are good
• Plenty of sex scenes

Cons

• Sex scenes are very basic
• No music
• 2 main girls are weird looking
• Story is so over the top with how unbelievable the MC is. All girls just want to fuck him. His dick is so big it looks unnatural, girls complain about being unable to walk after sex. Theres a scene where Shauna is sucking his dick and she looks like a snake trying to swallow its prey.

Heard that the game was really good, was overall dissapointed.

Given all the reviews I was honestly expecting more. Instead my take away, after progressing to the point that i was just super un-charactically spam skipping though huge amounts of cringy dialog just to get to the next sex scene (can't even remember the last time i did that and I play at least 2-3 of these games/updates weekly), was that this was the most overrated "trending" game on this site atm.

None of which is to say the game doesn't have some good points going for it. I'd rate the girls as above average, with plenty of different body types to satisfy different preferences. healthy amount of fappable content already. Animations aren't great, but they are good enough to serve it's purpose speaking as somebody who tends to view their inclusion as borderline necessary.

The god dang dialog and "perfect MC" story setting though....just a too drawn out too often mood killer for me. I mean I get it. Everybody loves <insert name here>.To the point that is all every NPC wants to keep constantly reassuring you for what ends up seeming like an endless amount of clicking through completely pointless fluff dialog between every dang sex progression scene. The mother's being the worst of the bunch....I mean sweet jesus.

For some that may be their cup of tea. For me..the sheer overdone manner of it all was just way too dumb and cheesy. 2 stars for the girls alone though.

Pros: The females are attractive, the story is a bit different and a nice change from the norm.
- Graphics are good to above average.
- The male protagonist doesn't look like a 12-year-old.
- English comp is above average without a lot of errors.

Cons: Pace is frenetic. A week's worth of activities crammed into 24 hours.
- Verbose. Some arguments/discussions are rehashed way too many times. - Although the location is a college, the tone and language of the characters is stuck in early HS (ie, immature and insecure) and wears thin after a while.

Bottom line: Potential was there for something a bit different from the norm, but there's no tension and choices have little to no consequence.

The story definitely could be real according how the colleges and Universities react with sports (the money are a lot ) happy story personally I am fed up with real life problems so I dislike dramas also in games. The renders are very good and some details attract the lights on them. Nice beautiful girls and especially lovely Shauna in either way you play her. The total the game runs smooth and the Dev has done amazing job especially considering rumors that he hasn't a team behind him ...
1. As for the score 4/5 I am waiting the end of the game to change this

very good game, story is fun.. images are very good quality. look forward to where it goes, my only fear is everything has happens maybe a lot quicker than i would of liked, maybe it could of been drawn out a bit longer or made to be more challenging but either way i liked it and will be keeping an eye on this one.

I'll make it short.
If your idea of a perfect adult VN is to play a godlike MC who can do everything and who is loved by everyone (especially all women), then you will love this game.
If the thought of playing such a Gary Sue (or whatever the male version of a Mary Sue is) bores you, then you should probably stay away.

The game in general (writing, animations, images etc.) is pretty average and nothing special imo, but like I said, it all depends on your personal taste regarding the MC.