RPGM Onhold Complete [Yasagure Kitsuenjo] Absolvement of Viscaria (Demo Version)

[Longhairlover010]

Forget about this game, dev's partner isn't in good condition to continue and they will focus on a smaller game instead.

 

[MeiQer]

I made it for shitposting, and it ended up coming true...

Apparently in addition to those ubiquitous doujin dev health issues, it's seems the writer/dev half of the circle is feeling pressured for taking so long (Hehe, how delicate).
... And Viscaria itself has hit the limit on how many events can be crammed into RPG Maker MV. Ouch. Still... you didn't think of that when the demo took 380 of the 999 event listings?

MeiQer I really appreciated your translation; sure, some H-scenes were interminable, but that's the dev's fault, not yours. You showed great imagination in the naming of the various brands, and man, «put the pry in privacy» is really a stroke of genius!

With some proofreading/copy editing, it wouldn't be a stretch to adopt your translation when the official version comes out.

Thanks!

Ah, I'm moved! Yeah, the brands, enduring memories, and taunts uncermoniously heaped on Liedna and her master are some of the most enjoyable parts to mull on how to word.
Although if you asked me at any other time, I'd say I wish nothing but the best for both girls. I'm kind. Gentle.
And good catch on the endless shop loop thing, probably a testing feature that got left in? I'll toggle it out whenever I go back for another proofread pass.



Geez, I guess I should update the thread to "Hiatus".
It's not totally hopeless, however, their next "short" "Kubel-sized" game will most certainly exist in the same universe, and Manuri himself will draft a blog post in May to explain things going forward.

Spoiler: The artist provided some drafts of the next heroine to ease the sting a bit.

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Another blonde this time, but a knight instead of a magician.

Spoiler: I'll hold faith Yasagure Kitsuenjo, together, can paint us a portrait of a dignified, charming lady knight with her own share of critical flaws!

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[SuperMaxo]

And good catch on the endless shop loop thing, probably a testing feature that got left in? I'll toggle it out whenever I go back for another proofread pass.

I actually considered doing some proofreading to help you out (I proofread for a living in French, but the attention to details is transferable from one language to another), but I was too engrossed in the story!

When I decide to replay/reread this VN-like intro, I'll pester you with screenshots flagging typos...

One thing I do remember, though, is that quite a few of the mistakes were actually misplaced words, like [I'm making up an example here] «what actual the f*ck» instead of «what the actual f*ck», so it made me think that they were simply a sign of you being too tired when you wrote those sentences.

That being said, they might be difficult to catch for you, as your brain, knowing all this by heart at this point, will just read the sentences and automatically/unconsciously replace the words in the correct order...

 

[johnza]

Atleast i hope they should release it as part 1 or something, I am a bit disappointed as a fan who support their ci-en for along time just to see how the game progress, New girl looks delicious though.

 

[Iltina]

I actually considered doing some proofreading to help you out (I proofread for a living in French, but the attention to details is transferable from one language to another), but I was too engrossed in the story!

When I decide to replay/reread this VN-like intro, I'll pester you with screenshots flagging typos...

One thing I do remember, though, is that quite a few of the mistakes were actually misplaced words, like [I'm making up an example here] «what actual the f*ck» instead of «what the actual f*ck», so it made me think that they were simply a sign of you being too tired when you wrote those sentences.

That being said, they might be difficult to catch for you, as your brain, knowing all this by heart at this point, will just read the sentences and automatically/unconsciously replace the words in the correct order...

Side question, but how much does proofreading net you salary-wise? Is that a full-time commitment, side hustle, etc.?

 

[SuperMaxo]

Side question, but how much does proofreading net you salary-wise? Is that a full-time commitment, side hustle, etc.?

Freelancing gig. I charge 40 bucks (Canadian, cause I live in Canada) per hour.
I also take copy-editing and translating gigs

 

[GinOokami]

I was curious about the progress of the game and I found out the devs are moving on to another game. I guess this was never meant to be a finished game. Well, can't wait for the blog post.

 

[kootas]

Tactical dot

 

[abgazil]

Atleast i hope they should release it as part 1 or something, I am a bit disappointed as a fan who support their ci-en for along time just to see how the game progress, New girl looks delicious though.

Do you know if they plan to eventually return to complete this game?

 

[johnza]

Do you know if they plan to eventually return to complete this game?

They said something like there is no way for them to stop making the game looking at how effort and fund that they putting in it, As their understand how fans who waiting feel, So they cant say when the game gonna finished.

 

[slim-kr]

Wow that's disappointing...

 

[sfoMMA85]

They said something like there is no way for them to stop making the game looking at how effort and fund that they putting in it, As their understand how fans who waiting feel, So they cant say when the game gonna finished.

And if it finishes in 5 years (which would be aa long wait but well) I still hope this game finishes one day. Thats how good the set up and the demo was. Wishing all the luck to the dev and keeping my fingers crossed.

 

[Ion.TemUS]

Yes those games are very good, but all of these excuses. Like cmon, if the game needs more than the 999 events then make 2 games out of it. Having the first half of the game would already be amazing. Ik the demo has a lot of content, but still.

It's so frustrating to see them stop within the year they wanted to possibly release and then just start a new game. that new game is gonna take 2-3 years to develop as well. So basically dev has not released a game for how many years then? 8? 10?
That is insane for an RPG maker release. And the other game will also take more time to do, so once they release that one it will have been a decade or more of a wait.

Dont get me wrong, new MC looks good. But there IS SO MUCH CONTENT for that second game. Why stop now?

 

[LeoShowers]

Insane they stopped development. The demo makes it seem like the game is 80% done. They have the core concept, a great artist and the core gameplay loop down.

All that's left is to grind out the scenes, essentially.

 

[Hanjo38]

Waiting complete game and english to

 

[rangabang]

Waiting complete game and english to

read the thread

 

[Diegoz]

thank you

 

[Dowfra]

Mann, this was lookin good but, oh well... guess we gotta wait till it fully released by whoever knows

 

[Irozuku]

are there new informations about this game? , i checked author X account, it seems that he decides to develop a new one? I dont know exactly because i dont understand japanese

 

[LeoShowers]

are there new informations about this game? , i checked author X account, it seems that he decides to develop a new one? I dont know exactly because i dont understand japanese

Yes. Basically he burned out on making this game, so he's going to make a shorter/more basic game before finishing this one (if indeed it does get finished...).