HTML - Abandoned - Young Adult [v0.1] [FoolCircle]

The game itself is decent enough, no major problems. However it doesn't have a save function, why? Honestly no matter how many games you have developed it is inexcusable to not have some sort of save function. I can't possibly imagine what would lead someone to think it is perfectly okay to release a game without one, especially an indie dev with no time constraints.

Version Reviewed: v0.1

Story: Stop me if you have heard this one before. A slacker layabout moves back in with his sister and mother and decides to fuck them both. As part of this process he gets his mom drunk, horns in on his sister's porn streams, and does chores around the house to prove that he is a manly man.

Yeah, the story wins no points for originality. On the other hand it isn't pretentious and doesn't make you grind forever to unlock the scenes. For a first release this feels like it could be a complete game. Not a long epic, but a nice little capsule game that does everything other games need many years and dozens of releases to accomplish.

Gameplay: It's a sandbox but there aren't very many locations. There is a money grind and a stat grind but you can just go to the gym for a few days and work at your computer a few days when necessary. The HTML based engine seems to work quite well. A quick note: The save system is works just fine even though the box say "coming soon".

At this point I'm not sure what the dev would add in a version 2. Some night creeping events? Personally I wouldn't mind if he just marked this one complete and used the lessons learned on a new project with a fresh and exciting premise. There is a real chance that added content would only increase the grind and make the game worse.

Graphics: As you might guess from the 50MB download there aren't a lot of graphics in there, and what is in there are small graphics and short movies. As is typical with a real porn game the models aren't always consistent which you can tell even though he usually cuts off their heads.

Conclusion: A fine first effort. FoolCircle has chosen wisely to limit the scope of his first project. Too many first time devs try starting off with some Magnum Opus and end up completely bogged down in the game, suffering from all of the mistakes they made starting out and often with too much pride to realize that they were in way over their head.

for version 0.1
nice interface.
there is no fixed actress for the role of sister or mother.
dev wrote that this is his first game.
so not bad.
will watch because it's kind of a fat nod to our old favorite game genre - corruption-family-incest etc.

I will join the user's quote below (Doombringer)
dev need the plot-route "whore out your family" route or something!)

p.s. I saw part of Brandi Love's body. I think a good choice for the role of mother

Not a good game. There is not any real decision making that a sandbox game should have. Basically you spend time trying to find the only route that you can take then clicking on things over and over to get there. There is not really much real choices to make. And then when you get there it's just *here is the sex scene*. Instead it should have better building and scenes that lead up to having sex with a character.

The interface is a bit confusing and doesn't look good. The story isn't existent and the sex scenes are poor.

Play something else.

Promising, sleek clean ui, story is a bit fast but nice.
A Build up would be nice..more teasing, stripping, playing.
Differend routes would be also nice, blackmail, love or whore out your Family. Make a overall Goal, Maybe a debt.

Videos need more cumshot variations/decisions imho. But overall it is nice.
Keep up.