Ren'Py - Your Place - Chapter 2 [v0.12] [ColeWallace92]

Version Rated: v0.03
Solid start. Can't wait to see where this goes. I'll echo some other comments and say I wasn't sure if the Alpha/Beta stats did anything yet. Spelling mistakes, but who is perfect. Also has a good balance of text to action. A few wordy sections but no real "sins".

This game has huge potential but just falls short for me but that doesn't mean this game is bad in any way if it just fixes these problems this could easily become one of my favorite games on this website

First let's start of with the graphics they aren't bad but also aren't anything special but they get the job done so the graphics are good

Now let's talk about the story the story is typical nothing special but i love these kinda story's so for me that's not a problem it's about a world where female's and futa's are dominant over men but they aren't overly mean just because they are dominant over men and our mc and i love that so many of these female domination futa games are just overly mean dark and fucked up towards male character and the mc and basically force the mc to like futa's even though they don't like them in the beginning or ever and that's a big turn off for me personally well in this game the mc likes futa's from the beginning if you want the futa content because you can skip the futa content entirely if you don't actually like futa's which is awesome so big plus for the story for that

Now let's talk about the characters and i'm happy to say they are pretty good let's talk about the sisters of the mc first since i love them the most you have two sisters one female and one futa the female is the younger sister and is more meek and kind also seems to like being dominated unlike the other sister the futa while she isn't mean at all and actually loves our mc and would protect him and her sister at all costs atleast that's the vibe i get from her she is obviously more dominant towards our mc in more subtle ways like dropping the fork and you picking it up for her and other subtle ways i won't spoil she is my favorite since i am a huge futa on male fan and it's my number 1 fetish other girls and futa's are also great but i won't spoil that let's just say they all have personalities and depth to them that will probably get more fleshed out in the future

Now let's talk about the most important thing in a porn game the sex and sadly this is where the game disappoints me the most the build up is great and it takes a while for the first sex scene which is great because buildup is probably the most important thing about sex scenes learn to know the characters before having sex with them so many games do this poorly or just don't have buildup at all and it more often than not ruins the game for me well this game does that great but where it falls flat is in the sex scenes themselves they are just way to short just when i was like yes the first sex scene it was over in less than 30 seconds and maybe 3 images and no cumshot which there obviously supposed to be one which was a major disappointment it was over before i could get into it and most sex scenes are like that which is just soul crushing because the rest of the game is so good yet the sex scenes are so short and so underwhelming it's almost like the sex scenes where an afterthought atleast that's how it feels to me so after playing for about 30 minutes maybe more i was basically blue balled which honestly destroyed the game for me and after a couple more sex scenes where the same just way to short and underwelming i just stopped playing the game so yeah maybe the sex scenes get better and longer later on i don't know but i don't wanna get excited because of the great writing and hot buildup and get blue balled again because of underwhelming sex scenes again so i don't know if i'll play this game again i'll probably check back later when it has had a few more updates or maybe i won't

So in conclusion this game has amazing potential to be one of the best female domination futa games on this website with great characters great writing good buildup to sex scenes and character depth but the underwhelming and short sex scenes ruin this game for me and that breaks my heart because i genuinely want this game to be amazing i crave for these female domination futa games so much there aren't nearly enough games like this on this website and this has the potential to be one of the best i really hope i'm wrong and that the game will improve and get better over time but until then i won't play it again

FINALLY a visual novel that deals with futa on male in 3D!
It's probably the only one on the internet...

It's a shame I can't support financially the developer because this game has a REALLY huge potential. The futa on male genre is very little represented on the internet and this VN can seriously become THE 3D game of the genre.

Of course the game is still in its infancy and there are still a few problems; I noticed quite a few grammar/spelling errors for example, and more generally there are a few moments where the scenery or the background are downright ugly.

But these slight flaws that can be easily corrected are easily counterbalanced by the character models that are very hot and the scenes, although quite few (we are only at the beginning of the game) were for me really enjoyable.

In short, being a huge fan of the futanari genre ( especially futa on male ) I confess I never had such a boner with a game on F95 haha. This visual novel fulfills for the moment my craziest fantasies ( for example the futa colleague, I've always dreamed of it !! lol ) and will go much further. I love the feeling of submission, the author of this visual novel has completely understood how to manage this kink.
Another huge positive point is that the game has a story and is not at all a simple stupid VN with no scenario to jerk off like there are plenty of them on this site.

