Ren'Py Zero to Hero [v0.1 RE Part 1] [c0mh1x]

[c0mh1x]

Huh...interesting to know people wanted the ginger mc and family removed due to "not being able to relate", I would have guessed it would have been more because he was built like a soy loser than because of hair color, especially since him having red hair meant the family had it as well, the girls looked better as red heads though they still look good in their new version.

Anyway the Art style automatically gives this a lot of potential, but I hope after all these changes it means the dev is finally happy with it and will look to make progress with the VN, I've seen more than a fair amount get caught in rework death spirals until the dev eventually gives up, really hope that isn't the case here, but I'll probably give it a few more updates before trying.

Good luck to the dev.

Thanks for your feedback! Most importantly, this new story is more solid. This time, he's with his REAL family, which was an important point to fix. And he's already well established in his town. This allowed me to recreate already established relationships with friends he was able to have sex with in this version.

 

[omarsayed]

Will we wait too much for the NTR scenes to come in? My main draw to the game was for Grace to get NTRd lol.

Also, i see there was ntr scene in 0.3 changelog was it removed ??

 

[dgreen1108]

Wow this is totally different. MC is now a typical Chad wannabe with a big tool. First part of the new beginning is so damned boring watching this tool play minecraft and take the occasional phone call I want to Rage Quit. Oh well, it's your game. I'm going to move on. Good luck.

 

[c0mh1x]

Will we wait too much for the NTR scenes to come in? My main draw to the game was for Grace to get NTRd lol.

Also, i see there was ntr scene in 0.3 changelog was it removed ??

This version focused on the new story and the main incest/harem path, for the NTR there will be some in the next version. However, we can turn it off for those who do not want NTR.

 

[NitroxDarks]

Honestly, it can perfectly have all 4 options, you can do the typical warnings at the beginning, just trying to tell explicitly that each path is its own and that it won't influence others. Just like... trying to let the players know if you choose to have this or not, it will be a history of its own, and not just text changes and less or more scenes. Politician mode on.

 

[c0mh1x]

Honestly, it can perfectly have all 4 options, you can do the typical warnings at the beginning, just trying to tell explicitly that each path is its own and that it won't influence others. Just like... trying to let the players know if you choose to have this or not, it will be a history of its own, and not just text changes and less or more scenes. Politician mode on.

This is what is planned in part 2. But it mainly requires code and I didn't want to delay the release any further, but this is indeed what is planned. Several choices possible. Announced in advance.

 

[c0mh1x]

Wow this is totally different. MC is now a typical Chad wannabe with a big tool. First part of the new beginning is so damned boring watching this tool play minecraft and take the occasional phone call I want to Rage Quit. Oh well, it's your game. I'm going to move on. Good luck.

It's true. For the boring part at the beginning, if I have other feedback on it, I'll put a choice to skip the 4 days of waiting directly.

 

[YoungBull24]

Looks awesome mate, but definitly need more scene with family and his size first could be fun if MC go to shower and mom say it love don't be shy - and he show his shrimp after change she think he put something in pants and said again love don't be shy I've seen it before and he said not mom I can't, mom Ooh poor thing propably get embarassed when he flash his tiny penis in front of mom, okay son let's go shower together u can do it in your unerwear haha that's gonna be fun she think his paper or sock gonna be wet and go thru the underwear, MC go to shower with mom but she also wear little translucent unerwear to make sure MC don't get even more embarased, she clean his backs and MC do it same to mom after cleaning back his unerwear get full wet and been 50% visible, mom what happend ? looks bigger ? this is penis sleeve ? his penis was like 5cm when soft now looks like 25cm soft ! hmmm definitly sleeve dildo he want impresse girl at school and I catched him poor thing scene end.


sorryfor english and gramar if u want more I can create massive amout of stuff like that let me know mate

 

[c0mh1x]

Looks awesome mate, but definitly need more scene with family and his size first could be fun if MC go to shower and mom say it love don't be shy - and he show his shrimp after change she think he put something in pants and said again love don't be shy I've seen it before and he said not mom I can't, mom Ooh poor thing propably get embarassed when he flash his tiny penis in front of mom, okay son let's go shower together u can do it in your unerwear haha that's gonna be fun she think his paper or sock gonna be wet and go thru the underwear, MC go to shower with mom but she also wear little translucent unerwear to make sure MC don't get even more embarased, she clean his backs and MC do it same to mom after cleaning back his unerwear get full wet and been 50% visible, mom what happend ? looks bigger ? this is penis sleeve ? his penis was like 5cm when soft now looks like 25cm soft ! hmmm definitly sleeve dildo he want impresse girl at school and I catched him poor thing scene end.


sorryfor english and gramar if u want more I can create massive amout of stuff like that let me know mate

There will be multiple scenes in this style with Grace. You will indeed have to give me other ideas in this genre. I have some that are very similar in the same genre planned but if you have any ideas I am interested. =)

Edit, it goes without saying that Grace will be the main female character of the VN. =)

 

[Hell IDK]

Honestly I don't mind the new look and think it will work well for the VN.

 

[Lokeyyy]

So monthly/bi-monthly update?

 

[OGloc_420]

After playing again I still love the devs style. He's got a real talent and I think this new slant will be good.

Only thing that stood out as bad to me was the sisters hyper sexual talk with her brother. Seems way too out of pocket

 

[mario01]

This version focused on the new story and the main incest/harem path, for the NTR there will be some in the next version. However, we can turn it off for those who do not want NTR.

open path corruption?

 

[Oka+829]

Pregnant content in future?

 

[c0mh1x]

Will we wait too much for the NTR scenes to come in? My main draw to the game was for Grace to get NTRd lol.

Also, i see there was ntr scene in 0.3 changelog was it removed ??

There were some in the old version before the rework, I'm currently making new ones, they will be available in part 2 by the end of the month or beginning of November, this first part focused on the main story.

 

[c0mh1x]

Pregnant content in future?

Of course

 

[c0mh1x]

open path corruption?

a Path, blackmail/rought/tyran
to be honest, it's the one I've thought about the least and I haven't planned anything about it yet, especially because it's the one I've been asked to do the least.

I just planned that during multiple choices, there will always be a bad path... which will lead to coercion... blackmailing... rape...

 

[c0mh1x]

So monthly/bi-monthly update?

I don't know, I wanted to give fixed dates. And stick to them, but in the end the game isn't completely finished and is coming out anyway. I'm not sure that's the best choice. Let's say the next update will be at the end of the month, beginning of November, so we can say that monthly updates are planned if all goes well.

 

[mario01]

a Path, blackmail/rought/tyran
to be honest, it's the one I've thought about the least and I haven't planned anything about it yet, especially because it's the one I've been asked to do the least.

I just planned that during multiple choices, there will always be a bad path... which will lead to coercion... blackmailing... rape...

It would be a good idea to include it, as it doesn't support or is cornered, or that I should steal everything from them, etc. It has many qualities, especially if you plan to compile statistics on how it evolves, as I said, the alien whose body takes time because it has never trained, and if that evolution is not yet complete but is in beta phase, as your title says, from zero to hero.

 

[OneWayMissile]

You could easily mix the futa into the ntr, cant wait to see more ntr content