Honestly the game as it stands doesn't deserve more than 4/5, but I give it 5 stars anyway to encourage the developer. For once we futa x male fans are represented, there's no way we can't support this gem in the making.

First, the model work is actually good looking. Some creative choices aside there's a lot of good looking qualities here. Unfortunately there's a lot to be desired for navigation and the fact that choices mean nothing. Navigation feels pointless when 90% of the time the MC has no choice but to go to the next location. So remove the middleman and just got to the next scene. We shouldn't have to click a button in the elevator or to take a break, shower, eat, etc. Next the stat system feels meaningless when it comes to choices. Alpha, beta, etc. serve no purpose other than creating a number system to unlock dialog which should already unlock based on relationship statuses and feel more organic to how you respond in conversation. Additionally they make no difference in how your character reacts to specific situations. This would be fine if it were a simple click to the next scene VN, but the added implication of these stats should have greater impact on the story. They simply don't. It's like playing a rail shooter and when asked if you want to go right or left, you choose left but it goes right regardless because left was never an actual option. And while you may be saying. "the stats will come into play later with the story." I ask, how is your character more of an alpha in stats when he's literally kissing his boss' feet? This should have been a scene with multiple outcomes based on how your character has been acting to begin with. A moment to turn the tables on a previously dominating character. Why aren't their choices to piss this person off entirely as an option? Look, I get it. It's limited to the paths the dev has predetermined, but if that's the case then it shouldn't have treats attributed to being character defining as a main mechanic.

My suggestion, change the names of the Alpha and Beta or have stats be relationship specific. Like having the MC have complete different set of stats for each relationship, i.e. being more submissive to his boss vs being more dominate with his sisters, etc. This would give more validity to those treats and force the player/reader to really think of how to reply with each relationship the MC establishes. For example: let's say the only way to get through to the boss is by being more submissive to start with and if you act too much of an Alpha she cuts you off and that story arch gets locked off. There are plenty of VNs that accomplish this exact same thing simply with dialog choices leading to specific events, but it seems pretty evident that a more dynamic story isn't the goal of this VN so I'm out for this one.

it's what i really like . that is femdom area with women and shemales with option to choose how to react. one of my favorites. please go on . i am so eager to play it.........................................

Very good game! Models look amazing, love that it has both futa and non-futa content. Characterization is clear, mechanics such alpha/beta are clear as well. The world building has some actual thought to it too, something you don't see that often in porn games! I'm really looking forward to more!

It is an amazing game. I like femdom games, and this is one of the best so far.

In my opinion the best in this game that your character could be submissive but an intelligent, helpful and a valuable boy for a dominant woman. In contrast many femdom games you could be only an useless idiot freak.

Thought this was a great beginning for the game.Was kind of nice to see an alternate contemporary world close to our own where futa or trans persons are an accepted part of society and conversation.Even funnier when your sister's friend said she hated a futa teacher in school because boys in the class always got higher grades than the girls on their exams..The writing was good and game flowed well from scene to scene.The main point system for answers/scenes was an alpha or beta response.Points also for relationships but these are not shown in the phone stats.Not crazy about seeing agility and other stats listed inside phone..not yet in game,(no need for them imo).Music and graphics were nice giving some ambience to scenes. Saska was a nice surprise,looking forward to spending more time with her in the future. Good luck and much success with your game.

Great game, love the shemale content, there's a ton of teasing without payoff but that is to be expected since it is very early. To be fir it already seems to have a lot interesting moments. I hope this game keeps being developed and gets more content.

Great potential to the story. Good rendering. I am not sure if there is going to be a harem or not. If there is no harem or if it is a surprise, please include a warning so the player may choose a path/ love interest of their liking.
Great work and all the best for the development of the game.

One of the best starts of the game. Great characters and options to play through. This game will be a huge success if it will have regular large updates.
Great Story, Overall game feels like a VN and it is great

Very nice story and design!
It doesnt feel generic and very atmospheric as much as immersive.
Sadly no real sex scenes when following the beta path but also expectable
Happy to see more coming soon!

Lovely game, has a lot of potential and it's easy to place. Usually games with different routes are annoying but for this game it's pretty easy to play through everything.
Love the futas as well.
Looking forward to more updates